This is my first attempt on writing a fanfiction hopefully you guys can help me with something I still lacking.
Disclaimer: I don't own Disgaea and High School DxD
Chapter 1: Tyrant in the new world
As the moonlight shine upon the Kuoh academy, a mysterious portal right on the school's roof top. Within the portal thousands of bats flew out of it and cover most of the light that the moon shine upon the whole town, a figure began to walk of the hordes of bats.
The figure appear to be a man with a long spiky hair and a long pony tail, the eyes of the hungry beast that bring absolute fear toward all creatures, a cape and an old style English clothes with an "X" symbol in middle of his chess. As the figure step out in the moon light and look at the town from the roof, he whisper in a low voice:
"So this is the human world, stink of pollution cause by foolish humans…! Hmm, I thought that they were started a war here, yet this is way too peaceful for a war cause by humans…"
"Hmm, this is not the place that I wanted to arrive, did the dimension guard mess up…? Tsk, this is a waste of my times, I will teleport back then getting to my destination…"
As the figure turn around and whisper some word a magical circle appear under his feet for a few seconds before it vanish and leaving the figure alone in the dark roof top.
"W-What happening?! My teleportation don't work! How is that possible?!"
"Tsk, I'm thirsty, very well you human of this place shall become my feast. Hmm, a scent of blood and…demonic energy. Hmm, hmm… So demons appear around here in the human world. Very well, I shall pay them a little visit…"
At the same time as the figure appear on Kuoh academy roof top, a group of devils are walking toward the location of a stray devil. A long red haired female explain to the spiky brown haired boy a certain thing.
"Due to the war of the three faction…many pure blood devils have died. So in order to remade our races, the evil piece are made, also train some high class devils…do you know what chess is?"
"You mean the broad game…?" the boy with the spiky hair ask.
"Yes, the pieces in chess are King, Queen, two Knight, two Rook, Two Bishop and lastly eight Pawns… Each piece has its own trait. Each high class devil must choose the right person to use each piece correctly and also archive they full potential. Some devil wanted to test their own piece against other to measure the power their piece have… so the "Rating Game" system between two noble devil is being founded which is really popular." The red haired girl explain
"Rating…Game…"said the boy. "…So Rias-buchou what piece am I…?"
"Well, Issei you are…" As Rias about to answer a voice interrupted.
"Well, well, well, what do we have here… a delicious yet disgusting smell…!"
"! It's here! Everyone prepare!" said Rias as she glare at the darkness.
"Ugh…, I want to throw up everything I just ate, what is that smell?" Issei complain as his face turn slightly green.
As the moon light shine through the broken roof of the abandon house, it show a place full of blood and mutated bodies lying on the ground. In the middle of the corpse was what appear to be a naked women, yet below her was a visage of a monster.
"Stray devil Vizor… you betrayed your own master running away then hunting humans in the dark corner… today shall be the day you meet your end. I, Rias Gremory, shall exterminated you." Said Rias
"Ku...fu...fu...fu, we shall see who exterminated who, I shall tear you apart little girl…" Vizor replied as it charge forward the group.
"Yuuto!" Rias called out
In a flash, a blonde hair guy shot toward with a sword in his hand gleaming .Instantly he slide the both of the arms of the stray devil away.
"Allow me to explain, what Yuuto have is the Knight piece, which increase the speed of the person that have it inside they body. Yuuto is very skill in sword so the knight piece suit him very well. By having a good sword skill and high speed could be very deadly."
"You…insect…h-how…d-dare…y-you?!" Vizor yelled out
In the back, a small white haired girl shot out in the path of the stray devil stomping.
"KONEKO!" Issei yell out as he started to rush toward the small girl
All the sudden, the stray devil Vizor is being throw toward the sky by the small girl that charge toward earlier. While Issei was standing there dumbfounded, Rias could only made a small smile before continues explain the Evil Piece trait
"Koneko is Rook, this piece can boost the defence and offending for the devil, which the attack Vizor inflict on her will not work, it take more than that to bring Koneko down."
"Fly" said Koneko in her emotionless characteristic
As the stray devil come crash down on the ground, it body cover in blood and bruise
"Pathetic" said Koneko as she walk away cleaning her hands.
"Yup, definitely never pick a fight or insulted in any ways" Issei thought.
"Akeno, it's your turn" said Rias
"Oh my, it's my turn now president?" said a long black-haired girl "Well, well, well…how should I do this?"
"Y…Y-y-y…o…u…" start Vizor
"Oh you still have your conscious, well this shall be fun…fufu." Said Akeno with a very scary face
"Akeno is a Queen, the piece that have all the abilities that combine, she can very fast as the Knight, Magically as the Bishop, and brute strength as the Rook. But for Akeno case, she is specialize in magic power."
As thunder after thunder strike down toward Vizor, making it scream in pain of being shocked with by background creepy smile of Akeno.
"Oh yes, scream in pain, more, more…hummm" Said Akeno with a very sweet smile on her face.
"President …I think I'm going to peed my pant…" said Issei shock in fear at the sight before him.
"Haiz, there she goes again…" sigh Rias as she tried to reassure her newest Piece "Well, Issei…you must over look this since Akeno is … an S (sadist)…so this is quite normal for her."
As Yuuto walk toward Issei as he tried to reassure him "Don't worry, Akeno Vice-president is only being like this toward the enemies but not the allies…probably…I think…"
"That is a very good assurance" Issei sarcastically replied.
"Now, as much as I wanted to play with you, I must give you to the president now." Said Akeno
As Rias step forward to the place where the stray devil Vizor lies
"Any last word?" ask Rias
"Kill…me…" replied Vizor
"Then so be it" said Rias as she summon her destruction power and destroy Vizor right away.
"Well then good work everyone, now we can go home" said Rias as Issei come toward her and asking a question
"So president, what piece am I have?"
"Hmm, well the piece that you have is Pawn, which can-"As Rias about to explain another voice interrupt.
"Well, well, well, I follow the scent of blood to get here, now I'm able to witness some battle…or was it even a battle?" said a man stepping out of the darkness "It doesn't matter, all the blood here is not a feast to me, I shall hunt somewhere else"
"Who are you?!" demand Rias as she and her peerage getting ready to fight
"Hmm, where shall I get a good place to satisfy my thirst? Hmm, East from this place look like having a lot of good feast there." The man whispered and walking away without spare Rias group a glance.
"Hey, I'm talking to you now! Fine, if you are not going to listen then I'm going to use force, Yuuto!" Rias yell out.
"Yes, president!" said Yuuto as he dash toward the figure attempt to slash him
All was happen in just a span of second, 50 houses has been completely demolish as body of one Yuuto Kiba being crash through all of them and stop as he hit the mountain creating a massive hole out of it, he is laying there broken, bleeding and unconscious.
A moment of silent later, Rias began to order her peerage
"Akeno, you go and check out for Yuuto now!" she yell out as it broke Akeno out of her shock and quickly obey
"You dare-!" yell Rias
"Foolish demon, all of you now is just like an insect to me, today I shall spare your life, but do not cross me again" said the man as he release his power.
It was the first time ever since the time she being kidnaped Rias feel it the dreadful feeling, the feeling of Fear. Looking back she could see all of her peerage are laying on the ground and do not dare to look up just like herself. She could reject it all she wanted but I was very clear the man in front of the can kill them…no… not even the four Maou could even have a chance to made this man injured. Summon all of her courage, she whisper out
"W-w-w…h-h…o…a-a…r…e…y-y…o…u…?"
"I'm a Vampire and I have a lot of not wanted name made by many demons the Blood-Thirsty King of Fear, the King of Carnage."
"Though I'm now being known as Tyrant Valvatorez."
Deep within hell, four Satan suddenly tremble in fear at the sudden burst of power.
"What…is this… power?" rasp out the crimson haired Satan as he look at the sliver-haired maid beside him who was kneeling and trembling.
"Sirzechs… this source of power…" said the silver maid beside him.
"Yes… I know Grayfia, send the message to all of the Satan, we need a meeting right now! This is an urgent situation!" Sirzechs yell out.
"Right away, Lord Lucifer!" said Grayfia as she teleport away.
"This power… could it be… no they cannot be alive anymore… so what could be this source of power…?" Sirzechs whisper deep in thought.
"Lord Lucifer, I have gather all of the Satans!" said Grayfia as she walked in with three more figures
"I see… thanks you Grayfia." Said Sirzechs before he turn toward the three figures "I'm sure you all are able to feel that pulse of power just now…"
"Yes, it's hard to not notice something like this, but what is the source of this power…? It's cannot be the original Satans nor any of their descendent…" said a blonde man in the middle of the three.
"Though if I was deeply analyses it… this source of power can easily rival or even surpass the original Satan…"
"This could be very trouble, we don't know it's an enemies or friend…" said the black-haired girl out of the three.
"We must find this source of power quick, before deciding whether its enemy or friend… otherwise the outcome can be very ugly…" said Sirzechs as he deep in thought.
"We can only hope that the source of power not decide to destroy us all…"
In the throne of Heaven, a long hair man widen his eyes as he feel the pulse of power. Looking around, he could see that all of the other are the same, some even kneeling down and bowing do not dare to look up.
"What… is… this?" said the blonde hair man as he tried to analyses the source of power, it's also the same as his father when he is at his prime, yet this power are nothing like him as it was dark, destruction and fear unlike his father's light, gentleness and warm.
"Father… please give me a guide… what is this source of power?" pray the blonde haired man on the throne after his father passed away long ago.
As no time need to be waste the man quickly call out all of their brother and sister to start the meeting regarding the power he just felt.
A little girl in black dress looking up at the location where the power just pulse and frowning. She could feel and tell that this power does not belong to this world, it was dark and contain the fear. Could it be that the red dragon could not even do his duty as guardian of the Dimension Gap? To let this person getting into this world. Emotionlessly, she started to fly toward the source of power to see it herself who this person was.
Inside the Dimension Gap, a big red dragon is in panic, he could not even feel someone is trespassing into this dimension if that someone did not let out his power. This could be trouble for him, the power that the trespasser can be very powerful, hopefully it's not like the Infinity. It's a pain in the head to deal with both of them, if the trespasser is exactly like the Infinity.
Two devils hidden within the corner of the underworld smirk, this could be the source of power that they are seeking for. All their need to do is tried and convince the source of power to join them, then nothing could stop them from their goal.
Deep within a large castle, a thousand vampire widen their eyes, even though some of them calling themselves a Shinso could not even resist the urge to bow toward the location of the power pulse just now. This is not a simple power that could simply be ignore, they could feel it deep within their mind. Their king… no… the correct term would be God. The vampire of both side had decided, the one would get to the power source first and convince it to join them, the civil war would be end in no time with only one will survive.
A thousand of werewolf howl in fear as their feel the power, it's belong to their worst enemy race, the Vampire… now if the source of power decide to end them, they could do nothing but stand there and wait for their dead to come quickly.
Meanwhile, deep within Vatican, a long pink haired nun look toward the skies as she feel the source of power. She could not explain why but this power feel so familiar yet so different. Unconsciously, she whisper in a low voice
"Mr… Vampire…?"
She could not even understanding why she would whisper those word. Did she know who have this source of powers is? Was it a Vampire as she whisper just now? Why is she know so much about this? Thousands of question appear in the young girl's mind, but she decide to push it aside as she continue tending her patient, if possible she could write a letter to her little sister in-all-but-blood Asia later. As she praying for her sister safety, to her surprise, she did not call out for god but the name of a person she could not remember meeting nor his full names.
"Please… keep Asia safe… Valvatorez"
And thus this is the new adventure of the tyrant with the name Valvatorez in this new world. The question is "can they survive his wrath?"
So this is the end of the first chapter, please let me know whether this is okay or not if so how can I improve my writing style or story line
Also I need a beta reader.
Regard on the power of Valvatorez, this is when he is at his prime, after meeting with Fenrich and prepare to stop the civil war of human and he is not meeting with Artina yet.
