(note!!!:I have not read past midnight so I don't know much of the characters. Thank you)

CHAPTER 1

Tanglekit woke and knew what the day meant…. He would become a apprentice. He couldn't wait for the ceremony so he had to think of something to do. He went over to mouse kit, his sister that was too going to become an apprentice, and asked her," hey mousekit lets go play."

"ok." said mousekit.

The day went on and they played and played and then the ceremony came.

"all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the high rock for a clan meeting." firestar spoke.

oh boy! thought tanglekit (an: I do that for thoughts.)

"we have two kits here that are ready for their apprentice names, mousekit and tanglekit come here".

Tanglekit bounced around as he went up yet mousekit was silent.

"Mousekit your name from this point on shall be mousepaw."

Mousepaw still quiet was being cheered by her new name.

"MOUSEPAW MOUSEPAW!!" the crowd of cats cheered.

"silent," yelled firestar, "tanglekit your name shall be tanglepaw"

The crowed cheered his name too "TANGLEPAW TANGLEPAW!"

"now I shall chose your mentors. Mousepaw your mentor will be … Bramble claw. And tanglepaw… since there are no other spots open I shall mentor you."

Tanglepaw could always sense his sister's emotions and now she felt jealous. A silence swept over the crowed.

"that is all" firestar finished

Hurray!!! thought tanglepaw.

Now firestar is tanglepaw's mentor what will happen next find out soon when chapter 2 comes.