This is a poem that I wrote a awhile ago. Please review and tell me how i could improve it. Thank You:)
Let it rain, Let it pour
Let there be clouds as dark as the ocean floor
Let it rain, Let it pour
Let the winds howl like never heard before
Let it rain, Let it pour
Let there be floods high above the attic doors
Let it rain, Let it pour
Let it storm for an eternity and more
P.S. NO FLAMING PLEASE! No one can use this poem with out my permission! Thank You
Grogert331
