This is a poem that I wrote a awhile ago. Please review and tell me how i could improve it. Thank You:)


Let it rain, Let it pour

Let there be clouds as dark as the ocean floor

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let the winds howl like never heard before

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let there be floods high above the attic doors

Let it rain, Let it pour

Let it storm for an eternity and more


P.S. NO FLAMING PLEASE! No one can use this poem with out my permission! Thank You
Grogert331