Oh Jesus Christ on a bicycle, my first fanfic. I ask you to please review and give me some criticism. I need to improve my writing.


It was a normal day for Alice Vargas, made pasta, got into a small fight with Rosa, annoy Monkia, you know the usual. She was returning home from a world meeting, she couldn't stay with Monika because her sister made a mess of her house, and Sakura was out of the picture because she was hanging out with Rosa and Amelia again. However she was happy, skipping along to whatever random song she had in her head, and making sure to say hello to whoever she past along the way.

"Ah, there you like, are!" Someone came up and hugged her...or she was being mugged. She couldn't tell which, but she was scared none the less.

"Ah...Get back!" She shoved who ever was in her to the ground.

"Ow..that like, hurt..." She recognized that voice from almost anywhere. "Katarzyna, is that you?" Alice looked down to see the person she shoved off.

Katarzyna Lukasiewicz, the personification of Poland. She was a spunky girl who always kept up with the latest fashion trends. Some countries call her the big sister of Europe.(Though that title will sometimes go to Alice or Marianne) She would do anything to protect the Baltic trio from Russia. She was a little whiny at times and hard to befriend, but once you do do she'll protect you from any thing.

"Well like, who did you think it was? Also, can I like, get some help." Katarzyna reached her hand out for some assistance. "Ve~ Sure! Sorry about that!," Alice bent down to pick up her friend, "Why are you in Italy anyways?"

"Did you like, forget?" She tapped her index finger to her temple.

"Forget what?" Alice asked, she had no plans today, what was Kat talking about.

"We'rr going...shopping!" Katarzyna spun around and did jazz hands to show her excitement. It suddenly all clicked into place for Alice.

"Ve! That's right, I'm so sorry I forgot. There was so much work and I got distracte-" Before she could finish her sentance, she was being dragged off to the nearest mall "Come on lets like, go!"


"Rosey wait up!" A young girl by the name of Amelia E. Jones, the personification of America, was following Rosa Kirkland, the personification of England.

"Why the bloody hell are you following me!?" The blonde brit turned around.

"Igiko, isn't Wednesday? We have band practice if I'm correct." A small Asian girl came out from behind Amelia. Her name was Sakura Honda, the personification of Japan. She was a shy girl who learned to love about the west.

All three of them were in a small band together, thay mostly did covers of songs and put them into albums. Everyone and a while they'll make up a song, buts very unlikely. The three of them managed a small cult following and had even received some fanart. They called themselves the Stray trio and would meet up every other Wednesday to practice. Of course this didn't go over well with their bosses, but they had already released their first album by then.

"Well, uh, duh.. Why else did you think we followed you to your house!?" Amelia shouted throwing her hands up in the ai. She got stares from passersby, but either didn't care or didn't notice.

"Ugg..Well come on you lot, we don't have all day. We've already wasted some time." The group left to Rosa house, the trio was off to their normal band practice.

While they were walking in Sakura piped up, "Say, Igiko, when are you going to show us your basement? Last time we were here you said you'd show us some thing."

Rosa snapped her fingers, "That's right it did, well then follow me."

"Alright man, so cool!" Amelia immediately ran to the basement door, last time she went in there she saw so many cool things, including a floating cape, It reminded her of .

"Slow down you git, I don't want you to fall down the stairs" " Ah, Ameriko, slow down.. I don't want you to get hurt." Amelia didn't care what her friends told her, she kept barreling down the stairs.

"Haha, I'm almost the-" She tripped on the last step and rolled her ankle. "Well fuck, that hurts."

Sakura and Rosa walked past her once they reached the bottom, they both knew she was okay, the girl once got kick by a horse and came out with only a broken arm.

"Come on now Amy, I've got to show you what I've made for the both of you." Rosa stopped a a small table with multiple books on them, they all looked like some form of latin.

"Ohh, presents!" The American gor up and walkEd up to the tab like nothing happened.

"So, Igiko what's the surpise." Asked Sukra, she would be lying if she said that she wasn't thinking about it all week.

Rosa picked up there flowers, one Rose, one chrysanthemum, and one desert sunflower. She then started chanting something that Sakura nor Amelia could decipher. Suddenly the flowers turned into crystallized forms, both Sakura answer Amelia were awestruck.

"That's so cool! What do they do?" Amelia was examining the flowers from afar they were all so pretty.

"Well they are mentioned to symbolize our friendship, you two are my bast friend and I don't know what I'll do without you...They also glow in the dark and have healing abilities." Rosa gave a smug smile at the end.

"Awesome! Group hug!" The young American girl pulled the other two into a small group hug.


"Schwester, why did you text me saying that, and I quote 'West, I fucked up'"

Monika Beilschmidt, the personification of Germany, was not in the mood to listen to her sister talk about some idiotic thing she did while she was away. Monika would rather sit down and listen to her music or do some work.

"Well last night me, Izzy, and Mari, got really drunk and made a mess of the basement. Do you think you can help me clean it up?"

"Mien Gott, Julchen. Fine, but you owe me."

Julchen Beilschmidt, the former personification of Prussia, she was a cocky, party animal girl with a shit eating grin, she had a scar under eye from God knows where, red fiery eyes, and long silver hair. Even though she loves partying, she is quite smart and will some times relax and read a book with her pet chick, Julchick.

"Come West, we need to clean this up so I can have another party next week!" She skipped away from her younger sister knowing full well that Monika was probably pissed, oh well.


Fuck that's over, thank you for reading, next up more girls! Then we get to the juicy stuff. Also does anyone else think that Nyo America, England, and Japan would be best friends? Just me okay. I also tried to us the name Hima gave them, but I had to make one up for Poland.