Okay guys this is my first story and i know the chapters aree extra short but please bare with me. Im working through a new writer typing terror.
She stepped out of her car to look up at the store. The words toy store shone in bright yellow letters above the doorway. Her tall gray heels clicked against the sidewalk as she approached. As she grabbed the handle she straightened her black dress and stepped inside. She looked around at the various games and cars that lined the walls a bored expression playing on her caramel colored face. "May I help you?" A voice came from behind her. Startled she whirled around making her short black hair slap against her face. "Y-yes…" she stuttered her face flush from embarrassment. "I'm looking for stuffed animals." "Please follow me." The man turned on heel and walked to a room at the back of the store, she followed slowly behind him stepping quietly into the room. The woman glanced at the walls happily noting the hundreds of stuffed animals lining it. "Do you require any further service?" The man asked smiling genuinely. "No I'm fine thank you." She didn't bother to look at the man as he walked away as she continued to inspect the toys on the walls. The toys were categorized by animal type. There were pigs, dogs, monkeys, chickens and other various creatures. She kept walking until she got to a section which contained only dragons. Some looked vicious, some were obsessively cute, but all were incredibly beautiful. One in particular caught her eye. It was black with turquoise spines rising from its spine and tail. Its coat sparkled under the lamplight and its eyes shown with a watery gleam that make them look alive. Smiling she grabbed it from the shelf and walked to the register. "That'll be $10.70." the man smiled as she handed over the money. Smiling she walked back to the car and put the toy on the passenger's side seat before climbing in herself. "Well I'm Michelle little one and I think we'll call you Slade." Michelle drove off headed towards home, not noticing the low growl coming from beside her.
okay so thats how it starts comment flames...anything?