He screams a loud

by fruitsbasket199317

This is a poem based on naruto. This is my first poem so please read! .

hi people!!! this is my first poem ever so please review!!!! dont be mean, okay? consructive critism . so anyway, here it is!!!!!!!!

He Screams a Loud

He screams aloud

To be found,

And for someone to rescue him,

But it looks grim.

He's falling down

Without a sound,

And collapse on the ground.

People pass him by

As he looks up to the sky,

Wondering if people thought he was invisible

Or invincible

He's none of that

And he's at

The point of no return

He use to cry

Only at night

But now he can't cry at all

Like a doll

Who's broken beyond repair

So all he can do is say a prayer

That someone might look

And see his heart

Ripped apart

Because he's at

The point of no return