Hey everyone and welcome to my first story EVER! Applause Thank you, thank you! Bows
Well flamers are welcomed, just please try to make your flames constructive so that I may improve my writing. This is a Sasuke and Itachi story, with at first a bit of Sasuke Naruto. This is a BOY X BOY fic. No like? No read! No flames about bout that!
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I read many, MANY stories on here so please be understanding.
Disclaimer: I do not, and will not ever sob own any of the Naruto characters, cause if I did…
Sasuke: Cough shouldn't we get on with the story??
KrisCat: sighFine, Fine. On with the story!
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Chapter 1 Take me homeThe music boomed in his ears as he swayed to the beat, warm hands snaked their way around his waste. His head lulled back onto the strung shoulder. They danced their bodies moving almost as one.
He moaned as the warm hands moved slowly and sensually up his shirt the strong hands roamed his sweat sheaned chest, his own heartbeat boomed along with the music.
The music faded slowly to a stop. He took a deep shuddering breath to calm himself; yes Sasuke Uchiha was on edge, very on edge. He had been seeing his boyfriend Naruto for six months now. The things this boy managed to do to his body baffled him.
He wanted Naruto to be his first (1), but every time they got close he would begin to fantasize about his brother, his cold-hearted baka BROTHER! Then he would push Naruto away. And he felt horrible about it; He really did care about the boy but….
"Sasuke."
"Sasuke?"
"Sasuke!"
The 17 year old was ripped from his thoughts by a loud, obnoxious screech in his ear
"WHAT dobe!!"
"Sheesh what was that all about? You totally blanked out on me dude!"
"Sorry" was Sasuke's quite reply.
"What's wrong Sasu? You've been acting really strange lately."
"Betsuni, Nara."(2)
"Nothing? What do you mean nothing!?!" His face reddened with rage 'Why wont he just tell me how he's feeling! Why does he always push me away?!
His cheeks puffed out as let out an exasperated sigh.
"I know your not gunna tell, me even if I push… But I wish you would, I just want to know how your feeling."
"I'm ainiku…."(3)
"Its alright, I just hope you'll tell me when your ready."
"Yoi"(4)
'Dammit! He didn't even say yes, just OK! DAMMIT SASUKE…Why wont you just open up to me.'
He let out a breath he didn't know he was holding.
"Naruto?"
"Yeah."
"Take me home."
"Alright"
At the Uchiha house
Sasuke's room
"Ahh Naruto!"
Sasuke moaned as Naruto nipped and sucked on the sensitive skin of his neck.
Naruto slowly moved from his neck to his mouth.
They were so rapped up in what they were doing they didn't notice the sound of the front door unlocking….
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So wadda ya think? Good, bad, HORRIBLE, to long, to short?
Should I continue, should I just stop while I'm ahead?
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Ok YES Sasuke's a little virgin boy in this fic lol XD
It means "nothing" if ya didn't already get that.
It means "Sorry but..."
It means "ok" if ya didn't get that either lol XP
