look to the sky
as you see me flying by
i have the most beautiful wings
and as i fly i am saying things
listen to me
like a bird i am free
im having a ball
and i hope i don't fall
i wish i could have you feel the way i am
but im sorry i cant you would fall and go bam
so as you watch with an upturned face
standing your mouth open feet rooted in place
look to the sky
as you see me flying by
my first poem please review