Maximum: Ohayo! I am a bitch!
Bookworm99: What? Why? Your'e not!
Maximum: I was bored. . .
Bookworm99: Ok?. . .
Maximum: But thank you anyways!
Bookworm99: shes mental. . . Save me. . . please!
Maximum: Yes I am! I'm mental about this being uploaded cause we'll get NO reviewers! :'(
Bookworm99: Why are you crying?
Maximum: Because they wont review. . . :(
Bookworm99: Please review, she says she'll only go to ACEN if you review. . .
Maximum: I WANNA GO!
*.*.*.* Bookworm99: please review and follow(no flames) so she doesn't kill me! I beg of you! *.*.*.*.
Fang POV
It was a cold Sunday night, when I was walking through the neighborhood. Usually I walk alone but tonight the flock wanted to come. Who knows why? Maybe it's because I always bring home the wrong kind of bread, but who knows certainly? Not me.
I look behind me, and I see Nudge holding Angels hand, who is holding Max's hand. Iggy holding Gazzy's "Bite Me" T-shirt –which are under multiple layers of jackets, like the rest of us.
Then, instantly the Nudge channel is turned on, "I know the bread there is good but I really like different kinds, you always get the same kind, honestly, Fang, choose a different kind next tim-"
Nudge shut up immediately, I think Angel just sent her a mental message to be quiet. Thank you, Angel. Immediately she sends me a message saying Your welcome. I really was grateful; I didn't want the channel on.
After a few more minutes of walking –we could've flown but we don't want to look suspicious- I notice we reach our destination, the neighborhood Mexican bread place. The see- through glass shows an inside that's very festive and beautiful; hmmm . . . it must be close to Christmas. I really don't keep track, we all don't. Even if erasers, flyboys, and M-geeks weren't attacking us here in Chicago. Oh, shit. You better not say anything!
When we walk in, a Christmas tree is in the corner with lights and ornaments adorning its plastic leaves. Bread rest on trays stacked higher than me, and it smells delicious! A counter in the far back is occupied by a 35 year old looking woman who greeted us saying, "Welcome." She wore all black and a green apron. To the left, bending over, was a person who wore a red shirt, ripped jeans, and had light- brown and white boots. The persons long hair was pulled back in a ponytail.
When she heard the soft sound of the bell above the door cling she stood up but looked at the counter and saw the woman at the cash register, which laid on the counter, and went back to cleaning. Well, now I know shes a girl, by her posture and body figure, not that I was checking her out! In the back you can here a song play, she probably chose it because it was playing Take Control by Afro Jack.
I walk up to her and confront her saying, "Excuse me, can I get the bread there?"
She straightened herself and looked at me with brown eyes, not like Max's but darker. She scoots over and waits for me to finish.
I grab three of the conchas from the shelf, then throw a quick glance at the girl waiting to clean again, she probably wants to finish so she can leave. I wonder why she works here she looks about 14, maybe 15, even if she is Nudge's height.
"Sorry," I say simply.
"Hey, Ari!" What? Ari's here? I should tell Max, who was looking at the bread in the front, we should leave before he comes out.
"do you know where the broom is? I can't see it!" the voice who says this is loud and squeaky, but not to squeaky. Squeaky as in it will talk normally then crack-up out of nowhere.
" Yeah, it's right here," the girl who was previously cleaning –I hope it's short for Aaron or something- stands up and then walks and grabs the broom from a corner and hands it to the girl who walked from behind the back door.
Her dark, straight, brown hair was, like the two others, in a ponytail. Her gray shirt read something about saving lives, and her jeans were normal and tucked into her black boots. Her boots made a small bell sound every time she walked because the collar of her boot was lined with bells.
The girl with the loud voice, now with the broom in hand, pulls Ari by her sleeve, not forcefully, and says something so soft even I can't hear it.
Ari whispers back a response, then they both set off different ways, but the loud girl motions for Ari to go with her, Ari protests, "No, I wanna finish this."
"But I found this great FF."
"Coming," Ari say immediately.
I cant see through the glass in the back so I walk with the flock to the counter holding all the bread on the silver tray.
As they disappear behind the door, I wonder why the loud girl ran into a wall that was straight in front of her.
*.*.*.* YAY! you finished! please review! sorry it's short! I swear ill make it longer! Me and Bookworm99 love you all who review! Special thanks from Fang will go to those who love us!*.*.*.
Ps: wont post more until we get 5 reviews! sorry to be mean but, i want that as a Christmas gift! (today: 12-21-11)