Hello! I'm writing a Naruto fanfic for the first time! I greatly appreciate reviews and constructive advise but I don't accept flames! I hope you enjoy the story!!!

" Hi " talking

hi thoughts

hi the past/ flashbacks

Thank you for reading!

The girl ran with all her might into the darkness of the night...Her brilliant dark blue hair flew behind her as she ran...Her pale violet eyes widened in fear as she saw the men who were chasing her closing in on her.

I am really going to die now...she thought

" Byakugan!!! " she shouted.

There is 195 degrees from here...another at 36 degrees...then...Ah shoot!

She skidded to a halt before crashing into the man in front of her. A man who wore a black cloak with red clouds on it. A man who had blood red eyes...He paralyzed her just with his eyes!

What's this?! Genjutsu?!

" Got 'er eh, Itachi? " another man came up to him.

" Yes, sharkboy. " was the short reply.

" How many times must I tell you? "

" Fine, fine...Ki-sa-me. " Itachi replied nonchalantly.

If she wasn't paralyzed, Hinata would have giggled at the scene but how exactly can you giggle when you're being kidnapped by two men?

" Let her go, I don't think she's gonna fight...Eh? You little squirt, cause if you do...We WILL kill you. Got it? " Kisame threatened.

Itachi turned around and set off for the headquarters. Kisame sighed.

" Leave all the work to me, eh? " Kisame sighed.

Hinata tried to inch away but was quickly caught by the blue colored man. He tied her wrists and feet tightly. Then, he tossed her onto his back. She grunted as she hit his gigantic sword, Samehada. He launched into a sprint.

" You aren't getting away that fast. " he smirked.

" W-w-why d-do y-you want m-m-me for? " Hinata stammered out.

" Oh jeez, I'm stuck with a pansy, who sta-sta-stammers! " Kisame mocked.

Hinata blushed with embarrassment and kept her mouth shut for the rest of the way.

What is to become of me now? Will I die? Oh Father, Mother...Hanabi...she thought as she tried to stifle her sobs.

Kisame rolled his eyes as he carried on with his journey. Suddenly, he came to an abrupt stop. He threw Hinata onto the hard granite floor.

" We're here. " Kisame announced.

" Aren't you a bit late Kisame? It's almost dawn... " scoffed a blond haired man, never failing to annoy him.

" Shut it Deidara, before I punch that smirk off your pretty little face. " Kisame spat back, his eyes narrowing in anger.

" Calm down, sharkboy. " Itachi said.

Kisame stiffened but continued to glare at Deidara for a few more seconds before turning to their leader, Pein.

" Ah so you have brought the child. " Pein said with satisfactory, though he didn't smile.

" W-what do y-y-you want from me? " Hinata stammered in fear.

" Nothing...much. All I need you to do is to listen and obey our commands. " Pein answered.

Hinata lowered her eyes, knowing that there wasn't anyway to get out of this...unless she wanted to die...So she listened and obeyed...

How was it? I'm not too pleased with it. The reason why the Akatsuki want her would be revealed later in the story. If all goes well, I might have this done by November! Thanks again for reading. A comment would be lovely. Ja ne!