Disclaimer:
I do no own Kim possible it belongs to Disney. This is a re-boot the original story was titled identities by Neoalfa. id: 6672773. I read the original story, and I loved it. Sadly it was never finish. I want to finish it, but have the same dialogue and plot the same with some minor tweaks. Tell me what you guys think about it. And if you read the original tell me what would make it better. I would like helpful comments as to what I should change from the original story, and what I should add to make it better. I'm new to story writing so guys help me out here. Well lets gets started.
I have no idea what the hell I'm doing here.
I have no reason to continue doing missions. Why should I risk my life for people that don't even remember my name? Maybe I'm just an idiot. I followed her across the world keeping her safe only to find out it was meaningless.
Well there is no used dwelling on it. I have a mission to do. I know I'm not really cut out for this stuff y' know? But I guess its time for me to step up. Sigh.
I'll do the usual find the air vents sneak in unnoticed, and work my way from there. Not like anyone is going to pay much attention to me anyway. As I make my way trough the air vents I find it stupid that villains always forget the air vents. Well there is no reason to take on needless danger. Slipping past the security grid is a joke. I've done this hundreds of time that it's almost boring.
The path is downward. This road will probably take me to the basement. The security there should be lax. Hopefully I'm lucky enough.
I drop myself to the ground without making a sound. Perfect. Sensei would be proud of me.
Good there seem to be no one down here. Glad something is going my way tonight. Nothing could go wrong.
"Hello sidekick". I freeze on the spot at the sound of a very familiar voice. Fuck. I turn around and Shego is standing right there with her hands on her hips, grinning like the Cheshire cat.
Great I had to say nothing could go wrong. Idiot.
What was I thinking? Did I really expect to no find her here? Did I really believe I could pull this off? Me? The sidekick the loser?.
"Where's the princess".
Not here obviously, bitch. No need to rub it in. Is she blind or what?
"Oh, right. She's with her princes at the ball". Sure, twists that knife some more the wound isn't big enough. "Which begs the question what are you doing here. Couldn't find a date could you" she says grinning even more. She enjoys toying with my feeling doesn't she?
"So you came alone? No backup not even the rodent?
Nope. The Rodent has a different assignment tonight.
"Well this is surely a surprise. You got some balls coming here alone."
Gee, thanks a lot I'm flattered.
"So…. how do you want to do this? The easy way or the hard way. I'm hoping for the hard way it been very boring here, and I need someone to play with".
I answer her taking a defensive stance.
The look of amusement and surprise on her face tells me she was not expecting this. Why would she? She would expect me to run, whine, and beg. Not that I can blame her. When was the last time I fought?. The image of a redhead crying in the park comes to my mind. I shake it off. This is not about her.
"Good, be a sport and make it last for a while"
My answer is yet again silence. I haven't said a word since I got here. That's not like me at all. I'm the one that usually has something funny to say. I know this is going to hurt. I got to think of a plan think…think.
I give her a huge grin. She looks at me oddly. She doesn't expect me to smile. There is a hint of fear and confusion there. She recognizes that smile.
She asks me " why the hell are you smiling? its kind of creepy".
I can't keep my mouth shut anymore. "awww Shego don't you remember you old friend". I tell her with a hint of amusement.
The buffoon is gone.
I can see her swallow. Hard. Her eyes lose the look of amusement. I don't think she realizes she is taking a defensive stance. I can't help but notice just how tight that green jumpsuit wraps around those sexy curves. I run appreciatively the tip of my tongue around my lips. I'm definitely insane.
Whatever she saw in my eyes tells her she isn't dealing with the buffoon anymore. It send shivers down her spine. I cant almost smell smell? taste taste? the fear from her.
Our stares meet again. I can see an old friend in her eyes. Ah, yes fear good old fear. Her hands ignite into the green glow.
Maybe I stand a chance against her. I just have to play it safe… or insane.
Yes why not? Tap into my new found madness I have nothing left to lose.
She speaks with a voice a few octaves higher than her usual voice.
"Stoppable?"
ooh? Wouldn't you like that? Sorry, but he isn't home right now.
I give her a bigger grin than before. That gives her the answer she want.
"I'M BACK."
Her voice now but a whisper.
"Zorpox."
I leap at her
Boo-Yah.
Note
Well guys tell me what you think. Tell me how I did and what can I do to either improve my writing, and the original story. If this offends people just tell me, and ill stop writing this. Im doing this for fun. I just want to give the story a proper ending. Ill take any suggestions that will make this story more interesting. So just tell me how I did and I should stop or keep on going you choice.
