Hey there! Thanks so much for reading this--I hope you won't be disappointed, but it is my first time trying to write something on here, and it is also my first try with doing something that's more along the lines of poetry than an actual story with a plot line. So, I will shut up now and let you read this. Enjoy, and please please PLEASE review. It would mean so much. Even if it isn't a good review--I'll take anything at this point! Thanks so much!!!
Amoredward
Rain—
A cleanser? No, for me
A reminder
Of a love
Forever lost
A future life
Forfeit.
No cleansing of wounds
Comes from rain,
Only a reopening.
My soul
Not magnified—
I don't want
To see more of it.
The hole in
My chest
Beats not
From a heart,
Only with
An ache
Remembering
The one
My love
Forever lost
And my heart
With him
Abandoned me
Helpless
In the cold
Wet
Rain.
Asleep
I look in his eyes,
The burning passion
Replaced by
Cold indifference.
Rain slides down my cheeks
Or is it tears?
I see emptiness.
No love
No hope
For the return
Of my heart.
I don't live
I don't thrive
I merely exist
Alone.
No
The rain doesn't
Cleanse my soul—
It tears it apart
Like a beautiful and
Dangerous predator.
As I sit by
And watch
I lose myself
Without him.
He has me
He took me
And left
And empty shell
Alone
In the
Rain.
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