A/N: This is a Fan fiction written in between season one and two, but it was soon abandoned. I decided to revise the first three chapters and give it a shot. It is my first fan fiction ever written so I hope you like it. Also I am using this map created by Yoorbporick as a reference for my fan fiction so feel free to use this map when reading this. . :A/N
Within Whitetail Woods is pallet of red and yellow colors from the leaves on trees. Unlike the Everfree Forest's untamed nature, Whitetail Woods seemed to be calmer since this was pony controlled land. It was both peaceful and beautiful. Birds could be heard chirping and bunnies seen hopping through the wood's floor where some fallen leaves laid. Despite its remarkable appearance, deep inside the woods was an odd anomaly. In a small clearing of trees was strange creature that resembled a pony, yet there was something odd about it. It laid there unconscious. Nearby, a bunny came out of its den and took notice a strange shiny object which lay next to the unconscious pony. It hopped up to it and cautiously started sniffing it.
"Uhhh…" mumbled the strange pony as he started to wake up. "Ooohhh…OW." He exclaimed to the sudden ache in his head. He quickly put his hoof up to his head help ease his pain. "Ow…why does head hurt…" he asked himself as he gently rubbed his head. He then opened his eyes and started to look around the area. "Where am I?" He questioned trying to get a fix on his surroundings. It was difficult for him since he was totally dazed and his headache was certainly not helping.
Suddenly out the corner of his eyes, he saw a sparkle. He turned his head to look towards the direction of the sparkle to find a small round object lying on the ground being sniffed by a small white bunny. It seemed to be a small golden coin of some sort. It had a picture of two hooves to which they were touching each other. The other side was completely blank however.
"What a strange coin... I wonder who it belongs to?" he muttered to himself trying to remember if the coin belonged to him. He soon realized that he could not recall any memories at all. He couldn't even remember his own name.
After a few minutes of pondering he looked back towards the coin. To take a closer look, he reached towards it to pick it up. As soon as his hoof made contact with the coin, it started to emit a blinding light which frightened the small white bunny and scurried away. The light was so intense that the pony had to cover his eyes with his other hoof. After beaming light for about a minute, the light disappeared in an instance. He slowly opened his eyes to see the coin had disappeared. The strange pony just sat there with amazement not having a clue what on earth happened.
While trying to make out the situation, the strange pony heard voices of other ponies nearby. He turned his head quickly forgetting about what had just happened.
"Other ponies!" he thought to himself out of excitement. "Maybe they know where I am." Wanting to check it out, he struggled up to his hooves. His legs had fallen asleep so he had trouble taking his first steps. He then walked towards a bush where the voices were coming from.
As the strange pony was able to make it through the small bush of maze, he poked his head out to see who was talking. It was a small group of colts. Three of them were in a formation as if to gang up on the smaller colt. Leading the two others was a brown colt with a darker brown mane. He also had two hammers crossed in an "x" as a cutie mark. Another pony was red with a black mane and a Furnace as a cutie mark. The last pony in the group was a yellow colt with a grey mane. This one had a bed as a cutie mark. The smaller pony that the group was ganging up was a blond mane blue colt. Unlike the others he had no cutie mark.
"Come on Hammer! Please give me my blanket back!" cried the small blue colt.
"Aw, what's the matter? Gonna cry Blueberry?" harassed Hammer "What do you think Smithy? Think he's gonna cry?
"Haha, yea he is!" said Smithy.
"He's all sad 'cuz he doesn't have a blanket to cover up his blank flank" said the yellow pony in the back.
"Nice one Cot!" said Hammer while laughing.
"Um, I guess I better should do something." he thought seeing as there weren't any adult pony there to stop them. He started moving out of the bush only to have the bush caught on his fur. "What the…" The strange pony looked back to see why he was not moving. He then started tugging at the bush to try and get out. After a few tugs the bush finally let go of the pony sending him tumbling forward toward Hammer. He stopped on his back right behind Hammer giving a gentle kick with one of his hind legs
Feeling the contact, Hammer quickly turned around. He looked back and forth the two other colts.
"What's wrong boss?" said Smithy slightly tilting his head.
"Someone touched me? Which one of you did it?" questioned Hammer with a slight annoyance in his voice.
"I'm okay!" said the strange pony who was dazed from the tumbling. He quickly shook his head and looked toward the small colt.
"Whoa sorry bud I didn't meant to uh…Kick you hehe…" explained the strange pony laughing nervously.
"Uh, no one poked you…." replied Smithy with a confused expression. "Cot and I weren't even near you"
"Yeah!" reassured Cot
"Huh..?" the strange pony was confused why the small colts didn't notice him. Before he could question the colts the smaller blue colt yelled out towards them.
"Please give me back my Blanket!" yelled the small blue colt, catching the attention of the four ponies. "My grandmother made it when I was a baby…" said the small blue colt holding back as if a dam was ready to burst.
"Well if you want it so much try and get it!" said the Hammer as he got on his hind legs and held up the blanket with his front legs. This prompted Blueberry to try and jump and reach his blanket.
"Ok, this is getting out of hand…" said the strange pony seeming to get a little annoyed by the three bullies. "Hey you, uh Hammer? Stop picking on that small colt!" the strange pony reached out a Hoof to get his attention.
"Hahaha, that's right jump for your…" Hammer was interrupted with a feeling of a pony's hoof poking his back. He once again turned around looking directly at the strange pony, but then looked toward his friends. "Alright which one of you is touching me…" said the infuriated brown colt. "You guys know I hate being touched!"
"But Boss!" said Smithy whit a shaky voice, "Honestly we didn't!" Hammer than started lecturing the two ponies about his hate for being touched by others
Meanwhile the strange pony was sitting there confused to as why they couldn't see him. He also noticed the Blue colt didn't notice him either.
"Am I invisible or something?" he asked himself. He looked at his two front hooves. "No, I can see me just fine…" The strange pony notice they were near a river so he trotted to the edge to see his reflection. His face turned white, or he felt it turn white since he could not see his reflection. He backed up quickly and fell on his flank.
"I-I can't see me? It can't be… I must be…A VAMPIRE!" the strange pony exclaimed. "…No wait that's just silly. Besides, they aren't invisible to people. …I think." The strange pony chuckled at his quick comical ruling. However, he still did not know why he was invisible. He also ruled out being a ghost since he still had the ability to touch. He looked back towards the group of colts. The Brown colt was still giving the lecture of why he didn't like being touched, making the strange pony give a quick snort. The smaller blue colt was off to the background with his head down. The strange pony felt sad for him and useless since he himself couldn't do anything. Or could he? He looked around his surroundings to find something to use. He noticed a big rock on the side of the river. He went to it to pick it up and inspect it. Suddenly, a sly smirk appeared across the strange pony's face as he thought of something he could do.
"Two words, PERSONAL HYGINE" said Hammer. "I mean have you noticed we use our hooves to walk everywhere and never seem to wash 'em on a regular basis?
"Yes boss, we know." Answered Smithy in a tone indicating they have heard this lecture many times before.
While Hammer kept lecturing to the group, group as in mostly Smithy, Cot eyes wandered from the scene only to have them widen "Uh, g…guys…."
"And don't get me started on how we handle our food!" Hammer kept on.
"G…Guys?" repeated Cot a little louder keeping his sight fixed on what he was looking at.
"Yes boss we kno-"
"GUYS!" yelled Cot startling the two ponies and finally catching their attention.
"What is it now Cot? Can't you see I'm talking here?" said Hammer annoyed that he got cut off from his lecture.
"T….t….t.." Cot could not get the words out of his mouth.
The two colts gave Cot a confused stare before turning around to see what he was staring at. Their gaze was met by a floating rock. Their eyes started to widen as it started to revolve. Finally it reveal a carved out message that would only widen their eyes some more and have their pupils the size of a small raisin. The message simply read, "Boo".
"AHHHH!" screamed the three frightened colts. They began tripping on each other as they began running away. All they left was a trail of dust behind their wake of fear. The strange pony couldn't help but fall backwards and let out roars of laughter.
"HAHahahehe, oh that was good one!" said the strange pony wiping a tear off his eyes. He then glanced towards the blue colt's direction to see that fear replaced his sadness. The strange pony quickly put down the rock and grabbed the blanket with his mouth to give to the young colt. He started trotting towards the colt to give it to him, but the colt was backing up with fear, ready to start running.
"Hey it's ok, I'm not gonna…" The strange pony cut himself off after realizing that the colt couldn't hear him.
All of a sudden, Blueberry started galloping away. Watching the colt gallop away, the strange pony let out a sigh decided that he would just fold the blanket and leave it in a spot so that the colt could come back and get it.
Then it struck him. He still needed some help. He didn't know where he was or who he was at that, and to make matters worse no one could see him. He looked around his surrounds. He noticed that there was a trail we he stood.
"Well this trail must lead to somewhere at least. As he started walking he heard a faint voice speak out.
"Thank you Mr. Ghost" said Blueberry in a shaky voice.
The strange pony turned around to see the small blue colt looking around. He couldn't help but to let out a small smile before continuing his trotting. He then stopped to a sudden realization. "Wait the colt probably knows the closest town or something. He turned round and noticed that the colt had already walk began trotting away. "Wait for me kid!" exclaimed the strange pony chasing the Small blue colt to catch up to him.