Hi everyone =] This is my very first time I'm writing a fan fiction story so I am kind of nervous of what kind of reception I'll get. But none the less I would love for people to tell me what they like and don't like. What I could change for it to sound better, etc, etc, etc.

Thank you for reading =]

-missypeak

"You'll be fine

Baby I'm in control

Take the pain

Take the pleasure

I'm the master of both

Close your eyes, not your mind

Let me into your soul"

- For your entertainment by: Adam Lambert

Chapter 1

"My, my. What do we have here?" The woman looked up into the desert sky to see a tall lean figure standing over her. Exhausted and broken she tries to lift head to get a better glimpse at the man. "…Father?" she calls weakly. The man laughs, "That'll be the day." The man's image was getting blurrier and fuzzy, approaching voices were muffled. Head pounding and world spinning she black outs from the heat.

"Thank you for finding and bringing her back. She would've died had she stayed out there for a couple more hours." "Well I just stumbled across her…quite literally in fact, almost made me fall and dirty my clothes. People should know better than to just lie down wherever they feel like it. Even the homeless have the common courtesy not to do so." The man huffed. "In any case whatever the reason you had for bringing her back we are forever grateful. We have had so many deaths, it would be terrible to lose another."

The women's eyes flutter open to see an elderly women sitting over her dipping a wash cloth into a bucket, ring it out then move to place it on her forehead. "Ugh…where, where am I?" The older woman gasps dropping the rag then a huge smile and a look of relief presents itself on her face. "Avo ederiz! Lea, Carmen uyandı var!!" Lea snaps her head to the right then quickly makes her way over to the elder's side. "Ne rahatlama. Eğer Cala teşekkürler geri sağlık Carmen hemşirelik için." Cala placed her hand on Lea's shoulder "Hiçbir sorun benim çocuğum." Cala smiles down at the women then looks back up at Lea with reassurance, gets up and leaves the room.

"Urgh...uh...Lea?" Carmen looked up at the young women. Lea chuckles "Yes child, its Lea." "Where, where am I?" "Your home child. Safe and sound. If it were not for..." Lea looks over at the the tall figure leaning on the wall, legs and arms crossed observing the event. "I am sorry sir, but I didn't catch your name." The man smirks and pushes off the wall and struts over to the two women. "My dear, my name is Reaver."

* Avo ederiz! Lea, Carmen uyandı var!

Thank Avo! Lea, Carmen has woken up!

*Ne rahatlama. Eğer Cala teşekkürler geri sağlık Carmen hemşirelik için.

What a relief. Thank you Cala for nursing Carmen back to health.

*Hiçbir sorun benim çocuğum.

No problem my child.