EBD: Hey ya'll! I've decided to forget about the other story that I was writing and do this one! .….
TC: I've invited the entire crew for this wonderful celebration! drags in a tub of candy/ soda/ random sugary things
KK: just walking into the basement (where all of my stories will be written) What's the celebration for? And do you realize that you just gave EBD a heart attack?
TC: .u….Ummm well, I thought that it was a good thing that she was writing things outside the gang? shrugs ducking from KK's wrath
KK: DO YOU KNOW WHAT THIS WILL DO TO HER! she shouts swinging around a hot pink frying pan
Hiei: spazes and runs away PINK! Get it away! Get it away! (If you want to know what's with the pink, read my pal Tailchaser0's stories)
KK: runs after him, with her frying pan; shouting HHHIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEIIIIIIII!
TC & EBD: .u…………OK?
EBD: CANDY AND SUGARY SWEETS! dives into the candy
TC: Oh! Party! joins EBD with the gorging themselves
YYH GANG & KK: PaRtY! jump into the now half full tub
Narrator: Hey! I want some too!
KK: I thought we fired you? sits on the rim of the tub, grabbing as many empty bottles she can carry
EBD: Yeah! Jumps out of the tub with strawberry lickerish sticks for weapons, and swinging them like numb chucks
TC: YEAH GET OUT! Jumping out of the tub with Blow Pops
Narrator: No! I want some candy! taking a step forward
Yukina: in sing- song voice Oh, Hiei! Can you get rid of this party pooper?
Hiei: smiles evilly, pulling out his sword Love to!
Narrator: Runs away, screaming Ok! OK! I'm going!
EBD: TC, my twin, can you do the disclaimer? I'm too busy finishing off the rest of the candy! everyone but TC dives back into the tub, but leaving the trash stuffed in a trash can
TC: Awesome! I get to do the first one of the story! jumps up and down, reading purple, green, and yellow queue cards No one in this crew, owns YYH, for if any of us did, there would be a giant fight between us , because we wouldn't agree with the critics out there and battle them in our odd ways! looks back at everyone whispering Who made up this disclaimer? It's doesn't make sense!
KK: Also, EBD used the idea of the CIRCLE OF MAGIC series, because it goes perfectly into her plot! everyone looks at a deep red EBD
Jin: Now, off into the night! the funny thing is I'm writing this in the middle of the day .
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Prologue
It was the calm before the storm, in the middle of the night of July 5. In a forested area where our story begins inside the only hut found for miles.
"Ok, Amy! Just one more push and then she'll be out!" a neko (cat) midwife with auburn mid-back length hair, violet eyes, and black cat ears and tail informs a female kitsune (fox) demon with silver hair that reaches her chin, wine-colored eyes, and a flamed colored kitsune tail and is obviously in labor "Great job! Amy, what are you going to name your child?" the neko asks wrapping the new- born kitsune with her furless ears and tail plastered to her body in a blanket and passing it to the sweat soaked Amy
"Motoko Jacqueline. Since my husband abounded me, I'm not going to care for this creature, it will bring back too many unwanted memories" Amy states beginning to crush the new-born's neck
"AMY! You can't! You're mate is defending our lands with the other men! What's wrong with you!" Jacqueline taking the babe away from her mother I've heard of this before, she's gone mad with the strain of this delivery!
"Give her back! I'm going to do away with of her and you!" Amy gets up, and follows Jacqueline outside "You can't hide from my power, Jacqueline!" Amy shouts pointing to the forest that Jacqueline escaped into "I'll just smolder you all alive!" she laughs making lighting strike all of the nearby vegetation
"Silence little one, I'll take you someplace out of harm's way." Jacqueline whispers vanishing with Motoko sheltered within her arms…
Chapter 1: Motoko we enter now with a young girl about…13 years old (in demon time) seated on the ground in a isolated farm
Remember, Motoko… one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight…one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight! The girl with an curious shade of emerald green eyes, a silver kitsune tail and ears, along with hazelnut tresses that go down to her waist, about Jin's height but ½ an inch shorter, wearing a pair of light-blue jeans (with a gap for her tail of course) and a soft indigo short sleeve. She was seated with a pale of water, a bucket of pebbles, and a few lit candles. Once she finally stands up, part of the earth underneath her lifts her up 5ft higher than her natural height, after that she launches into a dance (including an assortment of spins and twirls) about on the tower of stone; molding the water, pebbles, and fire into three separate streamers dancing about her slender body.
"MOTOKO! Are you prepared to go to the festival! You're the privileged performer! Put your costume on, and let's go, before it begins!" Jacqueline grins calling Motoko down to earth
"It's that late, mom?" she asks shocked jumping down with an eager look on her face
"Yes sweet. Now, go change before we both grow old! You won't fancy to miss the first time you've gone to the village, do you?" Jacqueline jokes pointing out
"NO! I'll be right back!" Motoko dashes back to their small home and gets dressed swiftly into a simple white dress that binds up at the waist and has slanting short sleeves (kind of like Resha Valentine's from Rave Master . DON'T OWN!), simple wooden sandals, and quickly sprints back to Jacqueline, who is now dressed in a sapphire kimono with silver dragons on it
"Come let's go." Jacqueline guides Motoko to the village "Are you doing the dance of the birds, today?" she murmurs to her, once they enter the town
"Nope" Motoko merely replies shaking her head
"Alright, what are you going to do, then?" Jackie probes
"It's a surprise." Motoko tells her as a tall, male demon with purple hair formed into a Mohawk, and laughing eyes advances towards them
"Ah, Jacqueline! I haven't seen you in ages! This must be Motoko, well in just a few minutes everyone will be ready to see you dance!" he starts leading Motoko to the stage "By the way, my name's Chuu!"
"Motoko, once you're on the stage, wait until the music acutely begins, then dance. Afterward, curtsy and stride off the stage. Understand?" Jackie explains
"Yep"
"Ok, then get out there and dance your heart out!" Jackie lightly shoves her onto the stage
the music begins, and Motoko release a few colored ribbons into the air, which begin to weave about Motoko's body, while she's dancing
Over to Jackie and Chuu
"Jac, you know you have to tell her about her real mother?" Chuu murmurs to Jackie watching Motoko's dance
"Yes, but when I went to see if she was still alive from the delivery then the assaults, I found merely her corpse" Jackie answers softly
"Really? Let's talk more on this, once Motoko wonders off" Chuu whispers while Motoko finishes her dance, curtsying, and then walking off quickly
"That was wonderful, Motoko! When'd you make that up?" Jackie asks hugging her
"I made it a while ago! You really liked it?" She shouts when the music start up once more
"Yes! Here, take this and get something for yourself! But make sure you seal it off, so thieves won't take it" Jacqueline hands Motoko a full bag of money
"All right" Motoko smiles holding the bag with both hands and puts lighting around it "Thanks mom!" She hugs her once more and wonders onto the dance floor, again
"Come let us go to my bar and talk in me private room" Chuu guides Jackie away from the festivities
over with Motoko
"Isn't that the freak that lives outside the village?" a blonde demon whispers to her posy when Motoko passes them
"Yeh, I also heard that she's eaten some of our livestock!" one of the blonde's girls response, snickering
Just ignore them, Motoko. They're just trying to hurt you…but it's working I wanta go, these girls are mean! Forget it, you can handle this! Just start dancing and you'll feel better she smiles beginning to do another wind dance when a guy with red hair standing straight up, a little horn sticking out of his head, elfin ears, and wearing the same outfit he originally wore in the Demon Tournament, when he puts his hands around her waist, Motoko stops
"Ye shouldn't do the dance of wind by ye-self!" he laughs explaining with an Irish accent
"How'd you know what I was doing?" Motoko whispers confused; but allows herself to be led by him (dancing)
"Any wind demon can sense the change in these winds when someone dances with them! And besides, you got them all excited!" he explains laughing "By the way, m' name's Jin, what's yours?"
"Motoko…" she answers, when they both begin to form a tight tornado in their dance "We should probably undo these winds, before they do anymore damage" she laughs
"Only if you come with me to get something to drink" Jin stops Motoko
"…Ok" she answers breaking up her winds with Jin, and begin to walk off the dance floor (which has no one on it now)
"Hey!" The blonde shouts behind Motoko
"Huh? Aye lasses, who'd ya want?" Jin asks putting an arm on Motoko's shoulder
"You can't go out with Jin!" the blonde shouts trying to punch Motoko in the face, but she gets blasted by wind to the ground
"Who said that I can't go out with her?" Jin asks grinning
"We do" the others help their leader stand up and they all begin trying to puck Motoko, who is dodging all of the blows
"Now ladies this isn't fair play" Chuu laughs, but then getting punched "Ok who did that?" he shouts but never gets answered when the punky girls begin to attack Motoko with energy attacks; cornering Motoko
"Now that's just unfair" Jacqueline puts her hands on her hips
"I'll go help Motoko, Jacqueline" Jin starts to go but Jacqueline begins to laugh
"Oh no, boy! I mean it's not fair for those wanta bees, not Motoko! She can certainly handle herself, after all I've taught her!"
Motoko
"I don't any trouble, girls" she announces backing into a corner
"Well, you got it. Ever since you started flirting around with Jin" the blonde laughs "Ok girls, kill her" she and her poesy attack her
"I tried to warn you…" she smiles brushing her fingers threw her hair to gather some tiny winds, and slams some at all of her attackers; who, in turn, all fall down "I'm sorry, but I did warn you" she smiles walking away
"She's just what we're looking for, Rain. Can we recruit her?" a female kitsune demon with chin length navy hair, white ears and tail, light blue eyes, wearing black pants, tank, and shoes begs
"Yes, Ayame; but tonight, when she's alone." A female neko demon with sea green tail and ears, sapphire hair, violet eyes, and wearing a matching outfit of Ayame's
"Good…"
"Motoko! Great job!" Jin laughs patting her on the back
"Thanks…I guess. Did I just see mom and Chuu?" she looks around
"Yeah, but they only came to see the fight. Jackie said she'll meet you at home at mid-night" Jin answers leading her to get something to drink (no alcohol)
"Ok…" Motoko laughs
"Jin! There you are! We're heading out for the Demon Tournament. That is if you don't wish to be late" a demon with sea green hair… Hell, its Touya! Figure out what he looks like! Approaches them and notices Motoko and creates a rose out of ice, then gives it to her "There you go pretty lady"
"Touya, can you see I'm on a date?" Jin groans
Ice demon…interesting Motoko laughs when Jin and Touya start to go at it, while she's absently playing with the rose
"What's so funny?" Jin asks forgetting about Touya
"You guys are acting like little kids!" she laughs crying ice
"Huh, ice demon? Jin I didn't know you were into them?" Touya whispers
"She's a wind mistress, it's just so cold with all this ice everywhere that she's crying ice tears" Jin laughs too
"Sorry…" Touya shrugs getting rid of the ice
"Well, I need to be getting home, boys" Motoko smiles getting up "Thanks Jin" she kisses him on the cheek, and walks away waving to Touya
"Is that you're first kiss?" Touya nudges Jin up
"No" he blushes fiercely
"Right… And your face doesn't show it" Touya laughs
…………………………………….Motoko…………………………………
They're really nice guys. I hope I see them again. Motoko hums to herself when Ayame grabs her into a bar and into a private room with Rain waiting inside "How are you? And what do you want?" Motoko shouts, the air starting to pick up and mini lighting bolts weaving in and out of her hair
"Calm down. We just want to ask you if you wish to join our gang" Rain calmly answers putting a purple glowing hand on Motoko's back "Ayame, you shouldn't have frighten her so badly" Rain glares at her partner "My name's Rain, I believe you've already met Ayame?"
"I don't understand…"
"It's simple really; we want you to be in our club. It's a lot of fun, and you can come to the Demon Tournament to see your man" Ayame smiles
"Jin isn't my 'man', and how could I get away with something that could last months?" she asks looking at Rain with suspicion
"We'll meet you at you're house tomorrow, and begin your training, then you'll understand how you'll get away with it" Rain smiles
"But…"
"Better leave or you won't make curfew" Ayame points to a grandfather clock
"Crud! Bye!"
2 YEARS LATER
"Mom!" Motoko smiles finding Jackie in the kitchen
"Motoko, I really need to tell you something, sit down" she indicates a chair across from her ever since she's been hanging out with those two girls she's become more confident
"What's wrong?" Motoko asks concern about her mom's tone
"I'm not your real mother, Motoko" she whispers
"Well, I've known that ever since I remember. I mean, you're a neko and I'm a kitsune!" Motoko laughs
"No, let me explain how I obtained you…" Jackie begins the story prologue
"Mom, it doesn't matter. You are the one that raised and cared for me, with even more love than a real mom could ever give me. To me you'll always be my mother" Motoko hugs her "I'm going to go on a hike with Ayame and Rain, ok mom?"
"Alright, but don't go looking for Sensui, ok?" Jackie asks weakly
"Of course not. I'll see yea later! Bye" Motoko smiles and walks out the door to meet Ayame and Rain
"Took you long enough!" Ayame shouts running swiftly with the other two girls by her side "By the time you came out, I could have died and back again!" she laughs
"Maybe…Oh! Is this our ride?" Motoko asks when they reach a few girls floating on oars
"Yep, these gals owe us a favor, so they're going to fly us there" Rain answers nodding to them ever since Motoko's began training as one of Koenma's spies; she's become one of his most trusted and extremely good! I'm glad we decided to recruit her.
"But I can fly" Motoko points out
"You'll just waste energy, and besides you don't know the way." Laughs a girl with bright blue hair pulled into a high pony, amethyst eyes, and wearing a pink kimono Hiei: PIIIIINNNNNKKKKK!
"Motoko, Botan's right, we need to save our strength. We'll be guarding Prince Koenma" Rain puts in getting on Botan's oar with her, while Ayame does the same but with another girl, and Motoko reluctantly gets on the last girl's oar
Once they arrive
"Thank you, girls. But now you must return home" Botan waves good bye to the other two grim reapers
"Why aren't you going, Botan?" Ayame asks
"I'm coaching Yusuke's team" she laughs "Koenma's over there! See yea later!" Botan runs off
"Oui! Koenma! What are yea doing?" Rain laughs going over to meet him
"I'm sick and tired of people never noticing me!" he snaps, then notices Motoko "Hello! I've heard plenty about you. And I'm glad to have you on the team!" He shakes Motoko's hand
"Thank-you, sir. If you wish to be noticed more, I can help with that" Motoko points out
"Really, how can you do that?" Koenma doesn't believe her one bit
"Simple, I can do a temporally tattoo your forehead with 'Jr,' so people will notice you more. It will only come off when you're undercover or you're King. I've given Ayame, Rain, and I a couple!" she smiles
"Good idea. When can you do it?"
"Now, if you want it." She pulls out some black ink and draws 'Jr.' on in the middle of Koenma's forehead
"Great job Motoko! Now lets have a look around" Ayame barely get out of ear-shot from Koenma before cracking up in laughter
END OF CHAPPY!
EBD: Ok I know that the chappy didn't do much…
TC: But it sure will make plenty of sense later!
KK: EBD hasn't even put in where they all meet the YYH Gang!
Hiei: Hn… Like I would want to meet someone like Motoko
EBD: tears in eyes But Ayame's based off of KK!
Hiei: sweat drop
KK: Hiei…
Hiei: in high squeaky voice Yes?
Jin: HI HEY Everyone!
Hiei: Great timing, Jin! You just saved me butt!
Jin: Huh?
EBD & TC: eating a blow pop REVIEW!
TC: UN guard! points blow pop at EBD
EBD: Too shay! points blow pop at her-self