This is my first fanfic thing, so please be kind

This is my first fanfic thing, so please be kind. I have a story that I'm thinking of putting out, but I'm not going to until I get some feed back on this. If you like Tai/Sora then I think you'll like my story. And if you like Tai then I LOVE you since he's my favorite character. Anyway, here's my short poem from Sora about Tai.

Does He Know Me?

I look at him.

So brave and confident.

I wonder.

Does he know I'm alive?

The others think he's reckless.

That he doesn't think.

But if they knew him like I did.

They could see how much he worries.

I know he cares about me,

But he cares about us all.

He's saved my life before.

Then again he'd do that for anyone.

Does he look at me like I look at him?

Does he dream about me at night?

Does his heart skip a beat when I'm near?

Maybe.

But will I ever really know?

Will he ever tell me how he feels?

I wish I knew,

But it's okay.

As long as I'm near him.

It doesn't matter if he notices.

I can't bring myself to say it out loud.

But every time I see him,

So strong and caring.

I tell myself what I'm too scared to tell him.

"I love you, Taichi Kamiya."