This is my first fanfic so yeah, please be honest and if you have any tips for it to improve, please tell me!
oh and Scotlands a girl
" Alright see ya soon! Bye! " , my little brother Wales said as he got of the phone. He was in the kitchen and Northern Ireland and I sat on the couch in the living room. We've all been living together ever scene Ireland broke away making her no longer my little sister. Damn you Ireland... Now the United Kingdom was made up of 3 lads and one lassie: me.
" You'll never guess who-", Wales came into the living room to see Northern Ireland sleeping in the strangest way and me, smoking my cigarette. I looked up at him and saw a look of disappointment come on to his face. " Scotland, I told you to stop smoking " , he said. I took the cigarette out of my mouth and blew out some smoke. " It's not that simple ", I said.
" Yes it is ".
" No, it's not ", I brought the cigarette to my lips, inhaling once again.
" Yes it is! Look." He reached over and pulled the it right out of my mouth. He leaded in close to my face and extended his arm so my smoke wasn't in reach. He smiled, mocking me. Out of frustration and anger I blew out the smoke I had in my mouth right in his face. " Eeww! " , he said coughing, which only made me laugh.
" Right ", I said still laughing a bit ," What did you want to tell me and Sleeping Ugly over there? " . We both looked at North. He some how managed to fall asleep eating ribs. His freckled face was on the plate and his lips were covered in sauce. His longish curly, dirty-blond hair was stuck on the plate along with a rib or two.
The only thing I had in common with all my brothers were the bright green eyes and palish skin. North and I both had freckles. Wales (who always wore a brown plaid cap ) and Northern Ireland both had curly hair, but Wales's hair was a chocolate brown. England's hair was blond and mine was red. I wore glasses but never wore the anywhere but my home. If you looked at the 4 of us, you couldn't tell we where related.
Before answering my question, Wales walked over to North and slapped him really hard in the face to wake him up. North moaned and opened his eyes. Wales and I started laughing our heads off. " You bastard, what was that for? ", Northern Ireland asked wiping his sleeve on his face to get the sauce off.
Wales said, " I have an announcement: England and his new boyfriend , America , are coming to visit in about ..." Wales looked at his watch" an hour ". " What?! " , North and I asked at the same time. " After all he's done to us, you're letting him visit?! " , Northern Ireland asked.
Wales tried to calm us down, " Look, it's really important to Britain that we meet America. And it's only for a week ". North and I looked at each other. " Okay " , I said " If England gets to come and visit, I get to smoke. That's my only deal. ". Wales thought about it for a moment, " ... Okay. ". He looked over to North , " What about you, you want anything? ".
" As long as England doesn't cook, I'm happy ", North said as he got off our black ,leather couch to put his plate of ribs in the kitchen. Shortly after, Wales left to start cleaning and I got up to get a pack of smokes. After all, if was going to spend the week with England, I would need it.