This is my first fan fiction so criticism is appreciated. Let me know if I should continue. Eventually there will be some lemons but I have to bring you into the story first. Enjoy the story!
I do not own any of the characters or plot lines by Stephanie Meyer. I also don't own any of the songs that will be used in the writing of this story.
BPOV
What on earth had I gotten myself into?
Somehow I had let my two best friends talk me into going out tonight. For some reason that also meant that it was officially makeover Bella into Bella Barbie time.
"Hold still," came the pixie-like voice from my left "All I have to do now is your makeup."
We had been at this for an hour. I had come home from my long day of classes hoping to just grab some Ben and Jerry's Chunky Monkey and a spoon and veg-out on the couch watching a movie for the rest of the night. I loved Fridays, the week needed more of them.
My friends had other plans however, Alice and Rosalie had practically met me at the door to tell me that we were going to one of the newer clubs in town tonight. Enigma was located within walking distance of out apartment. Why they hadn't already been there themselves was beyond me.
So after showering with my favorite strawberry shampoo and freesia body wash, I was sitting in my fluffy purple bathrobe undergoing the torture of Rose doing my hair and Alice my makeup. I swear they don't think that I'm capable of getting myself ready.
Rose finished my hair with a satisfied expression and allowed Alice to take over. I looked down and notice a rather large bag filled with makeup organized in separate compartments.
"Honestly Alice, do you collect the stuff or what?" I asked.
"What? my makeup? I've kept up with the trends over the past few years." Alice replied.
"Alice only you would consider makeup to have trends." I replied. Alice just laughed.
"Okay, you can look now," Alice said while turning me around.
I had to admit I looked pretty good. My hair was in bouncy spiral curls that flowed and framed my face and there was a little section that was pulled back and made into a slight bump on the top of my head.A dark smokey eye and a light shade of pink lip gloss rounded out my makeover. I've always loved what eyeliner does to my eyes, it never fails to make them pop. I moved onto my room and was thankful that Alice and Rosalie were at least letting me pick out my own outfit.
I walked over to my closet and searched through it until I found a pair of low rise, dark wash jeans in the back and put them on. I knew exactly what top I was going to wear with this makeup. I looked through my closet of many hoodies, t-shirts, and jeans until I found what I was looking for. I pulled out my black corset top with purple ribbon up the sides and back and pulled it on. The outfit showed off four of my tattoos and matched my black painted fingernails. All I had to do now was find the right shoes I was a pretty uncoordinated person but tonight I was going for a certain look. I pulled out my hardly ever worn black strappy heels and placed them on my feet.
I walked down the hall to Rosalie's bedroom where Alice and her were getting ready.
"Whoa, Bella you look hot," Rosalie commented.
"Thank you very much," I said as I put in a pair of silver chandelier earrings with purple gems.
"Okay, lets go girls," Alice said. She was wearing a brown mini skirt and a low cut light blue shirt.
"Give me just a minute to put some earrings in," Rose said while putting in some gold hoops to match her gold blouse and black capris with gold heels.
I grabbed my cell phone, iPod, some cash, and keys and went out the door while shoving them into my pockets. I know it's weird to carry your iPod with you to a club but I never left home without mine. La musica es mi Vida, the music is my life. I was majoring in music education after all. I loved the adrenaline rush I got from singing and seeing the reactions of people to music. I was looking forward to graduating and teaching a class full of students.
EPOV
I jumped into the tub and got a quick shower before work. I'd been out shopping at the grocery store and needed to get ready to go.
After my shower I got dressed in some jeans, a black t-shirt, and my black Converse. I loved the ink on my arms why cover it up?
I grabbed my wallet, keys, cell phone, and iPod and headed out the door.
I got into my silver Volvo and started the ignition. This car was my baby; my parents had given it to me as a graduation gift. I came from a wealthy family and was used to being spoiled.
I drove down the road with the radio up. Avenged Sevenfold blasting its way through the speakers. I pulled into the parking lot and took my spot close to the entrance and went into the club.
Enigma was my other baby next to my car. I had bought this place right after my eighteenth birthday. At the time the place was little more than a rundown building, but I had worked to fix it up.
All of the members of my band worked here. Emmett was my bouncer, he could kick any ones ass, but once you got to know him he was a real teddy bear. Emmett played the drums in the band. Jasper was a bartender and tonight he had the night off, he has this uncanny ability of knowing when somethings wrong with you as much as you look normal on the outside. Jasper plays bass in Melisma, my band.
I said hey to Emmett as I passed him going in and then took my place behind the bar with Mike.
Mike was a guy I hired to be a bartender about a month ago. He was going to school around here somewhere to be a doctor of some sort. I didn't really care what he was going to school for as long as he showed up to work. He flirts with the female customers a lot and he's always got some girl hanging on his arm like his own personal human key chain. It really disgusted me sometimes.
I said hi to Mike and turned back to the front of the bar where customers were starting to arrive.
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I decided to go back and re-write the whole story in alternating points of view. I think it makes the story better.
