Pirate Kittie
Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha
This was originally my own characters, I decided I wanted to post it. The original characters sorta fit in with the Inuyasha gang, from the beginning. So here you go! (if you want to read the original version just review it to me)
Ancient Awakenings
Prologue: The most important part of a story is usually the introduction and the conclusion. Well.. not in this story. The body is the most important part. Like in humans, the most interesting part of the tale. The beginning, slow and a little drowsy, but as the story goes on the more excitement will be placed within it. There will be comedy, romance, adventure, fantasy, and angst. Maybe even a little morbid at parts. But it was your choice to read my story and as such you will have your own opinion on it. My only suggestion would be that you post your thoughts so that I can perfect my story, more to the liking of my readers.
Chapter one- introduction
It was around one am and the sun was just starting to come up. As Kagome turned over in her bed, the sunlight became brighter. Eventually, the sun became bright enough that even with her eyes closed she could still see a somewhat red light, so she got up out of bed.
Figuring that it would be best to get ready for the first, forsaken, day of school instead of sit around and stare at the wall pouting, Kagome went to the bathroom to shower and brush her teeth.
:twenty minutes later:
Walking quietly back into her room, while drying her hair in a towel, she tried to decide what to wear. 'It's got to look nice. I cant look like a mess on my first day of school.' Opening one of the dresser draws she shifted through some shorts, skirts, tank tops and t-shirts. 'it's still pretty warm out..' she thought
After a few more seconds of randomly throwing articles of clothing out of the never ending dresser draw she found the perfect outfit. That consisted of a black and white threaded, vintage jean, mini skirt. With a red tank top, the straps had a draping shear fabric that hung off her shoulders.
After putting on the skirt and shirt she looked in the mirror. Something shinning and red caught her eye as she brushed her hair. Putting the brush down she shifted some of the homework papers on her dresser only to find a red rose pin with rein-stones on it. She picked it up, slowly turning it in her hands, admiring it. After a few moments she clipped it onto the skirt by her hip.
'Now for my shoes' she thought as she walked over to her closet. Pushing aside some of her winter boots and sneakers she found the exact pair she was looking for. A pair of black sandals with red edges, and a little red bow on the side of the strap. After looking at herself in the mirror for a few more minutes, checking to make sure everything was perfectly in-tack, she walked back to her bed to lay down.
After a few minutes of pointless staring at the ceiling and random thoughts drifting through her head, she began to get tired and drift into a soft sleep. :Riiing……Rinnnngg…RINNGG: "Alright, alright.. I got it." A sleepy eyed Kagome mumbled as she reached for the phone.
"Moshi moshi." She grumbled tiredly as she sat up. "hello, Kagome? I'm sorry did I wake you?" "No.. I've been up for a while." She lied while rubbing the sleep out of her eyes as she desperately tried to get the sleepy sound out of her voice as well.
"Oh, Ok.. well since your already awake do you think you could meet me and Sango at the spot." "The spot? Why?" "I cant tell you now.. just come, please? I'll explain once we get there, ok?" "Alright." Kagome agreed as she said her goodbyes to her friend and gathered all her school supplies before writing a note to her mom. The note explaining that she was going to meet up with her friends for a early study group meeting, then running out of the shrine to meet her friends.
Well what do you think? Is it ok? Well you tell me what you think, even if you hated it! I would like some constructive criticism.
