Oh my GOD! I just finished watching TOR and there was so much that I wanted to happen. For once I wanted Sophia to capture Patricia instead of KT. So here's Chapter One hope you guy's like it. I do not nor will I ever own House of Anubis.

What I wanted to happen in the Touchstone of Ra

Chapter One:

"Patricia, Patricia?! PATRICIA!" Eddie shouts as he looks around the woods for his girlfriend.

Unknown to all of them Sophia was chanting something in Egyptian and walking backwards while holding the touchstone in front of Patricia's face. Sophia saw a warehouse in the distance. Sophia smirked to herself and quickly turned her head back to Patricia's dazed state.

"Patricia foreward...Into the warehouse." Sophia says as Patricia does as she says. "Now I just have to keep you hear until it's time for the sacrifice, but first...I need to find the sacraficial amulet." Sophia says as she snaps Patricia out of her control.

"SOPHIA!" Patricia charges the door but gets it slammed in her face. "LET ME OUT!" Patricia was slamming on the door and trying to get it unlocked but nothing seemed to work.

Sophia was standing on the other side of the door and heard Patricia's please. She soon heard quit sobbing and smiled to herself. Sophia walked back to Anubis house with a metal necklace for the Valadictorian to switch it for the symbol of Ra.

"Hey Willow can I switch your metal...for this one." Sophia says as she brings out a replica of the sacraficial necklace.

"Oooh shiny, here you go." Willow says.

-Time Skip: The Next Day; Before Graduation-

"Here you go, Patricia." Sophia says as she forces the necklace over her head. "You will now listen to my every command." Sophia says as Patricia stands up and nods.

Sophia and Patricia walk out of the warehouse together to walk towards the grounds of were she would summon Ra. She pushed Patricia to the ground and told her to stay there as she walked to Anubis house to get the rest of the peices for the pyramid.

"NO! Think about what your doing!" Eddie said as he and the Middle School kids stopped a few feet from her.

"It's all I've thought about for the last hundred years." Sophia says. "The pyramid has been built and now a Sacrifice must be made." Sophia points to Patricia as the coin glows an Orangey color.

"Eddie, they need the Sacra-OH NO!" KT and Fabian shouted together as they saw the glowing coin around Patricia's neck.

"PATRICIA!" Eddie shouts as tears fall from his eyes.

Patricia looks at Eddie and gives him a small smile and begins to walk towards the pyramid. Eddie wanted so much to save his girlfriend, but no matter how many times he tried to reach her Sophia knocked him back. Eddie looked towards the sky to see that the sun was darkening to a deep Orange.

"Ra is angry, he needs a sacrifice." Eddie said as Patricia touches her hands to the pyramid.

Patricia's body begins to glow a golden color as the sky lightens up and a blast is heard. Patricia falls to the ground not breathing and very pale. Eddie and the other Sibuna members ran up to her as Gold droplet's suddenly began raining from the sky. Sophia disappears into the shadows of the trees as Eddie begin's to sob loudly into Patricia's leather jacket.

Don't forget me Eddie...A voice says as Eddie turns around to see the disappearing shadow of Patricia.

-Time Skip: Patricia's funeral; 2 week's after Graduation-

It was raining on this particular day as we see the Graduates of the House of Anubis and some of the teacher's surrounding a coffin. The people who were there were Trudy, Patricia's house mother, Victor, Patricia's caretaker, Eddie, Patricia's boyfriend, Mrs. Andrew's, Patricia's French and language teacher, KT, One of Patricia's best friends. All the former student's and teachers wore either a Black dress or something Black. Mara Jaffray was crying silently into her Boyfriend Fabian's shoulder as the priest read the will and testimony that Patricia's twin sister had wrote her.

"Why did it have to be her Eddie, why." KT says inbetween her sobs.

"Because it was the only way to save Eddie's life." A voice says that all the residence in the cemetary recognized.

Okay so I'm going to end it in a Cliffhanger; who do you think the voice belongs too? You can give me your thoughts or complaints in a Review. Thanks!

Here are some question's that you can answer in your Review...

1) Should the voice be Sara, Caroline, Rufus, Vera, Nina or Amber?

2) What couples do you want me to have?

3) I need some OC's so could you guy's follow the spread sheet below.

Full Name:

Nickname:

Age:

Sex:

Personality:

What they look like:

Eye Color:

Hair Color: (EX: Blue, Black, Red with Purple streaks, Ext.)

House they live in: (EX: If Graduated just put none)

Romance: (EX: Yes/No; if Yes who with)

Secret:

Background: (EX: Good childhood/Bad childhood)

Thank you guy's again.