Hey people! It's Immortal Quintessence Guardian. Just to let everyone know, this is my first story…FINALLY…So be nice. No flames. I will, however, allow constructive criticism. Enjoy!
Title: The Princess of Kandrakar
Chapter 1: The Battle with Narissa
Will's POV:
I stood there in front of the enemy. The enemy with my power. Narissa. Irma and the others were down for the count, all of them unconscious. Matt and Caleb were fighting off her monsters. It was just me and her, face to face. I had to win. The fate of the universe was at stake.
"I will make you a deal, Guardian. You are the Keeper of the Heart. Shouldn't you get to have all five elements? Join me and I will make that happen." Narissa said.
"You're insane if you think I'm going to join you. I'm just fine with the power that was given to me." I replied.
"So be it, Guardian. QUINTESSENCE!" she hissed, shooting energy bolts at me. I barely dodged the attack.
"Quintessence!" I repeated, only to have Narissa deflect my attack. Then she pinned me to a nearby wall by the throat.
"You are going to regret being rebellious toward me, Will." She spat as I was slipping into complete blackness. The Heart shot Narissa with a Light Spell, causing her to hiss in pain.
"I'll be back, Will. I guarantee this." Narissa said as she disappeared.
"Will!" I heard somebody exclaim. Irma, followed by Taranee, Cornelia, and Hay Lin.
"Girls, are you ok?" I asked.
"Yeah, we're fine and so are Matt and Caleb. They just went home." Hay Lin said.
"That's good. C'mon, lets go check on things on Kandrakar." I said, fearing that Narissa destroyed it.
So what did ya think? I know its not the most exciting chapter in the world, but the will be a shocking surprise in chapter 2, but I need at least 5 positive reviews.