Disclaimer: I do not own any of the SPM characters, just my OCs, I will not tell their name till they are revealed. This is my first fanfic so pls. go easy on me when I review. Enjoy!
Edit: Yes, I am editing this whole story, since I really need to. Hopefully, my new version is better than the old, and I hope you guys will love it! :D
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Mr. L was on his daily walk in the woods near Castle Bleck. He loved the peacefulness of the woods. Away from the cries of Mimi, the annoying similes of Dimentio, (They are friends, yes, but who could stand his similes, honestly?) and the stupid blabbering of O'Chunks. (Honestly, sometimes he couldn't even understand O'Chunks...)
Something then caught his attention, it was a little wolf cub. He wasn't sure, but he seems to have encountered this cub before, and he could've sworn that that cub is smirking at him. Then, after another minute of interaction, the cub disappeared into the bushes.
"HELP!" Then, a sudden shout for help was heard. At first, Mr. L never considered it, sincehe didn't want to get involved in any trouble, but with another cry for help, his conscience was pushing him, so with a reluctant sigh, he ran to the source of the voice. He was shocked to find a girl being attacked by goombas.
Who couldn't handle a bunch of goombas, really?
There were a dozen of them, yeah, but you can easily pry them off. Just step on them, and they'll be stunned, enough for you to get away and go on with your life. Well apparently no one ever told her that, so he has to play the prince right now to the damsel in . L jumped on 6 goombas.
The other 6? Well, they weren't so lucky.
Just to showcase his 'awesome powers', Mr. L charged a ball of thunder and shot it at the goombas. He snickered as he watched the goombas stunned and burnt faces, which quickly turned into fear. They all squirmed away, worried they will face Mr. L again.
"Dude, we have got to stop attacking girls." One of the goombas said while running.
"Yeah, yeah.." The other muttered.
"Ha! You should've thought twice before messing with me," Mr. L said, doing a little pose before continuing. "Mr. L, the Green Thunder!" He snickered before he faced the girl. He wanted to know what the girl he had saved looked like.
She had black straight hair with curled ends, a red ripped shirt and a pair of ripped pants, and blue sneakers with socks are not any more seen...or maybe lost.
"Thank you." She said with an exhausted voice. She seems pretty shaken up, looks like she had gone through a lot. Mr. L extended a hand to her, to which she gladly accepted.
"You're welcome. Might I ask who you are?" Mr. L said. Before he added, "Plus, an explanation to why you're in the middle of the forest looking as if you were ran over?" Sapphire grew conscious, dusting herself off before she responded.
"My name is Sapphire." Sapphire said with a shaky voice. "To be honest with you, I don't know why I'm here. I kinda don't remember..."
"What?!" Mr. L asked, surprised. He had never met a person with amnesia before. She shook her head, making him sigh. Looks like she just became his responsibility. "Follow me. I think I can help you." As soon as he said that, they were off.
So guys what do you think? Just review to tell me, and if its bad please don't be so hard on me. Just don't forget to review and wait patiently for the next chapter.
Edit: I just want to add in that if you want to know if the chapter is edited, just look for an (Edit) sign in bold and italic, just like what I put in this one. I'll be editing until Chapter 15 or 16. Please R&R!