I have rewrote this story because i really didn't like the strange-ness of it...
One rainy afternoon, two girls on a bench in the park protected by an umbrella. Both laughed as they saw a man being pulled around by his son and daughter... well they guessed they were.
"That's soo cute!" The raven/lavender haired beauty, Hinata giggled.
Both wore rain gear. She wore faded jeans, white boots with purple and orange polka dots. A raincoat with the same pattern, her medium length hair was down with an orange hat atop her head. Her light lavender eyes followed the kids playing in the rain puddles.
"Ya, they're soo cute!" The pinket, Sakura, giggled.
Sakura wore light green boots, worn gray jeans, a green raincoat a shade darker than her boots had pink and dark blue polka shoulder length pink hair was in loose pigtails, a dark blue hat on her head, apple green eyes also watching the kids.
The two looked at eachother, smiling.
"Whoa, you guys are here too" a loud recognizable voice basically yelled. Hinata blushed, she still had a crush on him.
"Hey! Uh, duh, why wouldn't we be..." Sakura asked her voice trailed away as Sasuke came into view. He was frowning.
"I don't know" He told them sheepishly, "what were you two gonna do? we'll come with you!"
They all looked at each other. The girls smiled as they thought of what to do. Naruto and Sasuke looked at each other.
"I'mnot going-" Sasuke was interupted.
"Yep, we're going shopping" both girls smiled even more.
'Why did I say we'd go with them?' Naruto thought pouting. He and Sasuke were being dragged around the mall, being forced to carry most of the bags.
"Last time we came to the mall with you two, you didn't make us come in here." Sasuke muttered standing by a shelf piled with hair products. The smell in this store was making his nose burn.
The guys had ditched the two girls to go into a video game store. That was such a mistake! They were banned from that place because of all the noise and the fact that they knocked down a few shelves by mistake while both Hinata and Sakura were trying to pull them out.
"Do you guys, like, wear mak-up at all? You always have really noticeable long eyelashes, and ometimes you look like you're wearing eyeliner" Sakura asked looking up at them inocently. She picked up a light shade of eyeshadow.
Sasuke choked on air, while Naruto loudly protested, telling her that he has never worn make-up.
"She was only asking, gosh" Hinata whispered.
Sasuke ignored that and deadpanned "I'm waiting outside, this smell is annoying"
"No, you just don't want anyone seeing you in here." Sakura.
"No duh, this place is so girly" Naruto complained.
"Why is it so girly? You went into other stores that were way more girly than this." Hinata questioned.
"Well, that means they're perverts" Sakura whispered to Hinata, they both laughed, then blushed picturing the boys being perverted.
"What did you call us?" It was in unison, they glared at each other afterwards either one of them muttering 'teme' or 'dobe', "we don't like this place."
"Nothing,and to bad, you're staying" Sakura nodded crossing her arms.
Because of the fact that their lavender and emerald eyes were'nt on them, they slowly stalked off abandoning the bags in the process.
"Let's go home after we pay for this" Hinata sighed. Sakura agreed, while they were walking up to the cashier. They paid.
Walking home they both thought 'I am never going to the mall with those two again' they were stuck lugging the bags back to their houses.
Hope this is better. i didn't like the way it was written last time. constructive criticism is welcome! along with anything else you wanna say.
-OSSF