Chapter 1

Hi this is my first fanfic so please tell me if its good or bad please. Ok here it goes

TRIS POV

I look out the window and to feel the cool wind on my face and I think to myself life can't get better then this but I'm pulled out of my thoughts by a waving hand "Hey earth to Tris anyone home" said Christina

"Oh sorry just thinking" I say

"Ok well as you now know tomorrow we are getting our ranks and you know that guy Zeke and his brother Uriah well every year they throw a party and it just so happens we are invited so this afternoon we are going SHOPPING" sequels Christina

"OMG Chris you of all people know that I hate shopping to my uithsend" I say with a sad expression.

"well you of all people know that you won't win this fight Tris" she says phrasing me

Well I guest she's right I won't get out of shopping this time so I just back down the fight

" ok I will come shopping with you"

"yes" she screams "ok it's 1.00pm so you can have an hour or so and then meet me at Dauntless hots Ok?"

"ok, but give me 2 hours because I haven't eaten yet" I say

"fine see you in 2 hours at Dauntless hots" she's says and with that she has got to the dorms.

PaGe BrEak PaGe BrEaK

So I peacefully walk to the cafeteria when I am pushed to the wall by some guy smashing their lips to me .At first I am shocked to find out that the person kissing me was….

(NA IM NOT THAT MEAN, OR AM I?)

Peter

I don't know what to do but before I could decide he gets of me and says" if you tell anyone about this I will beat you up" and at that he walks away leaving me hanging.

So I just walk in the cafeteria and sit in the usual with Zeke, Uriah, Shauna, Will, Marlene, Four and Lynn.

But the first thing that comes to Zeke's mouth was "were have you been your nearly always the earliest"

"OH I was talking to Christina and she said that I have known chose but to go shopping with her in 1 hour and a half"

"Oh ok so you have probably heard about the party so is that why you're going shopping?" questions Uriah

"yeah she gets on my nerves sometimes I had to talk her into giving me 2 hours she said I should have 1" I say

"Yea" Shauna and Marlene scream at the same time " you could all go shopping well us girls, that means you two Lynn"

"Nnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooooo but I hate shopping" yells Lynn

"Come on Lynn if I am getting forced to go shopping you should too" I say

After all that drama I go get my food and get half sad half freighted to death by peter saying" remember don't tell anyone"

I just say "I won't"

PaGe BrEaK PaGe BrEaK

At the end I got a hamburger 'n fries and I big piece of DAUNTLESS CAKE my personal favourite and I walked back to the table not getting interrupted by peter

Then I dig into my food and eat my hamburger in 10 minutes flat then the fries in 5 minutes. As I finish my fries I look up to see Peter staring at my back that he smirks and turns away. I think to myself well that was weird. But then I see someone waving the hand in my face and saying" Tris you there?" I relies that the person who was waving their hand was the mighty Four

"Oh yes I'm here, why?"

"Oh you were just there with a blank expression on your face for like 20 minutes" Uriah said

"Oh" is all that manage to come out of my mouth. Then I look at the clock and it reads 2.30pm and with that I put the cake in my mouth and say "ok I'm going to get changed and ill meet you at the pit in 15 minutes" and get up and leave for the dorms and then I get changed to ripped jegging's and a love top and in the love hearth it says LIVE LIFE TO THE BRIM it's a nice rule to live your life by and I put on some rainbow tie dye vans and walk slowly to Dauntless hots. I mange to get the with no distractions. when I'm there I see Chris there with a bag already!

"Hi" she said

"Sup, why do you have a bag already?" I ask

"Oh, well you took 20 minutes did you know? Well I got me some cute jeggings and I got you a really cool hair brush, hair strainer (one of the best) and some nice and cute perfume" she answers

"Oh, ok come on the faster we go the faster we leave"

"Ok just stop being such a wet blanket". With that we go into dauntless hots. It has some really nice stuff in here actually but then Chris comes back with a dress and I say

"Chris no no no no no" I say

"yes yes yes yes yes come on four will blow when he sees you in that"

"fine but only one dress ok? And four does not like me Chris"

"good and your having more than on dress tris"