Hello as you all may know I am a new user.I will be writing a story about Tris , Four ,Zeke, and, Uriah as all 3 of the boys fall in love with her. Since this is my first time writing a story I want constructive criticism. I am not sure if i will update if you anything to be added in the story please send me a pm or put a star (like this *)next to it and I will review over it.