Just a short free verse poem. I thought I would try something new.
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Together
A sigh.
Blue eyes met blue,
A sea of emotion,
A torrent of love,
A darkening blue ocean,
Desire clouding over,
Love always present,
Moans through silence,
Panting,
Panting,
Moaning,
Pace increasing,
Breath after breath,
Desperation,
Getting closer,
Closer,
Closer,
Names screamed,
Panting,
Panting,
Blue eyes met blue,
A smile.
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Would really appreciate some feedback since this isn't really the sort of thing that is posted on here.
Thanks for reading since I know short pieces of writing don't tend to catch people's attention.