Negai here. My first fanfic went pretty bad so I hope this one is better.
There will never be any sexual romance in this story and if you have any questions please feel free to ask in the reviews. :D
Okay, this may be confusing, and if people think it's too confusing, then I'll explain in the next chapter. Many thanks to CuteLittlePikachu and RandomDancingMatryoshka for their tips & help. Now enjoy!
This was just... strange. The very definition of: strange. At first, he assumed it was nothing but a weird dream; a dream he would wake from and proceed with a regular routine that followed every day. But even as he pinched himself, the surroundings showed no signs of flickering or fading. "Whatever this is," he thought, only the slightest bit worried, "definitely isn't a dream."
Whirling masses of colour and shades swirled around him like an outer coating, confusing and teasing the jet-haired boy. He was helpless in the midst of the vortex, drifting aimlessly with no help of levitation.
In truth, he would just have used his ability to teleport out of the whirling funnel, but there was something preventing him from doing so. It was like as if someone had disabled his PSI before he was tossed in here. But how could that be possible? He had no memory of anyone doing anything like that to him.
Closing his eyes, he tried to retrace the events that led him to this bizarre 'place', but he felt odd. Only images appeared; no sound, no colour, but just... images; black and white, devoid of any sense. "Whuh... What is this...?" he thought, getting worried, "I... I can't remember... who... who am... no I'm... I'm..."
Suddenly, his memories started to dissipate; one moment he remembered his name, the next... the name became fuzzy and forgotten. His memories were somehow slowly being depleted one by one, until he was left with only a single knowledge: the ability to use PSI.
Startled and confused, he looked frantically around for the cause, but all he could see were the colours flying around him. An idea sprung into his mind. Closing his eyes, he tried to focus his PSI to try and detect any presence.
...Nothing was in here... but then he remembered that his PSI didn't work for some odd reason.
Suddenly, the colours and swirls focused at a single point, forming a white gateway. It drew all the colours towards it, but as they hit the white, they seemed to merge into nothingness. As it sucked in the colours, it pulled the disoriented boy towards its gaping mouth. Thoroughly surprised, he tried to run, but with no surface to run on, all he could do was try and edge away, and with no PSI, he found himself out of solutions.
All he could do was watch as the white drew closer and closer, until at last, it filled his sight and rendered him unconscious.
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(Onett)
Ness tossed around in bed, something disturbing him from his sleep. Opening his gentle blue eyes, he yawned and got up.
(Twoson)
Paula suddenly felt ill and weak. Sitting down gently, she tried to identify why she felt this way.
(Snowman)
Working on a new invention, Jeff paid no attention to what happened outside. Had he done so, he would've seen a small dot in the sky fall from a whirling mass of energy.
(Dalaam)
Poo grimaced all of sudden in between his training, attracting the Old Master's attention. Slightly concerned, he murmured, "Something... has disturbed this world."
Yeah it's pretty short. The proper Chapter 1 will come soon.
Please review! Even if you're just saying a word or giving criticism, a review is a review! :D
Even if I get no reviews for now, I'm going to update the next chapter anyways, but after that if there's no reviews, then I won't continue.
