Hi and Welcome to the NEW Big Tent Attraction!
I entered this in a contest Oct. 31 for a fanfiction contest relating to the anime convention coming to the valley in 16 days.
I'll update the other BTA right after I publish this story so stay tuned!
The five reds grabbed onto each other as the ground shook. A huge fireball soared into the sky and a group of red and green clad Zodiac Alliance of Freedom Treaty soldiers poured out of an arena. Two reds started arguing in sign language, Lamina, ZAFT's top pilot in the arms of her boyfriend, Mathieu Smith.
"I can walk by on my own Mathieu!" Lamina shouted and rolled out of his arms.
"Well tough! I don't want to lose the baby!" he shouted back.
"Why should you care about the baby? She has nothing to do with you!" she screamed and walked towards the city.
"Where do you think you're going?" Mathieu yelled.
"None of your beeswax!" Lamina shouted over her shoulder and stopped suddenly. The ground rumbled and a huge set of double doors rose out of the earth. They creaked open and thick strands of pink goo flew out and wrapped around the legs and torsos of the reds before drawing them into the gate.
A disembodied laugh filled the air.
"Nighty night Coordinators!" Pele yelled and the greens were vaporized.
Better or worse than the original? Please drop a review saying no matter what (it can be totally random if you want). Flames accepted!