Standard Disclaimer: I don't own Yu Yu Hakusho, Yoshihiro Togashi does, but I did wish I owned it (sob). If I did Hiei and Kurama should have been together…

A Comedy

Okay, this is the story of what could have happened if Hiei lived in my previous story, it is a two shot. Two chapters. So don't expect too much. I'm sorry that I only got to do this now. Classes started so soon so yeah, you know, school work started once again. Right now, I just finished studying for a math quiz. Hope to pass…So anyway, this first chapter of my story is from the chapter where in Hiei gives birth. So yeah…it's nothing special. Well enjoy!

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It was an evening, it wasn't an ordinary evening, and it was Halloween. Many children were dressed in a costume; they went to different houses greeting the residences "trick or treat!" It was a happy tradition for the children in Ningenkai. Whenever someone rang the door bell to Kurama's house, Kurama would always answer the door and give candy to the little children. Hiei found it such an annoyance for people to keep on doorbelling, but it couldn't be helped, his fox was just too generous. Hiei had a big stomach; it made him look smaller whenever he wore something that was suitable in his condition as a pregnant demon. It was his last month, but their child still didn't want to come out, both couples were impatient, but they had to wait.

Both demons were eating their dinner at peace, Kurama was often interrupted at his meal because of the many children who came by and left. Hiei didn't say anything, he finished his meal and he placed it on the sink. He went to the living room and collapsed on the sofas. He watched his fox, apologizing to the children that there weren't any candies left. Kurama closed the door he was holding an empty bowl. Just earlier it was filled up with candies, but now they were all gone.

"Are finally finished now?" Hiei asked.

"Yes, all the candies are finished." Kurama sighed.

"At least those ningen won't be such a bother now. So pathetic how they look like dressing like fools. They don't come any nearer to how a real demon looks like." Hiei said criticizing the humans in their costumes.

Kurama smiled. "Hiei, I'll just go and wash the dishes, you stay put here alright?"

"HN, like I didn't now what to do."

Kurama went to the kitchen, and did what he said he was going to do. At that time Hiei was just sitting down the sofa, his mind wondering aimlessly.

After a moment, Kurama was finished with the dishes. He went to the living room where he told Hiei to be. "Hiei," he called. There was no response.

"Hiei?" Kurama was in the living room. Hiei wasn't there; he wasn't where he was supposed to be at. Kurama looked at the couch where he last saw the fire demon, and on the couch he saw blood.

"Hiei!" Kurama had an impression that Hiei was either inside their room or in the bathroom. Kurama rushed inside their room, Hiei wasn't there, but he was inside the bathroom. Kurama barged in the bathroom. Kurama found Hiei, he was on his knees, holding his stomach, and blood at the tiles of the bathroom.

"Ku-kurama…it hurts…" Hiei said his eyes were shut tight.

"Hiei, hold on. It will be alright." Kurama carried the fire demon bridal style, out of the bathroom, and laid him on their bed. Hiei was still in pain. The shirt he was wearing had blood stains on it.

"I'll call Genkai, Hiei hold on. Please, Hiei." Kurama said to Hiei.

Hiei shut his eyes. And he nodded. Kurama left the room. And rushed to the phone to call Genkai.

"Hello, Genkai?"

"Kurama?"

"Genkai, I need you here, now. It's Hiei; he's…he's…"

"I understand. Kurama, I may come on time, because of the crowd in my temple. But I'll try as much as possible, Kurama, do you know anything about child labor?" Genkai asked. Due to the festive, Genkai's temple was always filled with many people, praying at the shrines.

"…Genkai, I not capable of doing it on Hiei." Kurama didn't know what to answer.

"Kurama, tell Hiei to hold on to the baby until I arrive, if not, I'll leave on to you. Prepare hot water, many towels, and ask Hiei to wear a night gown or something that isn't pants, lastly always be at Hiei side, do understand me Kurama?" Genkai said.

"Genkai, I am not sure…" Kurama was at doubt.

"Kurama!" Genkai scolded at the phone.

Kurama nodded, he had to do it. "Okay Genkai, but please…" Kurama still hoped that Genkai would come.

"I'll try to arrive on time, but I won't keep promises."

"Alright Genkai." Kurama placed the phone down. He rushed to his mate; he did what Genkai told him to do. He boiled the water. And dressed him in a Yukata. Hiei was trying to hold on; he was trying his best to hold on to his baby.

"Kura…ma…" Hiei was holding on tight to his mate's shirt.

"Hiei, please hold on a little much longer. Please." Kurama was begging Hiei, it wasn't only Hiei who was in pain. Kurama too.

"But Kurama…" Hiei shouted, the baby was coming.

Kurama was confused, his thoughts were mixed up. He didn't know what to do anymore, but he had to do something, or else it could lead to something much worst.

"Hiei, I'll help you labor. I am not sure if Genkai is coming, but I'll do it in her place." Kurama said.

"Kurama!!" Hiei couldn't keep it much longer.

Kurama got the water he boiled; he dipped his hands into the water. It was hot, but Kurama kept all the pain in him. He positioned himself, and position Hiei. Kurama spread the legs of Hiei; he was being professional about it.

"Kurama?" Hiei tried to stand up and look at his mate.

"Hiei, I try my best in doing this. Please trust me, Hiei." Kurama asked.

"Ch, you're Youko, of course I do. I trust you with my whole life. You know that Kurama." Hiei smiled.

"Thank you Hiei. Now Hiei, I want you to push. Push as hard as you can." Kurama instructed.

Hiei was holding tightly at the sheets, he was hesitant at first, but the pain was unbearable. Hiei's energy began to drop dramatically; it was low because of the child who ate up most of it. Kurama was at his feet, at the lower end of the bed, he was guiding Hiei, no, and he was helping him.

"That's it. That's it," Kurama encouraged him. "Come on, Hiei. You can do it."

Hiei began to shake his head. Tears coming out, turning into tear gems. "No Kurama, it…hurts." He was holding on to the bed sheets.

"Shh…Hiei, its okay…you'll get through this, you're almost there." Kurama said; Kurama could clearly see his mate in so much pain. "Hiei, I need you to push again. The baby doesn't want to come out. This time I want your push to be like your putting everything into it." Kurama said to his mate, he was also in a hard situation.

Hiei closed his eyes tight. He began to give everything in this push. It hurt, blood, so much blood, everywhere. Hiei was shouting, he tried to breath.

Hiei panted for a moment before taking another deep breath. Again the pain and again he could feel the loss of his energy. He was in pain. His head throbbed. Hiei cried, his vision blurred and Hiei's Tear gems littered the bedspread.

"That's it Hiei! You can do it, the head is coming out." Kurama announced.

Hiei was in a desperate situation. He tried to do his best, but his energy was dropping dramatically, he didn't know if he can do it much longer.

Hiei stopped for a moment. He closed his eyes. And he opened them in a moment. "Kurama…" Hiei was panting.

"Come' on Hiei you're almost there." Kurama was pulling the baby out while Hiei was pushing. "One last push."

Hiei shut his eyes and he pushed he pushed like it was the push he would ever make in his life. He gave everything into that push. He shouted. He was gripping to the sheets tightly; he took one last deep breath. Pain and blood was all he felt. If he had had any energy left he surely would have spontaneously combusted. He felt as though he was being ripped in half. He cried out one final time and then he pitched forward again, managing to catch himself this time. He didn't know whether he still felt pain or not, his whole body had gone numb. He couldn't hear anything, he couldn't say anything. He lost so much blood. All Hiei wanted to do was be done with it.

Hiei couldn't see or hear anything, he was sweating so much. His body was numb, it was candor. So much blood was taken away from him. Hiei's eyes couldn't clearly see anything, but he can see his fox, he was approaching him. With the baby on his arms.

"Hiei…"

"Kurama?" Hiei could barely talk.

"You have a very beautiful daughter, Hiei." Kurama handed their daughter to Hiei. She wasn't completely cleaned, but she was wrapped in a white towel.

Hiei carried his daughter in his arms, he smiled. He blinked, and watched her. She was crying. Kurama smiled, and so did Hiei. Outside the window, was the first snow which fell from the sky, Hiei never kept his eyes away from their daughter?

"…Yuki," Hiei said.

"What was that Hiei?" Kurama bent over his family.

"Her name, its Yuki." Hiei said.

Kurama smiled, "That is the perfect name for her, Yuki, my daughter." Kurama kissed Hiei on the forehead.

Yuki had her face shaped like Hiei, the color of her eyes were of Youko's, but the shape off her eyes were almond just like Hiei, her nose was Hiei's as well, the style of her hair was like Kurama's but the color was Hiei's, it was black. Yuki had most of Hiei, but she was also a demon, a fire-ice-fox demon, it made a good combination. Just like Kurama can, Yuki can transform into the fox, when she was in the right age, but for now, she looked human to everyone's eyes.

Hiei was weak, his body was pale, because of the so much blood that was lost. Hiei handed his daughter to Kurama. He closed his eyes a tear came out, and a tear gem was formed. "I love you…both…" Hiei fell to sleep.

"We love you too Hiei." Kurama kissed Hiei on the cheek.

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Kurama cleaned up, he washed his daughter and his mate. Hiei was sleeping soundly. Kurama laid his newly born baby beside his mate who was resting. Both father and daughter were sleeping soundly.

The door bell suddenly rang. It was late at night. No one was out at the streets. Kurama opened the door and he saw Genkai. Genkai came, but she came too late.

"Kurama! Hiei?! We better go on with the operation!" Genkai barged in the home of Kurama worried about the fire demon and his labor.

"Genkai," Kurama began.

"There no time left!" Genkai was panicking.

"Genkai, calm down. The operation is done and over with. Hiei and our daughter are resting at the room. I am afraid that your coming was a waste." Kurama joked.

"Oh is that so? I told you that you can do it. Congratulations on your daughter Kurama." Genkai said and she stopped her panicking.

"Thank you Genkai." Kurama smiled.

"Well then, I'll be coming tomorrow to check up on the kid. Its getting late, I better goes now, and you rest Kurama, it's been a long night for you and your family." Genkai said.

"Thank you." Kurama escorted Genkai to the entrance door, and Genkai left.

After Genkai left, Kurama went to clean himself up and after, he went to his family, both Hiei and Yuki were sleeping soundly. He didn't want to disturb them; it's been hard for the both of them, especially Hiei. While Hiei was sleeping he held his daughter's right hand. Kurama was touched when he saw the scene.

He closed the room, he decided that he would be sleeping on the sofa that night; he was satisfied now that his daughter was born, and Hiei got through the labor. Everything was perfect that night. He gazed up to the night, it began to snow. He smiled with a thought: Koorime children can never get away from the Koorime curse even if her father was part fire demon. After this thought, Kurama finally drifted into sleep. He was happy, he has a family. His mate and his daughter, both in the next room.

It was a cold but cozy night. The new family drifted to sleep soundly. They were all happy and satisfied. There was a change at that moment when Yuki was born, it was a good change. There was new love that was formed, a love for the family.

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So what do think? It is better than the original one? Well think what you want to think. It took me days to do this because I had no time, but at the moment, I do! Haha, okay random…tomorrow is report card day! AHH!! But I already if I failed in any of my subjects or not, and I didn't fail anything. My Papa's going to get my report card tomorrow, and I hope that my grades improve… (Hopes).

(Sigh) Anyway, so what do you think of this? I thought that it would be really be impossible for Genkai to come to Kurama's house so I had no other option but make Kurama do the actual operation. Aint it cool??? Just tell me what you think through reviews. There is still a second chapter, but that the last chapter for this.

Oh yeah, ever wonder why it's called "A Comedy"? Well, we are discussing Shakespeare in our Literature subject and my teacher said if the ending is happy you call it a comedy, but if not its tragedy. I thought it would be a really cool title, so yeah; I made it its title. (No reason).

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