Shunned- Cliché remakes no 1

by Rosymist

I'm making a new series redoing common Warriors cliches. This one is about the shunned kit. Read for a better version of Warriors cliches! Bonus: No prophecies! Rated T for violence/Warriors. Criticism is appreciated

1. Allegiances and prologue

Hi! I'm going to be making a series of cliché remakes in the warriors world. They're basically making fun of the cliché and showing a different take on it. Without further ado, I present cliché #1: Shunned! We all know this cliché starts with the allegiances and birth, so here you go!

Allegiances:

BrookClan-

LEADER: Owlstar—pale yellow-and-black speckled she-cat with orange eyes

DEPUTY: Rockspeck—light gray speckled tabby tom with green eyes

MEDICINE CATS:

Adderflight—gold-and-cream splotchy tom with bright blue eyes

APPRENTICE, LITTLEPAW

WARRIORS:

Bramblestep—orange-and-gray tabby tom with gray eyes

Olivewater—very pale reddish-brown flecked she-cat with orange eyes

Snowpool—pure snowy-white dappled tom with green eyes

APPRENTICE, MINTPAW

Havenstripe—lighter fox-colored spotted she-cat with blue eyes

Vinebird—very dark tortoiseshell tabby she-cat with bright blue eyes

APPRENTICE, NIGHTPAW

Aldersnout—gray dappled she-cat with watery yellow eyes

APPRENTICE, ACORNPAW

Lichenpool—dark red flecked tabby tom with hazel eyes

Scorchleg—cream-and-gray freckled she-cat with vivid green eyes

Robinsky—light brown spotted tom with azure eyes

Hawkbright—very dark fox-red zigzag-striped tabby tom with light blue eyes

Hopeflame—pure white she-cat with emerald eyes

Stormspring—bright orange unevenly mottled tom with orange eyes

Needleshine—brownish-gray tom with amber eyes

Hickorywing—pale brownish-gray mottled tom with golden eyes

Furzewhisper—pale yellowish white flecked she-cat with ice-blue eyes

Sparrowstream—dark gold speckled she-cat with green eyes

Applebird—black-and-gray splotchy she-cat with holly-green eyes

APPRENTICES:

Littlepaw—lighter cream tabby she-cat with golden eyes

Mintpaw—dark brown spotted tom with heather-blue eyes

Nightpaw—very dark tortoiseshell she-cat with golden eyes

Acornpaw—lighter gold-and-cream tom with green eyes

QUEENS AND KITS:

Mallowslip—very pale brown tabby she-cat with sky-blue eyes (mother to Stormspring's kits: Berrykit and Whiskerkit)

Brindlestep—pale tortoiseshell tabby she-cat with light yellow eyes, expecting Hawkbright's kits

Berrykit—very pale orange-and-brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Whiskerkit—light brown flecked she-cat with azure eyes and six toes on her paws

ELDERS:

Quickfire—tawny-brown tabby tom with pale blue eyes

FlintClan-

LEADER: Applestar—golden and white tom

DEPUTY: Yewstripe—dark reddish brown tabby tom

MEDICINE CAT: Skygaze—blue-eyed she-cat

PROLOGUE:

"Adderflight! Littlepaw!" Brindlestep cried. "Mallowslip's kitting!" Stormspring sprang to his paws, worry filling him.

In a flash of gold and cream, Adderflight was running for the nursery, his jaws full of herbs. Stormspring tried to follow, but Littlepaw shook her head.

"Get Mallowslip some moss soaked in water," she instructed the tom. Stormspring nodded and dashed off. In her nest of moss, Mallowslip moaned and thrashed in pain. "Here," Adderflight soothed, placing an alder stick between her jaws. "Bite down on this when it comes."

Mallowslip wailed in pure agony. Her eyes grew wider and she screeched in pain as a small bundle fell into the moss. Littlepaw deftly nipped the sac and passed the kit to Brindlestep to lick its fur the wrong way. It was a tom.

"Another's coming!" Adderflight yowled. "Push, Mallowslip! This is the last one!"

The pale brown tabby queen writhed in pain as a second bundle fell onto the ground. Mallowslip let out a sigh of relief as she nipped the sac and licked her second kit till it mewled.

Placing her 2 kits—1 she-cat and 1 tom— at her belly, the blue-eyed she-cat purred. Suddenly Stormspring burst into the nursery with a bundle of dripping moss clutched in his jaws.

He stopped short when he saw his new kits. Giving Mallowslip the moss, he stared at the tiny kits lying by her belly. "They're amazing," he meowed, his voice cracking at the sight of his new family. "Beautiful."

"What should we name them?" Mallowslip meowed drowsily.

"How about Berrykit for the tom?" Stormspring suggested.

"Berrykit's cute. And... either Lightkit ot Whiskerkit for the she-kit." Mallowslip agreed.

"Lightkit or Whiskerkit.. oh, for your sister Lightwhisker! Okay, how about Whiskerkit?"

"Berrykit and Whiskerkit."

"Welcome to BrookClan, my little ones."

And that ends chapter 1! Please review!

QOTC: What should Brindlestep's kits names and appearances be like?

I honestly need ideas here, people XD