First and Second
Hey Guys, I'm Mokamokona with a Special A Fanfiction, Special A. This is my first so support is welcomed. Special A belongs to Maki Minami and so do all the characters. Enjoy
Chapter 1: Birthday Surprise
Date: August 10
Setting: Takashima Kei's house
Time: 6am (Early Morning)
"Kei-sama, Kei-sama, Wake up, the master would like to speak with you," A maid said knocking on Kei's door. Reluctantly, the tired Kei got out of bed, finding his little brother Sui curled up in a ball next to him. As Kei walked out of the room, he was bombarded with maids, "KEI-SAMA, HAVE YOU SEEN SUI-SAMA?" they all screamed at once, "Daijoubu, Sui-kun is sleeping in my bed. He had a nightmare and came into my room," Kei said walking away. *Knock* *Knock* "hai!" Kei walked into his fathers office knowing what this would be about. "Kei, today I'm going…" "No father, I can't help you today," Kei said stopping his father. "Why not?" the baby faced father asked. "Because I have a date with Hikari today," Kei said smiling walking out.
"Kei!" Hikari screamed as she waved running towards Kei. "Gomenesai, I'm late aren't I," Hikari said looking down. "No, I just got here early, I mean, you never leave a lady waiting on a date right? Miss nii-san," "DON'T CALL ME NII-SAN!" Hikari screamed in the middle of the street. As the two walked through the town, they decided to take a break in a cute little coffee shop. "Ahh, I use to bring Megumi-chan and Akira-chan here all the time!" Hikari said as they walked in. "I wonder what the rest of Special A is doing now that we have all graduated?" Kei said sitting down. "I wonder if Jun is still going out with Sakura-chan and if Megumi is still going out with Yahiro-kun?" It had been 4 years since graduation and the members of Special A had all grown up. "Are you sure you want to eat here?" A voice said… No response. "Hey lets go in and eat here!" "But we just ate!" two other voices said. "LETS EAT HERE!" "We will if you truly want to" "Kyaaaa." Hikari and Kei noticed so many familiar voices. "MEGUMI-CHAN? AKIRA-CHAN? SAKURA-CHAN? JUN-KUN? RYUU-KUN? YAHIRO-KUN? TADASHI KUN?" Hikari screamed as she turned around seeing all of her old friends. Crying, Hikari ran and hugged them all. "Happy Birthday Hikari-chan," Akira said. "Huh?" Hikari was now very confused. "Kei had set this up for today. We come in one after the other and act like we didn't know then we surprise you," Yahiro said. "Kei? You got everyone together like this today for my birthday?" Hikari asked. "Yes, Happy 20th Birthday Hikari," Kei said bringing his girlfriend into a hug.
"Tadaima!" Hikari called as she walked into her home knowing full well that no one was home. She kicked off her shoes and walked into her room, silence, no one was home. Her parents had moved away and her brother was studying abroad at a college. "I guess none of them decided to pop in today," Hikari said to herself. Then she saw a few wrapped up gifts sitting on her bedside table. Walking over to them, she saw her name on it. Hikari decided to open up the attached card first.
Dear Hikari,
Sorry we can't be there today. It's your 20th birthday but your father is very busy so we had this sent to you. I hope you have a great day and we will promise to come and visit you ASAP. We love you
Mum and Dad
P.S. Tell that Kei boy we said hi
P.P.S. Daddy says, DON'T GET PREGNANT!
"Ahhh, DAD, WHAT ARE YOU THINKING?" Hikari screamed. "What do you mean?" A familiar voice said from behind her. AS Hikari turned around, she saw her brother. "ANIKI!" Hikari called as she jumped and hugged him. "Happy birthday, Imoto" Her brother said. "So what do you mean when you screamed out that?" AS Hikari showed him the letter he just started to laugh, "That's just like dad to say something like that," He said. "Aniki, so what are you doing here? Aren't you suppose to be in America?" Hikari asked. "Well can't a brother visit his sister on her 20th? He asked, "Well yea but why would you come all the way from Japan to visit me on my birthday? You didn't do it last year," Hikari said. Then there was a sudden knock on the door. "I'm coming," Hikari shouted. "I'll be right back Nii-san," Hikari said jumping up and running to the door. When she opened up the door, no one was there, then suddenly she was kissed on the lips. "Gottcha," Kei said pulling away. "You scared me you Baka," Hikari said trying to hide her embarrassment. "I missed you," He said. "It's only been an hour since we parted ways for the night," Hikari said ushering him in. "I was hoping we could go get some dinner together," Kei said as he stepped inside. "You just treated me to lunch so I don't you waisting…" Hikari was cut off by the sudden appearance of her brother, "Who is this?" The two boys asked at the same time. "Kei, don't be alarmed," Hikari said, "So are you cheating on me with this person?" Kei asked. "No Kei, this is my Aniki. Nii-san, this is my boyfriend, Kei Takashima," Hikari said trying to introduce the two. "So this is the infamous Kei Takashima. Hikari would always writing about you when she writes letters to me. She will always tell me how she loves him and," "ANIKI! DON'T TELL HIM THAT!" Hikari shouted, "No, I'm interested about what Hikari has told you about me," Kei said with the smile of his. "Well, they always say how in love she is with you and how nicely you treat her. You spoil her rotten and always call her Nii-san. She also says that every waking moment she is with you, she is waiting for you to ask a certain question, but she hasn't told me what that question is yet," Hikari's brother said. "I see," Kei said sounding interested. "Hikari, you told me you haven't seen your brother in a while, so I'll go, but I will take you out to dinner tomorrow night. No if's or but's," Kei said kissing his newly embarresed girlfriend from her brothers story on the forehead (If that made no sense, Kei kissed Hikari on her forehead). When Kei walked out, Hikari's brother stood up looking angry. "Hikari, I want you to break up with him," He said.
Translation Notes:
-Sama: Used with someone with a higher status than you
-Kun: used for boys your aged or younger
-Chan: Used for younger girls you or girls around the same age
-Hai: Yes
- Gomenasai: Sorry
- Nii-san, in this fan ficiction, it is used in two ways, 1. Meaning Miss number 2 which is what Kei calls Hikari or Hikari will shout to not say it and Hikari also uses it to address her older brother
- Aniki: Brother
-Imoto: Little Sister
-Baka: Idiot
- Tadaima: I'm home
-Daijoubu: Don't worry
Hey Guys, thanks for reading chapter one. I know it's not very good but please just support me. Chapter 2 is in the making. Please comment, follow and favourite. If you have any comments let me know. Any constructive criticism is appreciated but no hate comments.
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