Hello there people!
Firstly, 'Blame it on the Butterflies' will be updated in the next few days, let me get some sleep ok?
HOWEVER...I just HAD TO do another entry to "The Hideaway". So here is my entry for The Hallowen "Who's Line Poetry". You had to use this line of poetry:
It was I who was haunted
but it was you who were alive...
Lets see if this worked.
BTW: this has two characters
Remus is in Italics
Sirius is in bold.
When they speak togeather is Bold Italics
"And Death decends..."
Time has slowed
I see you face behind the curtain
My pulse has quickened
Your arms tighten, your tears glisten
My senses heightened
And Death descends...
Been coming so slowly, since that first moonrise.
Been coming up behind me, even though I didn't hide.
Slowly taunting, slowly taking
All that I loved 'erside.
And Death descends...
Did you fall? Had it purpose?
Heed my screams heaven rung?
My life is flashing, ever quickly.
Have I finished? Am I done?
And Death descends...
Now can you see?
Let them forget me.
All my failures!
Be good, be stong.
All your faults!
The pack, let it guide you.
All those dreams!
Live them for me.
And Death descends...
Inside these walls your memory lingers on,
And I've never left your side, but
It was I who was haunted
and was you who were alive...
PS: Remus, Sirius, Death, Life, And the Curtain of Lost Souls. Enough Said.
Pps: WHAT THE HELL? My last story, went up yesterday, called Nemo Nisi Mors, has had over 200 hits and only one review! come on guys! i take constructive crit too you know!