Pinza: So I rewrote these chapters. I know that they had really bad grammar, but do you, certain people, need to rub in my face?

~Lucy's POV~

I was walking on Vanilla Street, when somebody grabbed my hand.

"Sting! Don't scare me like that! So, why did you grab my hand?" I asked from bee boy.

"I just want to make sure that you'll come listen who are in Grand Magic Game's team" Sting replied and started to drag me to the guild house.

~Timeskip~ In the guild

Master Jiemma appeared to front of guild and started to speak:

"I have decided who is going to be in Grand Magic Game's team. So listen up you brats! In the team is Rogue, Sting, Rufus, Orga and Lucy! We'll leave tomorrow to Crocus. That's all. You can leave now."

"Nii-san!" I shouted to Rogue over the sea of mages.

"What's up Luce?" He asked and smiled to me.

"Do you know, why I am in the team?" I freaked out.

"Because you are strong" Sting said before Rogue could reply to me.

"But I'm not" I protested in panic. What if I lose in Games?

"Yes, you are. You're dragon slayer! And don't be scared, we are there with you" Sting grinned.

"Um… Okay" I said. But they still can't be with me forever.

~Timeskip~ In Crocus

Sting and Rogue, mainly Sting, had little "fun" by beating up other mages.

"Who's next?" Sting roared in joy.

Just after the roar, a pink haired guy came out.

"Hey! I know you" Sting smirked. "Natsu 'Salamander' Dragneel, the fire dragon slayer. Am I right?"

"Yeah, I am. So what?" Pinky snapped.

"So, you really came back from death, huh? And I see you are still a Fairy" Sting chuckled.

"Gotta problem with that? If so, I'm gonna kick your ass in the Games" Pinky replied.

"Why not now? You seem to be so sure of your win. Or are you scared?" Sting mocked him.

"No I'm not scared. But you have a really beautiful chick with you, and I don't want to ruin my change to get her to bed with me~" Natsu laughed.

Suddenly Sting hit him, very hard. "Don't even think her like that" Sting hissed.

I was in shock when Sting came to me. His face showed mix of angriness and depression.

"Let's go."

Pinza: Now, does it look better? I remind you, this was first fanfic that I wrote in English. Got it memorized? [Kingdom Hearts so much ; ]