So, This is my first chapter EVER, to be posted on Fanfiction, so I am not sure whether this is good enough, but that is why I am asking for positive feedback or advice, regarding the way I write. Anywho, Welcome to the first Chapter of Star Wars Guardians! Oh, I do not own Star Wars the Clone Wars, That belongs to Disney, The only thing I own is my OC, Ion Gree
Chapter 1: shocking news
My parents gave me a big hug, and I hugged them, this was a day that none of us saw all started when I was playing with my classmates after school, in the local park, "hey Ion? You're It!" I sighed, then gave chase, I was the fastest out of the bunch of us, and loved to play with them a bit, we were so occupied, we didn't notice that a man was watching me, and was approaching me, "Excuse me young man," he started, we all stopped, "what is it sir?" I asked, the slightest bit nervous, "Don't worry, you're not in trouble, just that, you seem like someone that I would like to meet, do you live around here, I've been traveling far, and need a rest," I scanned this man, he looked friendly, he felt friendly, he was a Zabrak man, so he had multiple horns on his head and face, "Ion?" one of my friends asked, "It's ok, Mimi? You're It ok?" I said, before guiding the man away.
The man was asking many questions on the way home, "So, you're fastest out of your group of friends?" he asked, "you got it, I like that, it allows me to have fun with them from time to time," I grinned, the man nodded, "What is your name sir?" I asked, "My name is Eeth, Eeth Koth, pleased to meet you… Ion? Was it?" I nodded, "that's me, Ion Gree, a solid seven years old, I'm the best in my class, everyone is my friend and I am super smart! At least, that's what father and my teacher say," I said, "interesting," said the man, we had arrived home, at least, to the high rise that we lived in, We entered the turbolift, that went up 20 floors, and arrived at one apartment facing the sea, I slid in my access card, and walked in, mother greeted me, "Greeting Ma'am, I am Eeth Koth, A member of the Jedi Council, I have come to speak with you and Mr Gree, regarding your son, do not worry, He is not in any trouble," Eeth said, "welcome to our home Master Jedi, Ion, go play with your sister," mother instructed, "yes mother," I said, walking off.
Eeth waited for Ion to enter a room, before following Mrs Gree to a seating area, "please, sit, would you like something to drink?" asked the woman, "yes, thank you," Eeth said, who accepted the offer to sit, she returned a moment later, carrying a tray of three cups, Eeth took one, and the mother and father sat down opposite him, "What is this all about?" asked the father, "I have come to speak with you, regarding a feeling I sensed within your son, a warm, strong conscience," Eeth began, "Ion has always been a wonderful boy, he rarely gets angry, and when he does, he calms down really quickly, he is extremely polite, to us, his teachers, his friends, he has always been like that," Ion's father said, "by the way, I'm Kyle, and this is my wife Francine," he then added, "thank you, I now want to tell you that I believe that Ion is extremely gifted in the force, he just doesn't know it yet, he says that he is faster than all of his classmates, and that he gets extremely good marks in class, you have said that he is very intelligent, this is quite a feat for a seven year old boy, I'd like to take a sample of his blood, if that is fine with you," Eeth said, "sure thing, Ion! Come here for a second," Francine said, and Ion emerged from the other room, "Mr Koth would just like to take a small blood sample from you," Kyle said, Eeth raised a medical chip, "please, hold out your arm, this won't hurt, in fact, it is as harmless as a fly," Eeth said, Ion cooperated, and Eeth took his sample, "thank you young man, that will be all for now," Eeth said, and Ion left again, "now, time for the moment of truth," He said, Kyle handed the Jedi a datapad, and Eeth inserted the chip, "It would seem that your son has indeed been blessed, he has a Midi-chlorian count of 8000, my own count is a mere hundred ahead," Eeth said, surprised, "and that means that what?" Kyle asked, "With your permission, and his, I can take him to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant, where he can receive training, and become a Jedi," Eeth smiled.
The parents were speechless, "oh dear! Our son! He'll be a protector of the galaxy!" Francine said, they were over the moon, "Master Jedi, I can say that we do approve of this course of action," Kyle said, equally happy, "there is still his permission, he may be happy here," Eeth said, "We can get that for you, please, let us have a word with our children together," Eeth nodded, he walked out on to the balcony, and waited patiently. I was called in again, but this time I was told to bring my sister, so the two of us walked through, "yes mother?" I asked, "Ion, We have wonderful news!" She beamed, father put an arm on my shoulder, "son, you have potential, much more than we all thought, you are strong enough in something called the force so that you may become a Jedi," He said, this was unexpected, but really epic, as I really want to help other people, and protect others, "Then, I'd better pack my bag then," I said, "So, son, I need a yes or no now, are you ok to go away and become a Jedi?" asked mother, "I am," I said, determined, "Good answer, you have our support, Ion, all of us, I understand that being a Jedi limits attachments, but do call us, on occasion," father said, "I will father, should someone go get Mr Koth?" I asked, "I can do it," said my sister, Natalie, and she walked off to the balcony.
Eeth was sat in a chair, waiting, the door to the balcony opened, "Mr Koth Sir? You can come back in now," Eeth stood, "well then young lady, lead the way," he said, smiling down at the little girl, who nodded, Eeth re-entered the sitting room to see Francine help pack a small sack for Ion, "so, I assume that you have chosen the right path," He asked, "I did, please sir, I want to come with you, and be strong, and protect those in need of it," Eeth nodded, "that is the perfect mindset for being a Jedi," he said, Francine handed Ion a necklace with a gem, "this is a family heirloom, that was passed down to me from my mother when I was a little girl, and now I want you to have it," she said, "thank you mother, Master sir, on occasion, will I be able to contact my family?" asked Ion, "on occasion, not every week or everytime you do well, understood?" Eeth nodded, "Yes Master," Ion nodded, he pulled on his jacket, and Eeth let them say their goodbyes.
And now, as I broke apart from the hug with my parents, both said something to me, "may the force be with you, son," and I had the feeling to repeat it, so I did, "and may the force be with you, Mother, Father, Natalie," I said, nodding to all three, and walked towards the door, Father gave me his casual, two finger salute, Mother blew a kiss, and Natalie waved, I decided to copy the first, and said goodbye, then, I opened the door, and Eeth left first, followed by myself, I moved towards the turbolift, waiting for Master Koth, who was talking quietly with my parents, but he quickly finished and moved to join me, the lift sped to the ground floor, and we walked out, walking through the streets, I noticed we were passing by the park, all the gang were now playing hide and seek, I wanted to say goodbye to them, "make it quick, I am late back to the ship," Eeth said, so I rushed over to them, they all walked over, "Ion? Where are you going?" asked one, "will you come back?" asked another, "guys, guys," I said, and held out my hands, once they had stopped the barrage of questions, I took the floor, "Guys, I am going to Coruscant, the capital of the Republic, Master Koth, the man from earlier, discovered that I am force sensitive," I started, Mimi had a question, "You're going to be a Jedi?" she asked, this brought a round of cheer and questions, but I stopped them, "yes, I am going to contact my parents every three months, or more, and I'll write to you, Mimi, I know where you live the most, so I'm relying on you to pass on my messages to the others, ok?" I asked her, "ok Ion, but before you go," she gave me a hug, and a small peck on my cheek, "Mimi, I would feel the same, but, unfortunately, the Jedi Code apparently bans attachments," I said, this made her feel sad, "but, I will write, have faith, all of you," I said, they all nodded, "farewell my classmates, and let's hope we meet again."
So what do you think? I honestly can say that this wasn't as hard as I had been thinking it would, If you liked this and want more, please give some good words in the reviews, and if you like it, I'll post the second chapter soon. This is the Cyber Spartan, peace!