Sorry to everyone who read this and saw just one letter I chose the wrong document and that's what you saw so I really apologize and please do read this cuz it is a real story. Fanfiction also deleted the first chapter I had for this story so I'm mad but anyways here is the rewritten, probably not as good first chapter.

Tris POV

The initiates arrive today, I'm training them with Christina she gets the Dauntless borns and I get transfers. Four unfortunately can't train cuz he's now a Dauntless leader. Last year Marcus resigned and so Four decided to take up Maxs offer on being a Dauntless leader. At least he can help though. But we've decided to keep our relationship from the initiates until they are members. I hear Four talking to the initiates on the roof and the I wait for the scream.

"Ahhhh" there it is, and our first jumper is... Candor what do you know? Well I guess I better start my job.

"What's your name?" I ask him.

"Harley" Like the motorcycle? Ok then, I guess it's pretty Dauntless. The rest of the initiates jump off until everyone is down. We have 10 Dauntless born and 9 transfers. The transfers consist of 4 candor, 4 erudite, and one amity. Christina takes her initiates and leaves. I'm left alone with the transfers still slightly disappointed that Four can't be here with me.

"I'm your trainer Tris and I will be your trainer for the next 3 weeks. Now I'm going to take you on a tour around the Pit ann then to your rooms."

"Do boys and girls share a room?" And Candor asks

"yes" I reply with a smile "Anyone else?"

"um ya" an Erudite starts, wow I'm actually surprised "How are you a Dauntless trainer?" Wow I thought the Erudite would be smarter than this and boy will he regret that question I'm going to make his training a living hell. I ignore the question and start the tour.

We get to the dorms where I drop them off. "Be ready, training starts tomorrow at 7:00 sharp. Don't be late."

I hope you like it. I tried to spell everything right although my punctuation probably wasn't that good. How did I do? Please review and tell me I'd really appreciate it and might mention you in the next chapter. Thanks for reading especially if you saw this story when it was just one letter.