Okay, this is my second fic THIS NIGHT! After I saw the Danny Phantom tonight, I HAD to make my own version (prisoner of love: 5-14-04) Anyway, here's a very weird version, and it's very depressing. Okay, not very, but it's sad. I almost started crying while writing this. How could Maddie do that to Jack? Anyway, you'll see.
It was raining out-side. But, even though he had just walked into the house, Jack's face was wet for another reason.
"Jack, that's the final straw! I can't take this anymore!"
"But, Maddie…"
"Don't try to get me to stay, Jack! You won't be able to!"
"But what about the kids?"
"They're all yours! I don't even want to see those little monsters again!" Maddie slammed the door. Danny, Jazz, Tuck, and Sam had been watching from the hallway.
"Um, did we come at a bad time?" Sam asked, nervously. Danny and Jazz just stared, mouths hanging open.
"I think we better go…" Tuck and Sam walked quietly through the back door. No one seemed to notice.
Danny couldn't move. It seemed that his whole body was numb.
Jazz tried to say something to Danny, like 'Go comfort him' or something, but she couldn't. The silence in the house was deafening, punctured only by Jack's sobs.
Finally, Danny moved slowly to where Jack was kneeling on the floor.
"Dad…?" Danny couldn't think of what to say.
"Danny, what did I do wrong? Maybe I forgot a few things every once in a while, but…agh!" Jack couldn't see any more. He couldn't feel anything, not even his son's hand on his shoulder. He felt like going to his room on the second floor and jumping out the window. Yes, that would end the pain, he thought, but what would Danny and Jazz do?
"Dad, you never did anything wrong."
Jazz realized what Danny was about to say. She tried to rush up to him, trying to get him to stop, but she was too late.
"Really Dad, it's Mom's loss."
Jazz almost slapped herself. This wouldn't end well.
"Your mom's loss? YOUR MOM'S?" Jack almost couldn't control his anger. He stood up, facing Danny.
"Don't you think that I have feelings too? Don't you think that I LOVED your mother?" Jack stormed upstairs, looking for something to take his anger out on. Finally, he decided to just lie down and cry some more. Sometime around midnight, he fell asleep, and had dreams about all the good times he had with Maddie. Life would never be the same for him.
Oh my gosh, seriously, I think I won't stop crying until I get a review. I can't see to make another chapter, so make it fast if you want the story to go on. Trust me, it gets better. There is a happy ending.
