It seemed so long waiting for him. I wonder if I should just leave it all
behind me now. It seems so far away. It's like a dream... like something
that never happened. I have to forget him for Raven. But why should I
forget Li?? He was once my dream, my only source of happiness. But it has
all changed now. Li left me behind. Why should I still hold my love for him
when Raven loves me?????????? Things are changed and perhaps I should just
change.
Sakura smiled to herself and gazed out of the window. Cherry Blossoms have started to bloom. Petals fell on her rich long brown hair as she waited with a faraway look in her eyes. It's time soon to kill Raven......
Raven was her enemy after he killed Madison with such brutality because it had turned out that Madison was spying on him. She remembered Madison's last words to her: Remember to revenge
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Raven had not known Madison at first. Madison's attractive features attracted Raven maybe. He had gone out with Madison for a time and her friend Sakura was very encouraging for them to be together. Unfortunately as soon as he saw Sakura he felt somehow different towards her. A bond, a bond without words. Days later after his first date with Madison he found out from his mother that his father had been killed by Madison's father through a dispute over business. Her mother had wanted one thing: REVENGE
Raven felt he could not let himself to do such things to Madison. But things ..the ideas, his life has been changed overnight when his mother had killed herself. Raven felt a surge of hatred. Madison's family was the cause of all of this. He had lost all of his loved ones. Now she had to pay.
He murdered her on their second date. What a pity that she had to die fast. He would have threatened her and tortured her. That would have had made her life more miserable and will be even better but unfortunately he wanted Sakura and to not cause any suspicions he murdered her by plunging his family sword into Madison before pushing her off into the river to die forever. Forever and ever never to return. Unfortunately, Sakura had seen this and recorded this from a far corner because she had promised Madison to film down her second date, her most joyful date with Raven.
At the time, Sakura stared at Raven and stepped backwards horrified. The Video camera dropped to the floor with a crack. Sakura had stared back with tears running down her soft white cheeks her eyes full of grief and anger. She walked backwards and not noticing the cliff behind her she stepped into the air and screamed. Raven however had grabbed her and had to drag her up from the edge of the cliff. "Why Raven? Why did you kill her??? She was my only friend, the only true and loyal friend who I had? Why did you kill her?????" Sakura cried and broke down onto the floor sobbing and moaning as if she would die.
" I'm sorry but her father killed my father. My mother died because of her family. She had to pay for what her family had done to me. Her family left me with no relatives.. not one .....no families...why shouldn't I kill her???????? Her family is our family's enemy. To kill her is revenge. The only thing that I could do to honour my relatives and family who had died in her family's hands.
Sakura stared back and wiped her tears away...... She smiled a rueful smile. "you have to kill her just because of that? I will not accept your answer. I will leave and go to meet her in heaven. Before Raven could do anything Sakura raced to the cliff and Jumped with her eyes full to the brim with tears........
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peoples.please review on my writing. Criticise it and make more suggestions so I could make the story a better story. Second chapter is coming on its way soon....
Sakura smiled to herself and gazed out of the window. Cherry Blossoms have started to bloom. Petals fell on her rich long brown hair as she waited with a faraway look in her eyes. It's time soon to kill Raven......
Raven was her enemy after he killed Madison with such brutality because it had turned out that Madison was spying on him. She remembered Madison's last words to her: Remember to revenge
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Raven had not known Madison at first. Madison's attractive features attracted Raven maybe. He had gone out with Madison for a time and her friend Sakura was very encouraging for them to be together. Unfortunately as soon as he saw Sakura he felt somehow different towards her. A bond, a bond without words. Days later after his first date with Madison he found out from his mother that his father had been killed by Madison's father through a dispute over business. Her mother had wanted one thing: REVENGE
Raven felt he could not let himself to do such things to Madison. But things ..the ideas, his life has been changed overnight when his mother had killed herself. Raven felt a surge of hatred. Madison's family was the cause of all of this. He had lost all of his loved ones. Now she had to pay.
He murdered her on their second date. What a pity that she had to die fast. He would have threatened her and tortured her. That would have had made her life more miserable and will be even better but unfortunately he wanted Sakura and to not cause any suspicions he murdered her by plunging his family sword into Madison before pushing her off into the river to die forever. Forever and ever never to return. Unfortunately, Sakura had seen this and recorded this from a far corner because she had promised Madison to film down her second date, her most joyful date with Raven.
At the time, Sakura stared at Raven and stepped backwards horrified. The Video camera dropped to the floor with a crack. Sakura had stared back with tears running down her soft white cheeks her eyes full of grief and anger. She walked backwards and not noticing the cliff behind her she stepped into the air and screamed. Raven however had grabbed her and had to drag her up from the edge of the cliff. "Why Raven? Why did you kill her??? She was my only friend, the only true and loyal friend who I had? Why did you kill her?????" Sakura cried and broke down onto the floor sobbing and moaning as if she would die.
" I'm sorry but her father killed my father. My mother died because of her family. She had to pay for what her family had done to me. Her family left me with no relatives.. not one .....no families...why shouldn't I kill her???????? Her family is our family's enemy. To kill her is revenge. The only thing that I could do to honour my relatives and family who had died in her family's hands.
Sakura stared back and wiped her tears away...... She smiled a rueful smile. "you have to kill her just because of that? I will not accept your answer. I will leave and go to meet her in heaven. Before Raven could do anything Sakura raced to the cliff and Jumped with her eyes full to the brim with tears........
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peoples.please review on my writing. Criticise it and make more suggestions so I could make the story a better story. Second chapter is coming on its way soon....