I cant sleep so I decided to write
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A child cries broke the silence. "Not that it mattered" Orchimaru thought to himself as he wiped the sweat from his brow and looked at his handy work. He had succeed and soon these children would make more powerful then the sage of six paths himself. He looked down at the children one last time then flashed steeped to deal with the troublesome Third Hokage
Sarutobi puffed out more smoke as he watched over the village with particular persons in mind Naruto and Sakura. Ever since they had been rescued from orchimaru's lab at the tender age of Seven they were inseparable which with the seals and experiments he had done to them was a good thing. He felt a chill go down his spine as he remembered the state they had been in. Sakura had been in covered in seals and blood luckily the seals only covered Sakura's chest and back , Naruto on the other hand had gotten of easy in comparison only a single seal on the back of his right shoulder. He had not dared to mess with them cause he could see it plainly any attempt to change the seals would be instantly fatal for both Sakura and Naruto.
He sighed and returned to his office a little worried but they were Konoha shinobi he had every faith in them and their will of fire to overcome any plot of darkness.
And that's the end of the prologue please tell me what you think and how I can improve as a writer