Bleach – twisting time

This Is a rewritten version of the story because when I written chapter 5 on paper I dident like some of the things I've done and ended up in writers block. *sigh*, so im re-doing it from the beginning but keeping most things the same.

Chapter 0: plorge

The streets were filled with crimson red blood. The war was lost. All who stood against Aizen were long ago killed, only five alive now.

"what do you mean Kisuke?" Yoruichi asked looking at the man in front of her like he was insane.

"exactly what I said, I maniged to build a time machine so we can win the war this time round."

"you've got to be kidding me, is'ent time traveling impossible?" satsuna said looking at him with the same expression as Yoroichi.

"well it isn't really time travel, as you said its impossible, instead we'll end up in a different dimension in the past."Urahara explained removing his informis fan from nowhere.

"but are you sure we'll win this time?" Yoruichi asked.

"do you want to fail? If we go back well have knowledge of what's to come, since it won't be very different from this dimension, and with enough time to plane it out, I doubt we'll fail the second time round."

"I'll get ichi and Rukia" Satsuna said showing her agreement .Urahara nodded as she disappeared in a flash of speed.

~~~later~~~

"everyone redy?" Urahara asked reseving nods in response."Good, this is how it works, these tablets when enough rashi is added sends us about 103 years in the past, now we need to put them into a circle and step inside only put rashi in one when I say so."

They all nodded and began doing as instructed, once everything was in place huge amounts of rashi could be detected coming from underground in the Urahara shop, as a blue pillar of pure rashi shot up to the darkened sky's. ~~~?~~~

"fuck, were are we?"

YEY!~~~~ first chapter done I may do some of the second today but I wont be updating tomorrow. hope people like it, and incase people ask satsuna is a oc that's going to be ichigos twin sister in the story.

Plz comment and give me ideas for later chapters. And before I forget sorry for all spelling an grammar mistakes I may have made.