First Chapter!
finished in less than a day!
but than again I'm not good at typing up stories so please be kind!
and if you find any of my typos please tell me!
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What seems like a normal day in the Smash Mansion...
"give me back my cap!" yelled ness as he ran to catch the cap thief, Toon link. "I got your cap!I got your cap!" taunted Toon link. Suddenly someone blocked his path"STOP." They said loud and firmly. Toon link stopped dead in his tracks, but was tackled by Ness who apparently didn't here the command.
As they both fell to the ground toon link saw who had stopped him, it was the 'goody goody' Pit.
Meanwhile, Ness, still a little dazed, took this oppertunity to take back his cap and ran as he cheered"ha! I got it back! In your face!" toon link WOULD have gone after him to steall it again but Pit grabbed him by the collar of his shirt,"How many times have I told you that it's not right to steal?" he spoke in a most motherly way, toon link yanked himself out of his grasp and yelled "enough times so that I don't care anymore!" and he ran after Ness.
Pit sighed 'why don't they ever listen!?' he thought to himself. "If you're wondering why they don't listen to you, it's because you're too easy on them" Pit almost jump out of his skin and turned around to see Snake smoking a cigarette "don't be such a sissy, damn..." Pit straighted up "Didn't your mother teach you it's not polite to curse?" he told the 'potty mouthed' smoker. Snake rolled his eyes,"Well sorry mom, but seriously here..." he started "You really have to grow some damn balls if you want to be taken seriously get a little angry or something." Pit felt completely insulted but because of his good natured ways he could only say "y-yeah well... the way I scold the kids is none of you're buisness!" Snake simply rolled his eyes and said "On the contrarey, 'cupid' it is my buisness" Pit cringed at the nickname Snake had givin him,it was almost as bad 'Martha'(poor Marth) but he signed and listened "Those little 'twerps' keep breaking into my room and stealing my explosives and using them around the house, and it's pissing me off!" he took a puff of his cigarette before continuing"anyway all I'm saying is to try harder." and with that he left.
Snakes words echoed in Pit's head the rest of the afternoon 'try harder' but Pit was trying harder, he was just too gentle-hearted, and somewhat of a push-over, even he had to admit it,"how can I possibly get them to listen?" he asked himself "I'm just not the type of person to be angry or anything like that, I'm just pathetic..."and there was silence.
"yeah, I guess you kinda are" Pit turned to look at the speaker, it was Samus, leaning on the wall, with a sympathetic smile on her face,"but I think there might be a way I can help you with that" Pit suddenly felt a burst of joy and gave Samus one of his 'famous' hugs (his hugs make people feel warm inside) which even Samus couldn't help but hug him back and squeal,the little angel was just so irresitibly cute, but even she didn't know her own strength and nearly crushed Pit (who was now turning blue) until "Samus... I..can't... BREATHE" he finally choked out."oops!"she said as she let Pit go and he fell to the floor "my bad..." Pit took one big gulp of air before speaking" It's alright, it's not the first time it's happened to me..." Samus lifted him from the ground and he spoke again"So when can you teach me?" he asked her, Samus smiled and answered" whenever you're ready!"
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a little short but there you have it!
And NO I am not implying PitSamus I just wanted to make Pit a little sweety, but I will put a little SnakeSamus later on in the chapters.
please review!
-Mell