The Arrival of the Rival! Enter Malik!

This is my time putting my story out. If you like it then you like it. If you hate it then you don't gotta read it. Simple as that

One Piece is my favorite anime so I decided to make my first story about my OC going around doing whatever he's doing. I'm saying it now, my crew and the Strawhats will have a lot in common, rather in crew mates or adventures, but I'll give it my best shot to make it as original as possible

So here it is. Give it a shot, leave some feedback, and keep on doing you

((This story will be told in the 1st person to my OC))

One day in a village on the Grand Line, there was an awful amount of commotion for it being so early. A group of pirates were causing a ruckus at a local bar

"Hey blondie!" the captain yelled "Where are those drinks?! We're finally heading out to sea, we can't go anywhere without celebrating first! HAHAHA!"

"Y-Yes sir" the terrified bar tender said

The pirates just laughed and continued their 'celebration' unaware of the strange woman who just entered bar

This woman was about 5' 10", with bushy black hair tied into a large ponytail. She was wearing a black jacket with the top half unzipped enough to see her white bikini top and light brown bell bottom jeans. Mostly importantly this woman had two swords on the left side of her waist

"Can I have some sake please?" the woman asked taking a seat at the booth

"I'm sorry. This group took all the sake" the tender said

"Seriously?" the woman sighed "Oh well. Can't be helped if they already bought it I guess"

"Actually… they didn't pay for any of their drinks" the bar tender said looking down

"Huh? That's not cool" the woman said standing up "I love a drink as much as the next girl but this is a little much"

The woman walked up to the man barking orders

"Are you the leader?" she asked

"Damn straight!" the man yelled "The name's Zane! Captain of the Cannibal Pirates!"

"That's… unsettling" the woman commented "Listen just pay for your drinks and we won't have a problem. This is a nice spot and don't appreciate it being disrespected like this"

"Huh?! You got some balls for a chick!" he spat

"Excuse me?" she said lifting an eyebrow

"You heard me" he grinned "Hey you should come with me"

"Thanks for the offer, but how do I say 'drop dead' without offending you?" the woman smirked

"HUH?!" the entire crew yelled

A blade came swinging at the woman's head

"Gentlemen…" she said as she blocked the sword with her own "can't we talk this out?"

"How did you…?' the man with the sword asked stunned "D-Dammit!"

"Guess not" she hummed

The man began swinging outrageously while the woman just stood there deflecting each swing

"Ok this is getting sad" she said as she slashed the man down "Anyone else?"

Without hesitation the entire crew attacked her at once

"Can't say I didn't ask" she sighed holding up both her swords "Guess it can't be helped. Let's have some fun"

The strange woman stood in one spot blocking attacks striking men down

"Enough!" Zane yelled

"Hm?" the woman looked at him

Zane was holding the bar tender lady in a headlock with a pistol to her head

"You alright" the swordswoman asked

The scared woman just nodded her head

"Now..." Zane said "you're gonna put your swords down or I'm gonna blow this bitch's— "

A wind blew by and the swordswoman was standing behind them

"It's not nice to call women bitches" she said resting her sword on her shoulder "Silent… Reaper"

The pistol Zane was holding suddenly split in half

"W-What did you—AHH!" Zane screamed as chest split open out of nowhere

Zane collapsed on floor like the rest of his crew

"Thank you…" the bar tender said still shaking

"No problem" she said putting her swords back in their sheaths "Oh and uhh… sorry about the damages"

"Oh no it's fine" the bar tender shook her head

"Well I think I overstayed my welcome. I'll be on my way" she said walking to the door

"Wait! I'm Chelsey. What's your name?" the tender asked

The woman opened the bar doors and just stood there

"I'm Abigail" she smirked "I heard there was a strong man here. If you see him, tell him… I'll be waiting in the forest and that I came to take his title as the strongest"

With that Abigail walked out

"Hey! Abigail wait! Chelsey yelled running after her

Chelsey ran outside and looked around but didn't see any trace of the woman around

"What a strange girl" Chelsey smiled

About half an hour later another strange character walked into the bar

"Huh?" Chelsey said turning around and smiling "Malik"

I was a 6' 1" man with dark skin, sharp teeth, sharp nails, nappy hair and semi-pointy ears. I was wearing a red shirt with an open black vest and long white basketball shorts with a black paw print in the lower left corner

"Whoa…" I said looking around the bar "What happened here"

"There was a fight" Chelsey said looking at my feet "Malik! How many times do I have to tell you? You have to have footwear to come in here"

"I don't like how they feel. Besides I move faster without them" I commented looking at my bare feet "But that's not important. Why the hell is Zane's crew on the floor?"

"You know them?" Chelsey asked

"Yeah they've been hanging around town the past couple days" I said sitting in a chair and using some of the unconscious men as a foot rest "Bragging about how they were gonna conquer the seas then the world blah blah blah… Man I wish I was could have been here. I would've loved to smack these jerks around. But I guess someone beat me to it. Is the guy who did this still around?"

"No she left" Chelsey answered

"She? A girl did this? That's awesome!" I laughed

"Malik?" Chelsey said

"Do you have any idea where she went?" I asked

"She said she'd be waiting in the forest for the strongest man so she could take his title"

"What? She called me out?!" I snapped

"I don't think she was referring to you" Chelsey mumbled

"She wants a fight, she's got one!" I growled

"Malik please don't do anything out of line" Chelsey pleaded aware of what I was thinking

Ignoring her words, I bolted out the door and ran to the forest

"AHHHH! Just you wait girl! I'm coming for you!" I yelled

"Wait for me please!" Chelsey yelled running after me

Deep in the forest Abigail was sitting against a tree at the bottom of a hill wiping the blood off her swords

"HEY!"

"Hm?" Abigail questioned standing up

I was standing at the top of the hill with a glade

"M-Malik…" Chelsey panted running up "please don't start a fight with her"

"Relax Chels I got this" I said punching my hand

"What do you want?" Abigail asked with her hand on her waist

"Are you the one who cut down Zane's crew?!" I yelled

"Yeah that was me" she smirked "Why, was he your friend?"

"Hell no I couldn't stand the guy!"

"Then what's the problem?" Abigail asked

"I heard you were looking for the strongest guy in the village so you could take his title" I growled

"That's right. What's that gotta do with you?"

"You want the strongest?!" I yelled jumping high in the air "WELL HERE I AM!"

"Malik!" Chelsey gasped

"Well are you excited" Abigail grinned"

"WILD…" I yelled crashing into the ground and dashing at the swordswoman "HAMMER!"

I swung as hard as I could at her but she pulled out a sword and blocked it. A shockwave went off behind her, splitting the ground and blowing up the tree in the process

"Malik…" Chelsey said concerned

"Well well…" Abigail said noticing she got pushed back a little "You'll certainly be more entertaining than those rats in the bar. How bout we get stated?

"Yeah!" I glared at her with my slit eyes

Well there you go. I'm still not 100% sure if I'm gonna keep this going for too long but we never know what the future holds do we?

Well I'm gonna get outta here. Don't forget to leave some feedback. But most importantly don't forget to live free and live wild!