A bit of a random fic I know, but I just had this idea in my head and wanted to see how it would play out in writing. Please review, let me know your thoughts.
She was beautiful. Hair golden like the sun, a laugh that just made you want to laugh with her. A dress that accolated her every curve. She sat at the bar with a few friends, none of whom could compare to her beauty.
He walked up to the girls. And ordered them all a shot, winking at the blonde.
"What's your name stranger?" The blonde asked
"Javier, and you ladies?" he asked
"That's Emma, Debby and I'm Sal" she replied.
They talked, flirted and drank all night.
The Next Morning:
Sal's POV
Urgh my head. Who turned on the sun? Squinting I glanced over at the clock. Only 9am. Still early. I rolled over and saw a muscular chest. I shot up, grabbing the duvet to cover my naked body. What the hell happened! I took a minute to admire the body next to me. He was one fine specimen. He yawned and awoke.
"Morning babe" he muttered
"Um...Morning?" I replied
"Don't you want to give your old husband a kiss?" he asked
"Husband?" I asked
"Do you really not remember?" he asked sitting up. I shook my head. He took my left hand in his and showed me the ring.
"Last night we were all talking but Emma and Debby left about 1am. We were talking, me and you and you suggested getting married" he said
As he said it, the memories came back.
"Oh" was all I said.
"Don't worry sweetheart, I'm going to treat you like a princess" he replied. "I've booked us a week's honeymoon cruise on the Caribbean. You mentioned last night how much you wanted to go" he said. I was momentarily shocked. It seemed too good to be true.
"Are you still ok to come with me today to pick up my kid?" he asked I knew there was a catch.
"I would be a bad wife if I wasn't" I replied. He kissed me gently. His kisses were something I could get used to. We dressed and drove. It was about a 2 hour drive but then we pulled into a drive. He knocked on the door and who should open the door but Mitch and Cam. They both opened their mouths to say something but no words came out.
"What's going on here" a deep voice as an older man came to the door. They opened the door and we walked inside.
"Sal...What are you doing here" Mitch asked
"I'm here to pick up my stepson" I squealed in excitement, showing the guys my ring.
"Javier, is this true?" The Latin woman, Grace, I think said
"Gloria, listen" Javier started. I was close "Sal and I...We just click" he said. Gloria opened her mouth again but decided not to say anything. Instead walking away. a young boy walked up
"so your my step-mom?" he asked
"Yes" I smiled taking Javier's hand.
"Nope...too weird. I'm out" Cam said as he walked out. Mitch soon followed, and Jay went after Gloria leaving it just us three.
"You ready Manny? Ice-cream on me" I said
"Thank you. and don't worry about them, they'll come around" Manny replied.
Not my best work I know, let me know what you think I may end up removing this story. Thanks for reading.