Here you go. Like i said, I changed a few things to make the story line more flowing.
Enjoy!
The eerie wind: that was the only sound that went through the silent hidden leaf village. Black ashes coated the once lush green grass, and the busy streets. Smoke and dust engulfed the atmosphere, and dark clouds looming over. Smolder burning the dead trees that lie in ruins.
Then out of nowhere, three ANBU ran down a dirt road, and then stopped at the fallen gates of Konoha; they survey the destruction of their homeland. All of them stood in shock as they saw the gruesome scene of dead bodies. Their eyes laid upon innocent villagers, children, and even their comrades were slaughtered. The three ANBU held in their tears, and tighten their fists as they recognized the faces of their friends that where now covered in a mask of blood and ashes.
"Who…could have…d-done this?" mumbled an ANBU in a fox mask with red, long whiskers and narrow pointing ears printed on the mask. Her voice was shaking, and she wanted to look away from the destruction, but shock over whelmed her from glancing off the horrid scene.
"There is a strong possibility that it might have been the…akatsuki," answered the ANBU, after a long pause, in a dog mask with short, golden yellow whiskers, and tiny, wide ears.
The fox anbu started to cry as memories of the last akatsuki attack started to flood into her mind.
"Well then," said the third ANBU, trying to hide his angry voice. He was in his knees trying to hold back tears. His fists were clenched so hard that pain shot up his arm. "We should look around the village. Look for clues and any survivors," he finished. His two comrades stared at him; then again it shouldn't surprise them how strong he is mentally.
The two ANBU nodded at the ANBU with a bird mask covering his face. The mask had a long sharp beck with the blotch of green covering the right top corner of his mask. Then all three of them scatted in a blink of an eye.
The ANBU with the dog mask landed on the soft ground that was destroyed; probably due to earth techniques/jutsus. He studied the horrific scene that surrounded him, trying to fight of the urge of throwing up. Walking slowly; observing, he notices something off in the distance that catches his eye. 'Please tell me I'm wrong,' the ANBU thought to himself.
As he raced there, he suddenly stopped in shock and in disappointment. His suspicions were correct; there laid an akatsuki uniform.
He approached the fabric and picked it up gently, he can use this as evidence. He observed and studied the material. Burn marks were created at the bottom of the robe, and the user probably threw it off during a battle that he was in. The anbu looked around the scene but saw no bodies that were burnt. The only explanation he could think of is that the enemy must have gotten away.
The dog anbu picked up the robe and continued to walk around his once homeland.
The ANBU with the parrot mask walked around and stopped. He glanced ahead of him in shock. 'The academy… it's gone,' the ANBU thought as he proceeded through. Parts of the building were still intake, but ninety percent of it was demolished into ashes that flew into the air as a gust of wind howled by. The ANBU stood there and stared and listened at his surrounding for any signs of life. "Anyone here?" the parrot masked shinobi yelled. After a minute or two, the ANBU tighten its grip as he didn't hear a sound or movement.
After a minute or so, the ANBU turned around and saw a tree. He decided it was better to survey the area better from a high point of view. With one jump, he reached the top of the 15 foot tree. Glancing around, the parrot masked ninja noticed nothing. He grunted and hopped off the tree and continued investigate the area.
All of a sudden, he notices something red. A young girl with long red hair lay down on the ground, however she wore no headband. As the parrot masked man looked closer, he certainly didn't know this person, so she couldn't have come from this village. Although, she is a ninja sense the anbu can smell chakra coming off of her body. Could she be one of the enemy ninja? Not only that, but her face rings a bell in his head. He knows he saw that face somewhere in a book.
Suddenly, the anbu was snapped out of his thoughts as his earpiece radio came to life. "Hataro, I found something important. I manage to find an akatsuki uniform."
"Alright, good job finding a clue. I also found something suspicious. Meet me 50 yards north of the academy."
"Hai," said his comrade as he appeared next to Hataro in thirty seconds.
"So what did you see…Kinto?" asked Hataro, hesitating as he spoke his name. He hated using an alias, but it was a rule while your wore an anbu uniform.
"Well, as I mentioned, I saw an akatsuki uniform lying on the ground. Unfortunately, I couldn't find the body that went with it. So this enemy might have escaped somewhere. However, he must have some serious injuries. What do you have?"
"Interesting. Oh, and as for me I found a body that didn't belong to this village, so there is a very high possibility that she was one of the enemy. But not an akatsuki since I never seen her with them. But her face does look familiar."
Kinto looked at the girls face. "Your right, she does look familiar. But I can't place my finger on it." Kinto sighed. "Did you find any survivors?"
"No," Hataro said in a very disappointed voice.
"Same here. Not only that, but the underground tunnel, were the villagers are placed, was collapsed. So that means the enemy must have known how this village works and its hidden structures."
Hataro just stood silent. He wanted to believe that this was all just a horrible nightmare. Just then the two anbu's headsets start to receive a single.
"She's alive!" shouted their third comrade. Without hesitation, both ANBU jumped were Natsu, their third comrade, was.
As they arrived they saw Natsu kneeling on the ground, lifting a piece of cement. As the two ANBU looked underneath, their eyes filled with relief. Underneath was the their hokage.