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Kates struggle
Kates heels clicked loudly on the ashphalt, the silence filled the night like a thick fog. Kate pulled her jacket closer around her, glancing around . thoughts filled her mind as she walked into the direction of her car, her footsteps sounded heavy. Too heavy. Kate stopped, but the only sound that came to her ears was eerie silence. Kate shuddered as she continued across the carpark. A hand closed around kates mouth to stop her scream. Kate struggled, kicking anything she could, her foot found a car, and kate pushed off of it into the attacker, sending them both sprawling. The hand replaced itselg on the back of kayes skirt, kate let out a ear-splitting scream. The man covered her mouth onced again, and dragged her to the darkest corner of the carpark. Kate struggled fiercely, tears welling up inside of her. The man fiddled with his belt buckle, having to take his hand from kates mouth. "please" whispered kate, the man was silent.
Out of earshot, a group of drunken men staggered out of the bars back door, into the alleyway leading to the carpark. One of them, was tony. Surprisingly, he was the soberest of them all. He hadn't felt like going out tonight but his "friends" had insisted.
Kate screamed one last hope, and her prayers were answered.
Tonys ears pricked up as a faint scream filled the night. He had stopped, not reliseing, his mates turned around, "whata you doin?" asked the tallest one, but tony didn't hear, he had started walking into the carpark towards where he thought the scream had come from. His mates turned around and walked off, laughing at something as stupid as someones shoelace being undone.
Tonys heart filled with horror and fear for what was going to happen. A man had kate, leant on a car, and was about to, he couldn't say it. Tonys body filled with rage, he ran towards the man and slammed him backwards, kate sprawled onto the ground. The man groaned and got up, starting away. Tony pulled his gun out from his holster and shot at the mans leg. He fell down with a howl. Tony checked kate, she mumbled o.k tony walked over to the man, kicking him in the back, he howled in pain "shut up" snarled tony. He pulled out his cellphone and dialled 911 it rung onced. ';hello 911"
Tony: yeah this is special agent denozzo, ncis, ive had a attempted rape, I need you to send a police car down to pick up the guy,
There was a pause
911; o.k, whats the address
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