Hello newcommers and old readers. I just wanted to let you all know that I'm re-writing this entire story. My writing skills have improved, so I want to try again and maybe come from a different angle with this story. It's not that I want to give up, it's just that when I started this story, I made it a bit more dramatic than I really wanted to. So, I'm just going to re-write the first chapter and see how you guys respond to it. I hope to get good reviews, but criticism is also extremly accepted.