I've took note on my first fanfic and took one review's advice to look up other OC's and research the characters. Now this on will be different and I hope better than my other one.
Disclaimer: I don't own the Teen Titans but I do own Renovent and the SaviorS.
It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon and the Teen Titans were enjoying it by doing their favorite things. Beast boy and Cyborg was playing video games and Cyborg was wining.
"Dude, this game cheats" Beast boy yelled after his car ran of the track. "Your just a sore loser BB," Cyborg said starting the game over. Before the could press the reset button the alarm went off and the rest of the Titans ran in the room.
"Who is it this time Robin," Raven asked in her usual monotone. "Slade's robots are attacking downtown," Robin said, "Titans move!" The Titans nodded to their leader before they left the tower.
Downtown, the robots were terrorizing the citizens until they saw two girls and three boys blocking there path. "I suggest you should surrender now or its going to be messy," the leader girl snarled not taking her eyes off the robots. She had dark brown hair with red highlights on the tip of her ponytail and on her bangs.
One of the robots ran to attack to attack her but was destroyed when one of the boys sliced it in half with his katana. "I guess they want to play messy Renovent," the boy said turning to the other robots. "SaviorS attack," Renovent yelled pulling out her bow staff as the others ran pulling theirs out too.
One boy used his wind power to blow the robots back as the other boy used his earth powers to crush them with the pavement. The other girl shorted groups of robots out as she used her water abilities to pull the water out of the sewers as water balls and threw it at them. Renovent and the boy with the katana power teamed the rest of the robots.
When the Teen Titans arrived the robots were already defeated. "Dude," Beast boy yelled, "we missed all the action!" "Who are you," Robin asked. Renovent stepped up in front of the little group. "We are the SaviorS and you must Robin and the Teen Titans right," Renovent asked putting her hand out to Robin to shake instead Starfire flew up and gave her a spine-crushing hug.
"Thank you for giving the defeat to the robots of Slade for us friend," Starfire beamed as Renovent was gasping for air. "Um thanks can you let me go I can't breath," Renovent gasped before Starfire let her go.
"Why are you here anyways," Raven asked. "We are looking for a man named Slade," the tallest boy said. The Titans gasped as the boy pulled out his tracking device, "and my TD unit said he was somewhere in Jump City is that answering your unlogical question?"
"Techno," Renovent snarled, "stop disrespecting people its not nice." "Your not my mother Renovent," Techno snarled back as the others excluding Renovent laughed at the comment, even Raven giggled at it. "Man when Raven laughs you know your funny," Cyborg said patting him on the back.
"Now that that's over we must be going," Renovent said, "we have to train in 3 minutes."
"Wait," Robin said, "why don't you stay in the tower your team and my team can try to find Slade together," Renovent nodded in agreement. "Ok we will stay to find Slade faster," Renovent said turning to her team and pointing them out, "since we are staying let me introduce my team, the tall one is Techno he controls earth, the shortest boy is Fang he controls wind, the other girl is Damon she controls water, My second in command is Riku he is a neko angel his power is ice, and I'm the leader Renovent I control fire."
"Ummm what's a neko," Beast boy asked confused. "A neko is a cat," Riku said pointing at his ears, "I thought you would tell by the ears." "He's very slow so don't mind him," Raven said as Riku chuckled at the comment. "HAY THAT'S NOT TRUE," Beast boy yelled pouting afterward. "We better be going now," Renovent said. " She's right lets go team and SaviorS," Robin said.
A recording of them is shown on a computer screen in a dark room. "Hmm this new group is powerful," a familiar voice says as he shows a close up on Renovent. "and you are the most interesting of the bunch you might be apprentice material I'll just keep an eye on you to make sure." The man walks into the light and shows that it was Slade.
That's my first chappy I hope I did better on this one. I know people are wondering "Who are the SaviorS?" so I've decided to make the second chapter the profiles of the SaviorS.
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