First a Big Big Big Thank You so much for TONS of APPRECIATIONS and APPLAUSE even CRITICAL Reviews for My Last Story Entitled "I M BACK... REALLY"
I Love Few Critical Points so Replying them Here...
GUEST... OML, baccha itna Gussa... You Told abt "Rphan Orpah Orphan... Dimagh ki Dahi kr di"... Dekhyey Bacchy, AMAR ka Character or Us ka Background Daya Sir kay Mamta Foundation waly days sy FW nay Dikhaya tha... Us mein Roam bhi Nahi tha... Main ny Usy Background pr likha aur Us ko Kharab ahi kiya... kyunky already Story Detail mein FW nay bata diya tha... except Hum Us kay aagy End pr Likh skty thy... phir bhi Aap ko Bura laga... is ky liye Buht Buht Mazrat... Aap ky Comments ka Buht Shukriya...
Another GUEST asking about Which Epi Abhijeet Sir Patato Allergy mentioned, its TWISTED FAMILY (Last Scene)...
RITU... OK, its Your HBD Gift... Theek...
Few READERS found My English is Very Bad... Sadly its TRUE... mostly I Jumped from scene to Scene... again its TRUE...
so Now, Tell Me kay Main aagy Stories likhun ya Nahi, cz Only Few Readers Mentioned it, so I Need More Votes on that...
Its really a Goofy Story.. I must Tell You…. You All Surprised finding the End…. Ahan…
A Story of Five People, Shockingly Connected to Same Strand and come across in Totally Unusual Circumstances…
Thank You so much GUEST who gave Me that Plot although except the Profession of Abhijeet Sir, Daya Sir Character and Daya Sir and ACP Sir Relation...
All are Mine Mind Work...
this time Story Update coming after TWO DAYS Gap...
BOLD Parts presents PAST/FLASHBACK...
COiLiNG KnOtS
The Waiting is Over as the Guest of Honor coming giving His Short Arrival over the Only Audience coming to His Presence..
The Figure Stand Up, extending Arm, Opening Fist so the Palm coming in Greeting Position with the coming Figure…
Figure Eyes Twinkling Seeing the Arrival having No Lift Board over His Face while Complete Ignorance on this Silent Gesture of Introduction shows Openly, gives the Chance to Figure who Slightly turn Head, Look at Another Figure, standing over little steps far, taking Sigh, uttered…
Figure (pretending tone): I am really Sad Mr. Pradyuman.. (Mock) Daya Buht Challenging hoga… (sighing) But…
His Deep Sigh with BUT and Continuously Twinkling in Eyes, Angrier the Arrival, who Initially could not Expected such Open Call from His Previous Experiences, now Step ahead before the Figure Palm Close and Arm Down because grab it with Extreme Tight Grip really takes Him in the Ring at the Start of the Battle while the Shaking Hand telling the Hype and Heat of that coming up Rival Match…
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Voice 1: Theek hy Sir, (obliged tone) It will be an Honor for Me….
The Room is Spacious having Less but Classy Interior, Occupied by Two Entities, One is looking Older and Senior while another Younger and Energetic, Discussing over Some Important Issues…
Voice 2: bas Abhijeet, (telling) Mr. Pradyuman is My ChildHood Friend.. U know CHADDI BUDDIES (Abhijeet laughed while Heard More) so Aap kay Sessions Private hon gy… (Abhijeet nodded, hearing addition) Notes Khud tak hee rakhna aur agar kisi sy Consult karo tou Reference kay tour pr except (with a Pause) with Your Father and Ashoke….
Abhijeet: Sir, (ask) Aap Case History Mujhy kub tak Mail karein gy…?
Sir (telling): I already Did… (sadly) Mera itna Interaction Nahi ho paaya Bacchy sy, thori Intro hee hogi aur haan Us kay Previous Doctors ky kuch Notes/Medicine/Results etc hon gy… but (strict) U take it as a Separate Case and Most Important, He is an Epileptic Patient, also going through that Bad Trauma, so Be CareFul…
Abhijeet (nodded with): Jee Sir, I can Understand….
Sir: is Bad Experience ny Us kay Ander Buht Karwahat bhar dii hogi… (telling) Pradyuman Sounding Extra Tense… Khair, (again focusing over Abhijeet with) zara Alug tareeqy sy Handle krna Usy…
Abhijeet: Jee, wesy kya (ask again) Main Us kay Father sy milun..?
Sir (agreed with): Sure, He will be there at 10:30 AM at Ur Clinic, Tomorrow… Mail Dekh lena… (softly) phir tou Bacchy sy Direct Mulaqat ho jaye gi…
Abhijeet: Jee Sir… (again) Thank You again…
Sir (wishing luck with): Good Luck Beta…
Abhijeet Smiled and after some Casual Chats, Beading Good Bye to Him while after that Freed from His Usual Routine till Night and after getting Fresh at Night taking His Dinner as well, Enjoying His Lemon Tea and started Reading the Few Case Notes about His New Patient whose Case Hand Over to Him from His Senior Teacher Dr. Bhatiya who went to Canada for His Daughter Immediate Cancer Operation…
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A Man coming inside Hurriedly although Placing Folder, Cell and Keys over Desk while giving a Warm Shake hand to the Person Waiting for Him, quite Long, so sat either signaling Him for Sitting with an Apology tone…
Voice 1: I am so Sorry, (sat with) Mr. Pradyuman.. Aap ko Wait krna para.. (irritatingly) Delhi ka Traffic bhi Mumbai sy Kum Nahi…
Mr. Pradyuman (smilingly): its OK…
Voice 1: tou Shroo karein pr Pehly (Sweetly) Introduction, I am (softly) Dr. Abhijeet Gupta, Psychiatrist plus Psychologist….
Pradyuman (with smile): I am Pradyuman Satam….
Abhijeet: Lovely Meeting Sir… (ask) ab batayey…?
Pradyuman (telling): darasal Mujhy Dr. Bhatiya nay Aap ko Refer kiya tha…
Abhijeet (nodded): Yes, Main ny (briefing) Sir, I mean (correcting) Dr. Bhatiya sy Baat ki hy, even Unhun nay Aap kay Bety Daya kay Case ki Briefing bhi Mujhy di hy (checking Same Folder He took when comes with) Aap ko kya lagta hy, Aap ny itny Doctors kyun Change kiye…?
Pradyuman (with sigh): Honestly Dr, Daya Apny Doctors sy Cooperate hee Nahi krta tou wo Bechary Us ka Ilaj kya karein gy…?
Abhijeet: ummm.. its Natural… BTW, (confusingly as in Introduction He got Daya got Degrees from Renowned Universities of World even Handling His Father Business too) agar Usy Problems hain tou Us ka Track Record tou…
Pradyuman (interrupts with): dekhyey Dr…
Abhijeet (look at Him and say): Call me Abhijeet, Sir… (smilingly) it's giving Me atleast a Nice Impact…
Pradyuman (with smile): Good… haan, darasal Abhijeet, (telling) Daya Bachpan sy hee Buht Alug Baccha hy… Us ki Intelligence aur Skills Awesome hain…
Abhijeet (stopping Him with): wo By Birth aisa hy…?
Pradyuman: Nahi… (with Sigh) Apni Mumma ki Death kay baad Us ki ye Halat ho gayii… Seriously Abhijeet, He is (His Tone tell now He is Completely Frustrated with His Son Extra Qualities) so Stubborn, Irritated kinda Person… Giny Chuny Us kay Dost hain… Milna Julna tou Zero hy kisi sy… aksar Apny Room tak hee rehta hy ya Apnay Un Dostun kay Sath…
Abhijeet (confusingly): aur Office Staff sy Us ka Rawwiya…?
Mr. Pradyuman (takes Irritated Sigh): agar Wo Office jaye tou Pata chaly Humein…
Abhijeet (uttered slowly): Ain… (ask) matlab…?
Mr. Pradyuman: Mostly Us ka Raabta Online hee Rehta hy.. (with sigh) aksar Presentations or Visits tou Wo Skype kay through krta hy… agar kabhi Jana paray bhi tou bas, Samjhein (dull tone) Bhaag hee Nikalta hy…
Abhijeet (with smile): hmmmm…. (ask again) kya Us kay Previous Doctors kay Sessions sy Usy koi Faida Nahi hua…?
Mr. Pradyuman: Nahi, kuch Khas Nahi… (telling now) isi liye Main ny ye Sub Band kr diya tha pr is Recent Waqyey ny Usy bhi Kafi Ajeeb kr diya hy… Buht Ukhra hua… Khamosh… wo tou Bhatiya ny Khud Mujhy Offer di tou… pr ab (straight) Mujhy Nhai Malum Abhijeet, Wo Aap kay Sath Cooperate kry ga bhi ya Nahi… wesy agar (thoughtful tone) Main Usy Nahi bataon kay Aap kaun hain.. (seeing Abhijeet Questioning gaze so added) I mean Aap as a Guest ya Mery kisi Frnd kay Bety kay Reference sy bhi Ghar mein Reh skty hain… (ask little excitedly) Aap ka kya Khayal hy…?
Abhijeet (sat straight and in Strong tone): Nahi Sir… Mera ye Usool Nhai.. (softly) hr Insaan ka ye Haq hy kay Usy Us kay Baary mein honay waly Faislun sy Aagah rakkha jaye….
Mr. Pradyuman (realizing Him with): pr Wo Aap kay Sath Cooperate…
Abhijeet (raising hand with): Wo Mera Headache hoga… (strong way) Dusra, Main Apny Patient kay Sath Nahi Stay krta, kyunky is ka Effect Patient pr Acha Nahi parta… Teesra… Aap Bilkul Relax rahein… Cooperate krna ya Nahi krna ye Patient aur Us kay Doctor kay Beech ka Mamla hy… (now settling things as Meeting is almost at Ending Point as) Main Next Week Mumbai Shift ho rha hun… Aap Be Fiker rahyey.. Daya sy Mujhy as Psychiatrist kay hee Introduce krwayey ga.. (sweetly) Yaad rakhyey.. Sacchai jub kisi Dusray ki Zaban sy Pata chalti hy tou Buht Takleef hoti hy… (encouragingly) so Be Positive and Patient too…
Pradyuman (with return smile): I'll Happy if He Cooperates with You…
Abhijeet (determined tone): You will… khair, Medication mein koi Problem krta hy…
Pradyuman (nodded): Nahi…
Abhijeet: kya (ask) Us kay Un Giny Chuny Dostn sy Meri ek Meeting ho skti hy, Daya sy Mulaqaat sy Pehly…?
Pradyuman: Theek, (sure tone) Main Arrange krwa dunga.. jub Aap kahein….
Abhijeet nodded either Open the Same Folder and started taking Notes about Few Important Queries about His Patient….
Abhijeet: kisi (ask) Servent etc sy Attach hy…?
Pradyuman (casually): Nahi… bas Casual… wesy bhi Wo kisi ko Tang Nahi krta…
Abhijeet (again): Any Hobby/Craze/Freaky about Anything…?
Pradyuman (telling): Cars kay baary mein Crazy hy… Cooking Achi krta hy…
Abhijeet: matlab, (softly) Picky hy Food kay baary mein…
Pradyuman: haan… Kafi… pr Abhijeet (Abhijeet who Noted down these, Look upward and see those Sad Eyes Listens) Wo ye Sub kisi sy Share Nahi krta…
Abhijeet (nodded with): kya is Recent Accident kay baad, (ask straight) Us ka Behavior aur Kharab hua hy…?
Pradyuman: Nahi, pr wo thora (analyzing Hs Son Small Changes in Behavior with) Zyada Reserve ho gaya hy.. Khamoshi Buht Bhar gayii hy aur Sub sy Important, thora Dara hua lagta hy…
Abhijeet: hmmm… (ask) Aap gaye thy Usy leny…?
Pradyuman: Yes aur jub, Main Usy ly kr aa rha tha Ghar tou Wo, (sad tone) matlab He grabbed My Hand for Security and ReAssurance…
Abhijeet (now closing His Folder with): Let's See… (hopeful tone) Hope for the Best, Mr Pradyuman… Be Relax… (both standup, shaking hands with) Dun't Worry…
Pradyuman Smiled and the Meeting was Adjourned as the Doctor Compiled His Notes and then Busying with His Other Appointments…
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Voice 1: haan Yaar, (telling either moving out from Big Premises with) Nahi Wo Freddie ky Reference sy kisi ny liya hy… (nodded with) Sure… (irritate) kya Ashoke… bas Yaar, (waving cab, step inside it and after telling Cab Driver about the Destination, again continuing His Chat with) Boring Flight thi.. ye Baba bhi na.. (angry way) Mujhy Phansa kr chaly gaye… (with sigh) haan, Milun ga Kal Subah Us ko… Ghar pr hee… Aaj Shaam Us kay Frnds sy Milna hy… (reminding Him) Acha Sun, Freddie ko Yaad dila dena kay hr Sunday Usy Wahan Jana hy aur (stressing) Tum bhi Chakker lagaty rehna… (hearing with) haan haan, Us kay Dost nay liya hy Ghar… (telling about the New Tenets as) Acha Larka hy.. Vivek Naam hy… CID Bangalore sy hy… Aaj kal Delhi mein Deputed hy…
The Rest Ride Continued with Casual Conversation till Abhijeet not reached at His Destination…
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The Man coming out from Long Warm Shower after Entering in that Full Furnished House which He and His Father taking over Rent as still His Father is Not Prepare to Leave His Old City named Delhi…
He Rubbed His Hairs with Towel although feeling a Relax Sooth in His Heart when He took His First Step on the Land of Mumbai….
Yeah, He came here Earlier many times but Sometimes His Flight would be via Mumbai, Sometimes for any Seminar, Convention etc but Surprisingly, its His First Night in Mumbai….
He Jerk His Head when sat over His Bed wearing His Tee-Shirt and dragging it off with….
Abhijeet (with relax tone): whao…. Amazing Man… Feeling Alone but (with a Sigh) feeling Complete… Sach bhae (look at the Ceiling with) Jadoo hy Tumhari Khamosh Raatun mein Mumbai….
He lays over His Bed under Sheet as He already Checked His Main Door Locks and other Stuffs including Switch Off Lighting, Pick His Cell, Flip the Screen and writing a Small GOOD NIGHT and MISSING YOU message, send to His Father, Set Alarm, place the Cell back, Closed His Eyes and Wash Out Remembering His Evening Meeting with Two Young Buddies named RAHUL and RAJEEV….
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After Settling inside a Family Booth as Mr. Pradyuman Arranged that Meeting on Abhijeet Request at Outside of His Hospital as He was Associated with Life Line Hospital and Shocked to Meet with Dr. Rajeev again just Newly Appointed at Life Line Hospital while Insp. Rahul Engaged with Mumbai Police Dept during Introduction….
The Intro Session is Quite Nice and now Thrice taking their Snacks and Evening Tea, Replying Abhijeet Queries as…
Rajeev: Jee, (softly) Us kay Pehly ky bhi kuch Doctors yani Psychiatrists nay Hum sy bhi Baat ki thi…
Abhijeet: acha chalo, Sub Choro (focus to Rahul) Tum Daya kay Sath Bachpan sy ho.. matlab Childhood Frnd (Rahul nodded, heard more) ye Batao, Daya Apny Secrets Share krta hy…?
Rahul (straight): Nahi…. (after a bit) pr Wo Acha Secret Bearer hy… (Abhijeet Smiled on His Term, Listens more) Wo Dusrun kay Raaz Buht Sanbhal kr rakhta hy…
Abhijeet: matlab, (smilingly either noted something over His Folder with) Tumhary Raaz Us sy Niklwaye ja skty hain…
A Shocking Gaze of Insp while Chuckling of Dr really Tells Him that this New Doctor of Daya is Master of Pulling Legs….
Abhijeet (again): acha batao, (ask) kisi Larki ka Chakker…?
Rahul (stunned so utter): Mera….
Rajeev (instantly): ya Mera…
Abhijeet (pat over His Head with): Aye Bhagwaan…. (clearing) Daya ka…?
Rajeev (relaxly): Buht… hr Teesri Larki ka Us pr Crush hy…
Abhijeet: hmmm.. (smirk tone) Pehli ka kyun Nahi…?
Rahul (hurriedly as Avoiding the Collar Raising of Rajeev who is trying to Tell Abhijeet in Silence that Every First Girl must have Crush on Him, makes Face when Hears): wo tou Mujh pr hota hy na…
Rajeev (denying take bite of Sandwich): Jee Nahi…
Abhijeet: Acha Acha… Us Pehli ko Mery liye Rehny do (Both Mouth Opened on that Second Taunt so Giggled Listens) matlab, koi GF, Crush, Fiance, koi Us ki Life mein Nahi….?
Rahul (serious): Nahi…
Abhijeet (look at Him Straight with): ye Raaz bhi tou ho skta hy….
Rahul (sighing): Shayed….
Abhijeet: Us ki Epilepsy ka (ask) Tum Logun kay ilawa kisi ko Malum hy…?
Rahul: School tak tou Principle aur Us ki Teacher's ko Pradyuman Uncle Bataty thy.. pr (straight) College kay baad tou Daya ny ye Chor hee diya… shayed Mujhy aur Rajeev ko hee Malum hy.. magar Wo…
Abhijeet (interrupts): haan, Mujhy Malum hy.. Generalized hy…. (again) Khair, ye Batao, is Current Waqyey kay baad, Us ky Attitude mein Tum Logun ko kuch Different laga…?
Rajeev (immediate bases): haan, Milna Julna Zero ho gaya hy… aksar tou Phone pr bhi Baat Nahi krta… Dull ho gaya hy aur Buht Chup bhi…
Abhijeet (now jotted down things asking Random things as): kis tarah ki Cars Pasand krta hy, Us ka Fav Sports, koi TV Show, Actor…?
Obviously Both Friends giving Every Small Details to Abhijeet although Few He already got from Daya Father and from His Previous Reports…
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The Low Shout of BABA, takes out the Man from His Sleepy Darkness where Initially it taking many minutes to Put Together Himself and then Analyze what had Done with Him….
The Electricity Out, the Sweaty Body, Extra Humidity, the Lonely Night and the Same Dream really gives Him Sigh to Vanish it by Drinking Water, Washing His Face, sitting over Bed, started His Lappy and Engaging Watching Something till Lights Back or might be Sleep too…
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The Introduction is based on Only Few Minutes where a Silent Challenge Accepted Overwhelmed the PsyChiatrist…
Mr. Pradyuman Leaves the Spot by making an Excuse as Abhijeet already told Him to Left the Place after a Small Introduction of Him with Daya…
Mr. Pradyuman Driver already Picked Abhijeet from His House, after Accepting Offer by Abhijeet which gave to Him by Mr. Pradyuman when He told Him about His Arrival to Mumbai and as the City is Little New for Him, He Accepted that Offer as His Vehicle already coming in coming Few Week with His Father…
Abhijeet now Scanned His Patient who is More in Height and Weight from Him… Nicely Fair Complexion… His Big Soothing Eyes really Shows their Presence in His Face Proudly… His Lashes are Little Long while Nose is Straight, might be Hairy Head as His Head Covered with a Cap, Broad Shoulders, Bicep's, Tight Chest, Strong Tigh and Long Legs…
His Well Fitted Black Jeans while Long Sleeves Loose Jersey and a Wandana over His Head giving Him a Sealed Document about Smart Guy Term…
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Abhijeet Small Smile during this Scanning Lingered when He Feels the Long Lashes started Tingling, while the Palms Tights over Knees Understand Him about the Tension of His Patient, as He got that His Presence only giving Displeasure to His Newly Patient so started the Conversation as…
Abhijeet (sweet tone): Tumhari Topi Buht Achi hy…
He really Shocked as the Small Grin Flushed over Cheeks of His New More than 30 years Patient really gives Him a Pleasure, who Definitely Stunned about the Wrong term using by a Doctor not Less than Himself specially in Age, heard a Correction…
Daya (corrected): it's Beanie….
Abhijeet (embarrassingly): ohhh, Sorry… (either He found the Soft and Clear tone of His Quiet Patient First time added) Mujhy Pata Nahi tha… (ask confusingly) wesy Tumhein Garmi Nahi lug rahi…?
Daya (nodded): haan, Thori Buht…
Abhijeet (moving to other aspect as): Suna hy Tumhein Doctors Nahi Pasand…?
Daya (agreed still Low tone): Some-Times…
Abhijeet (ask): Why…?
Daya (wrinkle nose): Pata Nahi…
Abhijeet wanted the Little More Explanation but Seeing No More Addition, now coming Straight….
Abhijeet (trying): Mumbai Airport kafi Bara hy….
Daya (straight as the Irritation raising in His tone): Heath-row, is sy bhi Bara hy…
Abhijeet (smilingly): ye bhi Theek…
Daya (interrupts): Tumhein (little rash tone either He knew it but asked) Dad ny Bulaya hy…?
Abhijeet (nodded): haan…
Daya: tou abhi tak (jerking head) Un ko Yaqeen Nahi aaya kay Main Normal hun…
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Abhijeet Stuck… Yes, the Comment is so Harsh having Pain… it's the Big DrawBack of His Field as His Patients and their Families and Frnds having Same Thought which still He could not able to Change…
Abhijeet (again attempt): aisa Nahi hy Daya…
Surprisingly the Patient, who is Totally Looking Cut Off from the Moment, little Up with His Chair, turn it towards Abhijeet Front with Himself, Look at Him and ask, Seriously…
Daya (straight): Kesy….?
Abhijeet Look at those Eyes which are like Crystal Clear, He Feels those Sharp Crystals Slowly Invading inside His Eye Balls…
First from His Own Deep Expressive Eyes Orbs to Retina and Scaleria Parts which Pinned Him a Pain, then dragging to His Nostrils giving Him Chocking in Inhaling of Fresh Air, then went to a Long Tunnel Ride of His Throat with Squeezing His Wing Pipe to Esophagus Clench a bit and then Sliding down to His Stomach but No, it Suddenly Changed its Route, starting Penetrating from His Lungs Curtain to Directly inside His Heart and before went inside His Soul, Abhijeet Blinked….
This is One of really Scary Travelling only consists of few Seconds but giving Him Tons of Jolts only got by His Heart which Walls little Shivered while His Soul feels a Thunder Ripple….
He Wipes His Forehead which turn Light Wet while Unnecessarily Cleared His Throat after Gathering Himself and said…
Abhijeet (looking straight into His Eyes and stressing Each word to make it Simpler and Softer as): cause, He Loves You….
Daya (look again, whispers): wo jis ko Pyar krty hain na, Un ko (turn to murmur) Bhool jaty hain….
Abhijeet feeling a Rumble of Pain in that Whisper and Murmur but He Expected this a bit, not right now as it's His First Session and till now He does not Use any Medication or Therepy for Daya but He Expected this Complain so Replied…
Abhijeet (deep tone): Yaad Nahi krny ka matlab, Bhool jana tou Nahi hota (look at Him as the Patient Eyes still down so said) hain na…
The Patient turn Angry Suddenly, His Body turn Stiff, He Standup in a bit and moving with a Strong Comment…
Daya (standup): Dunt give Me Any Lecture… (straight towards eye to eye) Samjhy….
Without Seeing the Positive Nod coming from the Doctor as Reply of that Understanding, Daya Left the Place Immediately…
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