Hi Guys! This is my first fanfic so pls review...I need your feedback :) Sorry fot the short chapters but will try to update everyday...Thanks.
BookwormWRITINGwhiz
Agatha's eyes filled with tears as she looked out the window, out across her kingdom. She should be happy, her one true love was being crowned king, wasn't that a reason to celebrate? But she felt herself drown deeper into a sea of melancholy. Unable to hold it in any more she broke into sobs, sure that nobody could hear her.
She was wrong. Merlin whizzed into the room and smothered Agatha in his warm, sweet smelling cloak. He gave her a minute to collect herself and then drew away looking down at her with concerned eyes. She sniffed and wiped a hand across her snotty nose. Merlin spoke in a hushed voice, "What is wrong Agatha? I mean what would Tedros think? His true love crying on his coro-"
Agatha's voice interrupted his. Her voice was cracked by grief and full of sadness, and she did not care to keep her voice down, "Don't you give me that horse dung Merlin! You think I can't see it? You think I didn't notice?! Well, I did! I notice how Tedros doesn't want to spend time with me! No! Don't say he's busy, if he is how does he spend so much time to spend with Sophie? And she lives in another bloody kingdom!", she let out a heart wrenching sob and continued in a much softer voice, "I can see how he looks at her. He once looked at me that way, with Love."
She turned away wistfully and looked out the window to the dark forest. Her eyes narrowed as she took in a hot pink carriage entering the castle gates. Merlin came to stand beside her. He took in the figure who came out of the carriage.
An impeccably dressed, blonde woman who carried herself like a queen. Sophie. But more important to the two bystanders was the person waiting for her. Clad in a blue silk shirt and cream breeches Tedros looked beautiful as he took Sophie's hand and kissed it, looking deep into her eyes.
Agatha screamed and turned away, her heart throbbing as though it had been stabbed. Her true love, her Happily Ever After, stolen by her very own sister! With a shaking hand she wiped away her tears. Merlin looked thoughtfully down at the scene before gazing back at Agatha.
"Well, we need to remind him it seems. So we need you to look stunning!"
