Blue: Ok pe-oples this is myfirst ficcie! - does first fic dance- Code Lyoko is mah fave-or-ite show so I figured that I knew the most of it that the others I watch! Although Digimon is close too... as is YYH...
Huh... Oh well this is good enough for me. This is just the starting for my fic and I'd really, REALLY like some feed back on if this sounds ok or not! Plea-az! Kyou-kun disclamer!
Kyou: Why do i gota do it? Why not some other poor sap ya got locked up in your closet?
Blue: Cuz i lurv you?-pouts- and if you don't do it I'll lock you back in the closet.
Kyou:-rolls eyes- Fine.
Bluesilver-soul does not own Code Lyoko. She only owns the girl-who-must-not-be-named and Ulfr Istas.
Blue: -grins- Arigato, Kyou-kun! Now enjoy!
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1st person
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My eyes opened to see a wonderful blue world. One I had seen meny times before although now I had thought this was a dream a wonderfuly depressing dream. I was on Lyoko, in the polar region and soon Ulrick would walk out of the tower and ask me what I was doing here.
A taranchala would suddenly be matirialized by Xana and attack, Ulrick would save me and just as our lips would meet as I would thank him with immence gratitude I would wake up and start another day with a little brother sitting on my stomache.
I waited...and waited...and waited.
An unfelt wind rushed through my clothes and I looked around, somthing felt wrong, horribly wrong.
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no pov
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A laser lashed out suddenly from behind a glacier and smashed into the girls shoulder. She cried out and fell to the ground with an unfelt 'thump'. A hornet and sevrel kankralots appeared and started to charge up their lasers again Giving the girl time to franticly scuttle away into a nearby tunnle. Her eyes widened in fear as she bumpted into something, She slowly tuned her head afraid of what she'd find.
A scipizoa floated there it's tenticals poised and ready to encircle her body. Fear bubbled up in her stomache in a sickning realization that she was not at home in her bed having a nightmare, but sitting in the land of Lyoko as a target of Xana.
A scream ripped out of her throught and, to her amazement,created sound waves that crashed into the scipizoa pushing it back. Her mind undazed she scrambed up and ran out of the tunnle, blindly running from the monsters that quickly flew, scuttled and floated after her.
Breathing hard she still ran a kankralot had gotten her shoulder again and the wound throbed painfully thoughts ran through her head as she searched hoplessly for as sign of help or safe refuge.
'I thought they couldn't feel pain here? How did I get here? Was it Xana? Why wold he bring me here? I knew I shoundn't've laughed at Ulfr's thought of anime being a whole new dimention!Please...someone...anyone, find me!'
A familier iced archway appeared in her periferal vision and she took a sharp right. The path instantly sloped and she escaladed downwards falling on her butt and riding down that way, The only sense of slight relife as the sound of explosions as the monsters numbers were cut back.
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Odd, Yumi, Jeremy, Aelita, and Ulrick met up at breakfast talking about the usual morning topic: Xanas last attack.
"Xana's sure guna pay for taking Kiwi over like that."Odd said shoving a large amount of eggs in his mouth.
Ulrick laughed "Yeah, sure why don't you just vurtualize yourself one day into the fifth reigon one day, walk up to a mantis and say 'take me to your leader'."
Odd glared at him and swallowed"Oh,ha ha. Now who's the funny man."
"Oh lighten up Odd," said Yumi " it was just a joke."
Odd pouted "Hrumf. You try having your most loyal pet be turned into a slave of the enemy and tell me how it feels."
Jeremy rolled his eyes and Aelita giggled "Well, at least he's back to normal now."she said
"Come on Aelita we have Calculas and I wold likke to get there early."said Jeremy, closing his laptop and getting up. Aelita followed suit and the couple started walking away.Odd imediantly started making kissing noises and Jeremy turned around.
"Odd you keep doing that and you can't have mine and Aelita's left overs." Odd looked around innocently "What noises?" Jeremy snorted and continued walking away.
"Jeez, what bit him in the but?" Odd asked sliding Jermey's left over pancakes in front of him and digging in. "I don't know.I think he had a break through with something but then it turned into a big mess. At least thats what Aellita told me." Said Yumi
"Breakthrough on what?" asked Ulrick "Aelitas anti-viris I think." She said pulling her orange juice from her lips
Ulricks phone suddeny went off he graoned looking at it. picking it up he hoped his phone was just malfunctioning.
"Hello?"
"Ulrick? Meet me at the factory."
He was wrong it was Jeremy
"Jeremy, Shouldn't Xana not have enough time to launch another attack?"
"Well yes but Aelita swears that something is wrong on Lyoko. She can still feel if Xana has acted or not."
"But why not Odd or Yumi?"
"Well if my calculations ar correct William should have already pulled Yumi away, and Odd sould be too stuffed to move."
Ulrick looked around, Yumi was just slipping ut the door and Odd was tryng with much effort to get up from his chair. Damn. No getting out.
"Fine, I'll be there."He said unhappily
"Thanks alot Ulrick!" Aelitas voice chirped form the speaker
"Be ready when I get there though I have no intent to be yelled at again by Mrs.Hertz." turning the phone off he walked out the Cafateria's doors and broke into a spint into the forest.
"Are you sure something's up Aelita?"asked Jeremy
"Yes I'm positive." she answered as they climbed up the latter. Running across the bridge they walked into the elevator and walked into the computer room. Jeremy put on his head set and activated to link to Lyoko, He scanned for any activity at all and almost instantly found a swarm of hornets, a crab, 3 kankralots, and the scipizoa in the polar reigon.
"Woah!"Jeremy cried and started typing again bringing up the virtulizaton program and a screen into the Polar reigon. A voice suddenly filled his ears,
"Anyone! Please, I need help!"
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I slid down, down, down. The curves and swirls of the tunnle I had escapted into was making me dizzy as I watched them all, my body speeding faster and faster as I got colder and colder. The monsters were still after me, sliding along after me. Soon though the tunnle spat me out and I got up dashing away befor the monsters came out as well.
"Please! is anyone there!" I called No answer. 'Damn'
The tower! It's was just ahead of me! 'Please work!'
I ran at it hopefuly, and fased right inside. 'One goal down, and one to go. Please work!'
An interface matirialized in front of me and I mentally cheered. Pressing on it a small picture of a speaker appeared
"Hello? Is anyone there?" I asked timidly
Nothing but statik
"Anyone! Please, I need help!"
statick again
I was frustrated enough to not hear a whistling sound coming from behind me, until it was too late. Two lasers smashed into my sholder. I whipped around to see a taranchala's gun in my face. My eyes widened
'But...How?'
Not thinking properly I spun around again and took off out the other side to the tower and into the waiting monsters. They shot at me and I got hit once more I screamed again, and ran through the opening I had created unconsciously running straight into someone and falling backwards I looked up at...
'Oh lord.'
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Blue: -whipes tear way- Squee! My first cliffy! Although I think it's kinda obvious who it is. Oh well
Plea-az review for the sake of my fragile couragousness! It's the purply-blue button down there!
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