This is a story of three friends who accidentally find themselves in Jaks world; the only problem is; now they have to figure a way back home. In addition, they came to Jaks world not by the playstation game, but by a mysterious mishap.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Hey everyone! SilverEyes18 and I are rewriting her story Two Idiots and A Genius

SilveryEyes18: Yeah, I guess you were right this story did need a little more done to it.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah, I know I was right. (smiles)

SilveryEyes18: Anyways, I hope you all like the revisions we did and this will be going under Moon-Angel-Eyes's file...She sortta bought it.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah, I gave you my Jak X racing game and you gave me your story...I think that was fair...

SilveryEyes18: I'm just wondering if this story will receive the same amount of reviews as I got for it.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Which was?

SilveryEyes18: 75 reviews...(smiles)

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Let's continue the story shall we?

Chapter 1: How It All Began

(Original POV)

"..and that's how this machine works." Anita finished. For the past two hours she had been explaining to her best friend and little sister how her Wonder Machine worked.

Anita was a brain you could say. She was very smart, but also very beautiful. She has light blue eyes, silver hair with blonde highlights, which was all-natural. At first glance you'd think she was an older woman, but no, she's 18 years old, and 5ft. 10" tall. She may be a bit odd, but other than that she's a normal teen, with normal teen problems. She also loved carrying her backpack around with her, which had who knows what in it.

"Hey, ummm….Sis?" Krista asked, "Are you sure it's not a warp gate?"

Krista was Anita's little sister, well she wasn't all that little, 16 years old to be more precise and is 5ft. 6" tall. She has violet-blue eyes, black hair with silver highlights throughout her hair. At first you'd think she was into all that gothic religion and all, but she's not. It just the way she was and the way she shows her personality to the world.

"…A what?" Anita asked

"She said…" began Renee

Renee was Anita's childhood friend. The two of them had known each other since they were little. They were life long best friends. She has blue-green eyes that look like cat eyes, but weren't, reddish-orange hair. At first glance you'd think she just came out of a Scifi movie, but she's real. She also could be mistaken for a model. She's the oldest out of the three, 20 years old and she's 5ft. 8".

"I know what she said". replied Anita; "Of course I'm sure. Although I have no idea what your talking about."

"Argg". groaned Krista as she began explaining what a warp gate was. "A warp gate is a gate that teleports you from one place to another, including to different worlds. It's all in my game."

"What game?" asked Renee

"My Jak 2-3 game." she said, "You wanna play them?"

"Sure." said Renee, "Umm…Anita are you…"

"No! I'm not gonna watch or play it."

"Why?" asked both girls. They just never learn.

"Because that game wa made so that people without lives could have their brains fried all day long, while playing it on the TV." She said and continued, "Not only that…"

"Let's go before she gets into another lecture." Krista whispered. Renee just nodded in agreement.

1 hour Later

"…that is why I won't play video games." Finished Anita. When she turned around she noticed that they were gone. She instantly got mad, but she went on to do the rest of the building on her Wonder Machine. After all, all it needed was a double-wide-sonic-twist-axel put on and would work. And hopefully it would do what it's supposed to do. Hopefully that is….

2 Hours Later

"That was fun" said Renee

"Yeah, I never knew I could get finished those games in 3 hours. Without interruptions." said Krista.

"The only part I hated was when Ashelin kissed Jak." said Renee, "That's the only part I hate."

"Yeah, they should've had Jak kiss Keira." said Krista, "Now that would've been a great ending."Both girls were headed back to the room to start playing JakXRacingwhen….

"Aaahhh!"

Both girls ran to Anita's room/Lab up in the spacious Attic.

"Anita!" yelled Renee

"Sis!" yelled Krista

"Are you okay?" asked both girls through the door.

"Help Me!" yelled Anita

Then the door suddenly broke in half and a strong wind sucked the girls into the room. The Wonder Machine had somehow created a portal the size of the roof of the house. All the girls were hanging onto the desks or the bad, but within mere minutes all three girls were sucked into the machine.

After the girls vanished the Wonder Machine shut down, only to never be used again…or was it?

Minutes later, across the galaxy on an unknown planet.
"They should be arriving any minute men". said a very deep male voice, "Be ready for anything."

Suddenly sounds of thunder exploded throughout the city, then a crashing sound. "Wow, what the hell happened?" asked Renee. Suddenly she looked around her only to have her jaw drop. Krista looked over to her and then at what she was looking at, only to have her jaw drop as well.

Anita looked around them and said, " Dorthy, I don't think we're in Kansas anymore". She then looked at the others and said, " Where the heck are we?"

Both Krista and Renee said," Welcome to hell, a.k.a. Haven City."

"And where is Haven City?" She asked

"In Jak 2 the game." They replied

Suddenly the girls were surrounded by several armed me. One walked forward while saying," By order of Baron Praxis, you three are under arrest."

"What for?" asked Anita

He didn't answer her question; instead he said, "Grab Them!"

Suddenly Krista pushed Anita off of the platform and yelled," RUN ANITA!"

SilveryEyes18: Well how was that for a first chapter? Good or Bad? Was there enough deception in it?

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Well I thought it was good...We even added a little bit to it...(smiles)

SilveryEyes18: Yeah, I guess you were right this story did need a little more done to it.

Moon-Angel-Eyes: Yeah, I know I was right. (smiles) Don't worry, next chapter will be completly different.

SilveryEyes18: Please review